MG #2 - Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon/th#3added - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
maan mu geet
after knowing she
have kids
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#82
interesting teaser! Oh no mu! Pls dnt get Maan to marry again! update soon
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maan aisa maat kar...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Teasers are certainly making me feel worried
Maan is prepared to marry Shargun and he also says that Geet is married but I thought Geet ...uff now what's gonna happen

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teaser
now what new misunderstanding?
cont soon dear...
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Part 14

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Geet : dad mein yaha nhi rhehna chahti

Mein maan ke pass na shi

Par aapne phle wale ghar mein toh rh sakti hu

Dad : kyun nhi beta

Hum aaj hi waha firse shift ho jaayenge

**********

She reached to malik house with the children...

Abhimaan : mumma aap yaha rhti thi phle

Geet : ha beta

Mehar : mom apna room dikahyo na

Nanu khte hai

Aapka room bhut hi acha hai

Geet : chalo

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She opened this door after 5 years, but everything placed at exact place where she left... She touched the wall, her photo frames, some college time, some after meeting maan , her marriage pictures... & many more...

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Geet

Mein pakka 5 bje tak aa jaayunga

.

Maan dad ko bura lagenga

.

Geet mein dad se baat kar chukka hu

Upar bs tumhe batane aaya tha

.

Jb fasla kr hi liya hai

.

Tum gussa kyun kr rhi ho

.

Maan abhi humari shaadi huyi hai

Aur ek aap hai

Jb dekho office bs

.

Geet kyun mujhe asa lag raha hai

I lost my friend somewhere

.

Sorry maan

Aap jaaiye

.

Sorry maan

Hurting you so deeply

.

Mom

Mumma

Geet : ha beta

Mehar : aap kisse baat kr rhi hai

Geet : kissi se nhi

Aap dono ko room pasand aaya

Abhi : yes mumma

Mumma ye itni saari pics kiski hai

Geet : mumma ki hai

Aayo mein tum dono ko batati hu

Ye hai tumahre samrat uncle

Manish maama

Gunjan aunty

Mehar : mom ye sb kaha hai

Geet : pata nhi bte

Mom bimar thi na

Contact mein nhi hai isliye ye sb

Abhi : mumma ye uncle toh TV pe aate hai

Aap inhe bhi jaanti hu

Geet : ye salman hai

My best friend

Both children moved to next frame & shocked to see him with her mumma...

Mehar : mom ye

Geet : mehar , abhi

Ye aapki mom ki zindagi mein sbse important person hai

Maan

Maan Singh khurana

Tum dono ke dad

Abhi : dad

Geet : ha

Dad

Mehar : par naanu ne kaha

Humara unke aur mom ke alawa aur koi nhi hai

Geet : asa nhi hai beta

Aapke dad hai

Daadi hai

Daadu hai

Par daadi bhi hai

Abhi : nanu ne jhooth kaha

Geet : nhi beta

Mehar : wo humare sath kyun nhi hai

Geet : meri wajh se

Aapki mom ne

Aapke dad ka dil dukhaya

Abhi : nhi

My mumma is best

Mehar : mom

Wo

Nanu : bs bacho ab bhut baatein ho gyi

Apni mom ko rest krne do

Abhi : hume mumma ko kuch batana hai

Nanu : baad mein

Geet : dad rhehne do na

Nanu : bilkul nhi

Tumhari medicine ka time ho gya hai

Tum wo lo

Aur rest kro

Baki ki baatein baad mein

Kal hume hospital bhi jaana hai

Tumhare check up ke liye

Abhi : hum bhi chalenge mom ke sath

Geet : of course beta

***********

Another side maan hire detective ... 24 hours passed but he gets to know nothing...

********

At early morning , maan know about geet , she come back to previous house ...
********

Maan reached to malik house...

Maan : geet se milna hai

Caretaker(CT) :- abhi madam ghar pe nhi hai

Aap kaun

Maan : Maan Singh Khurana

Kaha gyi hai geet

CT : sir mujhe nhi pata

Koi message hai

Toh mujhe de dijiye

Maan : mein baad mein aata hu

********

Maan call someone & tell "pata karo abhi geet kaha hai"

Then cut the call

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Geet aaj mujhe tumse milna hi honga

5 saal bit gye

Bhut se sawal hai mere is dil mein

Jo mujhe tumse puchne hai

Mujhe manane ke bajaye

Tum mujhse kyun rooth gyi

.

Itne saal mein tum thi kaha

.

**********

Arjun : maan I need help

Maan : bol na

Arjun : yaar meri meeting abhi aur chalengi

Tu kya Arohi ki report collect kr lenga doctor se

Aaj laani jaroori hai

Doctor kuch dino ke liye bahar jaa rhi hai

Maan : ok

Arjun : thanks

Maan : doctor or hospital name message krde

Arjun : ok

************

Nanu : geet , abhi

Tum parking area tak chalo

Mein medicine leke aaya

Geet : ok dad

.

Both going towards parking area , in mid abhi see big aquarium...

Abhi : mumma ruko

Geet : kya huya

Abhi : mumma kitna acha hai ye

Hum apne gahr pe bhi laayenge

Geet : jaroor beta

.

Abhi going to fall, but geet held her...

Geet : abhi

Abhi : mumma shoes lays khul gye

Geet bend & tied her shoe lays...

Abhi : thank you mumma

Abhi kissed her cheek & vice versa...

Abhi sees some reflection in aquarium...

Abhi : dad

Before he turns, some stretcher passed following some peoples, geet stand & held abhi tight...

Abhi : mumma

Dad

Geet sees front and froze see his angry hurt eyes...

She only whispers "maan"...

He left without saying any word...

*********

thank you mumma

.

Mumma

She married again & has a child too...

Kitni khush lag rhi thi wo

.

Wo apni zindagi mein kitni asaani se aage bd gyi

Aur mein

Whi khada hu

.

Geet bhut khel li tum

Ab aur nhi

********

Daadi am ready to marry with Shargun

I signed the divorce paper

.

All Family shocked to hear this from maan

Supriya try to ask from maan

Aap sb hi chahte the na

Hum India mein rhe

Mein dobara shaadi krlu

Ya fir geet ko is ghar mein leke aayu

.

Toh maine Shargun ko chun liya hai

Daadi : par maan

Aapne toh kaha tha

Aap geet ke alawa kissi aur ke bare mein nhi soch sakte

Maan : daadi mein aapki rakhi huyi condition hi puri kr raha hu

Mein geet ko chaha ke bhi is ghar mein nhi laa sakta

Supriya : par kyun

Maan : usne kissi aur se shaadi kr li hai

She is happy in own life with someone ...

Daadi : maan kya geet ne khud kaha aapse

Maan : daadi pichli baar nhi dekha tha

Par is baar maine khud dekha hai

She has child too...

Supriya : what

Daadi : maan bte

Suniye

Maan : daadi mujhe kuch der akele rhehna hai

Koi bhi please disturb na kare

***********

Annie : no aunty

Ye sch nhi ho sakta

Geet asa kaise kr sakti hai

Usne toh maan se divorce bhi nhi liya hai

Fir dusri shaadi

Aur bacha

.

Kaise

Jaroor koi galatfami huyi hai

Daadi : hume bhi yhi lag raha hai

Arjun : maan ne geet ko dekha kaha

Supriya : pata nhi

Mahesh : mein batata hu

Hospital mein

Arjun : maine hi maan ko waha beja tha

Annie : ek baar mein geet se mil paayu

Mahesh : jaroor mil sakti ho

Wo abhi apne gahr pe hi hai

Malik house mein

Arjun : uncle aapko kaise pata itna sb

Mahesh : maan ne jis detective ko hire kiya tha

Use pata laga

Annie : kuch aur bataya usne

Mahesh : kuch khas nhi

Geet ko kafi waqt ke baad delhi mein dekha gya hai

Pichle 5 saal se wo kaha thi

Abhi pata nhi lag paaya hai

Arjun : hum kyun na ye pata kare

Geet hospital mein thi kyun

Aur wo bacha geet ko mom kyun bula raha tha

Jis wajah se maan ko ye confusion huyi hai

Mahesh : hospital authority mein baat ki thi maine

Bhut he denied

Malik ne clearly mana kr rakha hai

Daadi : ab toh geet ke ghar hi jaana honga

Tbhi sch pata lag sakta hai

.

Koi khi nhi jaayenga

Supriya : par maan bte

Maan : mom

Maine mna kiya na

Daadi : maan abhi aap gusse mein hai

Shant dimag se sochiye

Precap : Past

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
😃 me first
awesome
geet back in her old house and said kids about maan
opsss maan nai geet ko mU karliya
aur shagun say shadi k liya haa bol diay
yeh maan nai agr geet ko dekha tha tuh ja kar us say mil nahi sakta thaaa😡
ab kiya hogaa
please is story ko continue karo please
cant wait

Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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#88
nice uodate hope yeh misunderstanding jaldhi hi clear ho jaye
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That's why
Should have asked
But you didn't
She didn't marry anyone else
Still your wife
Well not for long
Think about it
Kid could be his
But he didn't think that
Course not
What happened in past made him wary
Kids were gonna tell about meeting their dad
But couldn't
That's shame
Would have solved things
If that's possible
So we will finally know what she did
Something bad for sure

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