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Posted: 10 years ago
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humara naya adda mubarak aap ko Babbie 😆
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



ok

mein bhi apne thread par thank u's chipkaa rahi hoo

i updated today na,,


😃 haan dekha maine,,,
khoob hard work kiya hei ..
mast update hei..ad to lajawab..😃
mera comment abhi baki hei..😛

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Originally posted by: dqno1

humara naya adda mubarak aap ko Babbie 😆


😆 Hi avi...
ye to sabka adda hei..sirf mera nahi.. 😃
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Originally posted by: singh24


😃 haan dekha maine,,,
khoob hard work kiya hei ..
mast update hei..ad to lajawab..😃
mera comment abhi baki hei..😛



tum pm check nahi karthi na

is liye bola😆
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😃 Pg ..5 per 2 posts ki jagah dena plzz...
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



tum pm check nahi karthi na

is liye bola😆


😆 lekin trd per jaroor jati hu,,
tum chahe bhool jao apna trd mai nahi bhoolti..😆

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Thanku so much ...

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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 43
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4220267/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-5-updated-pt-43-pg-121-17th-nov


Part - 44

All we having their dinner silently , only Manu was chirping nd asking Qs to Maan nd Geet nd they wr replying him ,, both Geet nd Maan wr brawling in their hearts nd minds ,, one side Geet was felt good seeing her small kid happy nd contented with d feeling of family ,, d happiness which she never cherish in her life, but she was worried too about this closeness ,, on d other side Maan was dying to ask about Manu's dad nd fearing Geet's reaction ,, he didn't want to lose them but d things which wr nailing his mind wr forcing him to ask .

Manu played for few time with Maan after dinner nd Geet finished her work ,, she was waiting when Maan left for his place ,, she cn't even say him to go ,, how cd she ,, after all he was like a family nd d son of her God father ,, she spent yrs in their home nd she lived in KM with her son like a family member ,, making Manu sleep in her lap she tried to remind him .

Geet: aauummm,, wo where is ur new house mr Khurana?

Maan: that was just 2 lanes before this lane ,, near d cent markt place .

Geet: O ,, that good , nd how u manage their alone ?

Maan: aauumm, there is a servant for few hr in eve for work nd rest i'll manage .

Manu: mommy , uncle won't live with manu ?

Geet became speechless what to say ? they lived in KM , but she was hesitating to keep him in her home for long ,, Maan understood her dilemma .
Maan: No baby ,, my co gave me a home to live nd work .

Manu: big house ,, like that , that in , del,,del...

Maan: Delhi ,, baby.

Manu: yeah ,,,, that big ,, mommy we'Il go thele .

Maan: sure baby ,, that is urs house too,, we'll go .

Geet: Manu , sleep baby ,, no more talk.( she started patted her head slowly to make him sleep)

Geet: if u need any help u cn tell me Mr Khurana ,, it doesn't look nice that u faced troubles when i'm here ,, I don't want to make uncle nd aunty worried for u when i'm here.

Maan: I know Geet , u cn do anything for them ,, thanks a lot .

Geet: i'm obliged ,, ur parents too did a lot for me nd made my future .

Maan: that's why u returned that money which dad gave u when u came here ,, he was hurt Geet ,, why did u do that ?

Geet looked down ,, she knew she had to face this q from Yash nd Rashi too ,, but she was helpless at her place too ,, she cdn't take that money ,, d timely help was enough for her .

Geet: mr Khurana ,, that was a timly help for me nd I didn't have anybody exept uncle , I asked for this help nd he gave me that time ,, now i'm capable nd sound so what's wrong if I returned that back ,,i got many things which i got from there nd cn't pay back ,, u too is working nd earning for d family .

Maan: that is a diff thing Geet .

Geet: yes , for u nd ur family it'll be a diff things bcoz it's a family matter ,, ur family ,, nd i'm out of that ,, only a charity case.

Maan: no ,, plzz don't take it like that ,, Geet plzz ,, don't think in that way ,,mera matlab wo nahi tha ,, tum bhi us family ka hissa ho aur dad n mom tumhe bhi utna hi pyaar kerty hei jitna mujhe aur Annie ko.

Geet: it's OK mr Khurana ,, kahane mei aur hone mei ferk hota hei ,, such kya hei aap bhi janty hein aur mai bhi .

Maan: Geet , time change nd fix many things ,, u know that nd experienced that ,, u r a mother now nd faced lots of changes in life .

Geet: hummm,, nd witnessed many changes in u nd ur family too .

Maan looked down knowing where she was indicating ,, not mom n dad's but she was surly surprized with his changed behaviour for her ,, she was getting right but didn't know d fact behind this change .

Manu slept nd Geet excused her to make him sleep in d bedroom ,, she was waiting when he said to leave for his house ? She was back after settling sleeping manu in his baby cot ,, to know his intention she asked .

Geet: do u want some coffee or anything ?

Maan who was searching d proper chance to talk her,, he waited for manu to sleep ,, he nodded in a yes nd Geet went in d kitchen ,, he didn't want coffee but to boost his courage he want a platform ,, his heartbeats wr uneven nd felt churn in his stomach fearing Geet's reaction ,, Geet was back in few min nd handed him d mug of hot brewing black coffee nd sat opposite to him nd started sipping her ,, Maan took few sips nd cleared his throat .

Maan: i'm sorry but I want to ask u something.

Geet: what ?

Maan: wo ,, Geet it's related to manu ,, who is manu's father ?

Geet became numb ,, she was staring at him ... Why again he started thes Qs ?she didn't reply nd trying to find proper ans for his Q .

Maan: I know it's hurting u but there wr many things which forced me to ask .. who is manu's dad nd where is he?

Geet gulped nd composed herself: mr Khurana I told u earlier that I don't want to talk on this matter , so pleezz.

Maan: Geet it's imp for me ,, ur lies forced me to ask about this .

Geet (lil angry) : my lies ,, nd when I lied mr Khurana ?

Maan: Geet u said that Manu is 2yr old but he is more then 2nd half ,, I have his DOB .

Geet gulped hard but reply curtly: what big in that mr Khurana ,, I casually replied ,, if some one ask u about ur age, will u give ur full age means ur years , months , days nd hrs ? Why it matters to u ?

Maan: Geet his age showing that u wr ,, ,,, I mean ,, when u came US u wr preg...

He hesitated to say that word nd looked down ... who was he Geet ?

Geet turned her face , she was chewing her lower lip to supresse her inner pain,, d air became heavier between them ,, she understood that he got Manu's DOB for papers nd suspecting that she was in love when she left India ,, she didn't want to talk about all that ,, that was a painful phase of her past ,, there was no use nd future ,, she is happy with her kid nd now she was away from all who didn't like her ,, now she didn't want to rule her life by other .

Geet cleared her throat : mr Khurana ,, that was my past nd very painful too so plzz don't try to dig d roots ,,these r very personal Qs nd I don't want to share with any one .

Maan: Geet ,, plzz it's needed for me to know ,, who was he ?

Geet: no,, u don't have to know ,, this is my life nd I don't like if abybody intrude in it .

Maan: Geet , plzzz ,, for god shake ,, it's hurting me . ( he came near Geet nd knelt near her )


Precap ---- tough side of Geet ...

Part - 45



sorry for mistakes ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manu ki wajah se sab normal dikhana padta hai

Geet ko bhi na chahte hue bhi sab sehna pad raha hai

Apne bacche ke liye kitna kar rahi hai

Maan should give her space ut keep her near

loved it
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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😆 kisne mana kiya ki tum nahi koi aur hei..

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