MG #2 - Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon/th#3added - Page 59

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Posted: 9 years ago
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read all parts again it is long time i haven't seen updates.part 21 was missed out, so now geet wants to win his heart first and letting him know about children afterwards.
here maan thinks she betrayed him and moved forward in her life, not ready to forgive her.
geet try to seduce him but he is not kneeling down.
Bahon mein chale aao
Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Yeh aaj ka nahin milan
Yeh sang hain umar bhar ka
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Chale hi jaana hain nazar churake yun
Phir thami thi saajan tumne meri kalayi kyu, haan
Chale hi jaana hain nazar churake yun
Phir thami thi saajan tumne meri kalayi kyu

Kisi ko apna banake chod de
Aisa koi nahin karta
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Kabhi kabhi kuch to kaho piya humse
Aye, kam se kam aaj to khulake milo zara humse
Kabhi kabhi kuch to kaho piya humse
Aye, kam se kam aaj to khulake milo zara humse

Hai raat apni, jo tum ho apne
Kisi ka phir humhe dar kya
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Yeh aaj ka nahin milan
Yeh sang hain umar bhar ka
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
this song suits quite to their currant situation.
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Superb update! Geet's first day after marriage. She told everyone that she didn't made the halwa only because of Maan. But now she is really trying to get attention of Maan. But five years is a long time and her past mistakes are keeping away Maan to trust her again. Missed Mehar and Abhi and their cute talks...
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she had hurt him to deep
n it wont heal so soon
will she be able to mend the distrust in their relation
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Part 22

Whole night passed, new day come...full night maan not come back in room...and she passed whole night in waiting him and remembering in past moments...

Geet : oh no 8'o clock

Phle hi din tune geet late kr diya

************

At 9 o clock, all sits together for breakfast...

Maan : mom

Breakfast shuru kre

Supriya : wo abhi geet nhi aayi hai maan

Wo aa jaaye

Maan : mom

Mujhe toh smjh nhi aata

Aap sb kyun usse wapas yaha leke aaye ho

Mahesh : maan she is your wife

Ye uska ghar hai

Usse humesha se yhi hona chaiye tha

Maan : dad

She never going to change

So rhi hongi abhi tak

Supriya : maan wo kitchen mein hai

Aapke liye breakfast bna rhi hai

Maan : new drama

.

.

Geet : sorry being little late

Mahesh : it's ok beta

Savitri : geet

Come here and sit beside maan

Geet : hm

.

She come and sit next to maan ...

Geet : maan

I make your favorite pasta

.

She serves in his plate and said maan taste krke bataiye

Kaisa bna hai

Maan take one spoon of pasta and said its nice

Is baar kaunse hotel se order kiya hai

Mujhe uska address jaroor message krna

Abki baar hum apni company ki ek meeting waha jaroor rakhenge

After all meri wife ne jagah suggest ki hongi na

Jaha ka khana kafi acha hai

After all

Geet : maan

Is baar maine khud banaya hai

Maan : kabhi sch bhi bol liya kro

Har waqt jhooth acha nhi hota

Savitri : maan

Bs kriye ab

Maan : whi toh mein geet se kh raha hu daadi

Ye bs kre

Ye drama

Savitri : maan ek lafz aur nhi ab

Geet : daadi inhe khehne dijiye

I did wrong

Yhi meri saza hai

maan : mom mera breakfast ho gya hai

am going

geet : maan aap apna breakfast pur kijiye

mein hi chali jaati hu

savitri : geet

maan

aap dono mein se koi khi nhi jaa rha hai

phle dono chup - chap breakfast khaiye

**********

Flashback in

Supriya : geet bte

Aaj aapko apne hatho se sbke liye kuch mitha banana honga

Geet : mitha

You mean sweet

Supriya : waise toh ghar mein sbko

Alag- alag sweet dish pasand hai

Par maan ko aloo ka halwa bhut pasand hai

Toh kyun na aap usse hi aaj shurat kre

Geet : hmm

Supriya : aapki help ke liye hum Deepak ko yhi chod rhe hai

.

Supriya left...

Geet : dam

.

You

Deepak : ji madam

Geet : you know how to make this halwa

Deepak : ji aapne kya kaha

Geet : uneducated

Mein ye puch rhi hu

Tumhe khana banana aata hai

Deepak : ji nhi

Wo sb toh nakul ji dekhte hai

Geet : why she left him

If he know nothing

Deepak : aapne kuch kaha humse

Geet : aap jaaiye yaha se

Deepak : aapki madad

Geet : jaayooo

.

.

Stupid lady

Jisse kuch nhi aata

Usse chod gyi mere liye

And how she think

I make food for all

Maine kbhi apne ghar mein ek glass tk nhi uthaya hai

And she wants

I made food for all

And wear this heavy dresses like daily soaps bahu

.

.

Its irritating

Totally

.

.

She dialed firstly mohit number then manish...put the call on conference...

Mohit : yaar sone de

Geet : you both listen me carefully

I want aloo halwa now

Manish : yaar tu pagal hai kya

Geet : I don't want excuses

Mujhe ye sweet dish chaiye

Matalb chaiye

You both have 15 minutes

Your time start now

Mohit : yaar hum kaha se laaye

Geet : apen gahr ke cook se pucho

Hotel mein pata kro

Kuch bhi kro

Mujhe bs chaiye

.

She cut the call...

*********

Manish : geet ye le tere halwa

Mohit : asa koi tera plan ho na

Atleast hume raat ko hi bta diya kr

Manish ; subh- subh doda diya tune

Geet : oh

Jaise mere mother in law ne mujhe raat ko bataya tha

Waise thanks

Now you both go

Usse phle koi tum dono ko dekhe

Mohit : he

Hume bhook lagi hai

Atleast hume breakfast toh krne de

Geet : you both gone mad

Go now

******

Maan sees this from little far, her friends come and hand over some packet...behind this he not hears anything... He goes behind her in kitchen and sees its sweet dish...she placing in bowl...

*******

All praised her sweet dish and give shagun to her...

Badi daadi saas : savitri apne maanu ki bahu dikhne mein hi sunder nhi hai bs

Kaam bhi jaanti hai ghar ka

.

Mujhe voti achi lagi

Savitri : ji didi

Supriya : badi maa

Ab aapko aaram krna chaiye

Thodi hi der mein aapki flight hai

BDS : hmm

Jitti rh geet putr

Ab jaldi se meri savitri ko par daadi bna de

Savitri : kya di

Abhi do din nhi huye hai inki shaadi ko

BDS : maine kya galat kh diya

Mein toh tujhe bhi meri tarah lucky banana chahti hu bs

Jisse issi janam mein

Swarg ki sone ki siddi mil jaaye

Savitri : di

Aap aaram kro

BDS : jaaru mein

Bs

Maan : geet

Ye

Geet : maan ek minute

Mujhe aap sbse kuch khehna hai

Supriya : kaho beta

Geet : mein ye sb gifts nhi rkh sakti hu

Savitri : kyun geet

Ye sagun ke hai

Geet : daadi

Sagun toh jb bnta na

Tb mein ye dish banati

.

Maine nhi banayi hai ye

Wo daadi

Sorry

.

Supriya : ye aap kya kh rhi hai

Geet : sch mom

Mein aap sbko yu jhooth nhi kehna chahti thi

Par mein ye nhi chahti thi

Badi daadi kuch kahe mere baare nein.

.

.

Mein dheere- dheere sb sikh lungi

Savitri : ye kisne banaya hai

Geet : daadi

Mohit ke cook ne banaya hai

.

Wo mujhe khana banana nhi aata

.

Tears fall down from her eyes...

.

Par mein jaroor sikh lungi

Supriya : bs itni si baat beta

Aap hume kitchen mein hi kh deti

Toh hum aapki help kr dete

.

Geet : mom

Wo mein kaise khti

Mujhe us waqt smjh nhi aa rha tha

.

Aur ab mujhse jhooth nhi kaha jaa rha tha

Savitri : its ok

Now you go own room

And take rest

Aur ye sagun rakhiye aap

Geet : par

Supriya : kaha na humne

Geet : ji

Savitri : maan take her in room

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Geet : maan

Are you angry on me

Maan : no geet

Geet : sorry maan

Maan : sorry tumhe nhi geet

Mujhe hona chaiye

Geet : aapko kyun maan

Maan : geet

Maine tumhe mohit se packet lete huye dekh liya tha

Then I go behind you

And see you serving dish in bowl

.

Mujhe laga

Tum

Geet : maan aapko laga

Mein family se jhoothi praises le rhi hu na

.

Ydi maan aapne dekha tha

Ussi waqt puch liya hota na

Yu mujhe galat smjhna

.

Maan : no geet

Geet : maan

I never want anyone in your family dislike me

Bs isliye kiya

Par maine sbko sch bhi bta diya na

.

Aap kaho toh

Mein badi daadi ko bhi kh aati hu

Bs

Maan held her wrist and wipes her tears...

Maan : geet

She placed head on his chest and hugged him tightly... he don't hug her back and not push too...

.

(Think) : thank god

I see you in garden

Thanks to my this sari specially

Na ye halazti un kato mein

Aur na mujhe ye pata chalta aap waha hai maan

Your eyes tell me

You see mohit and this packet too

.

You follow me and sees sweet dish too

.

Due to you

I have to tell this truth your family

But this happen for good

Nhi toh ye family

Har dusre din mujhse

Kitchen me bs kaam hi krwati rhti

Aur mere saare sapne

Us gas mein jhal jaate

.

.

Geet : maan hugged me back please

She removed her hands from his waist and look in her eyes...

Maan I know

You not accept me as your wife

But maan

Now we are married na

And I need my friend

My husband

I don't want to lose you

Maan : geet

Mein hu humesha tumahre sath

Geet : fir ye duri kyun mujhse

Maan ; geet we both need space

Tum hi dekho na

Phle hum bs friends the

And in these few days

All things changed

And we become husband - wife

Geet : so that means

I lost my friend

Maan : no

Geet : so why you not behave like friends with me nowadays

Maan : geet asa nhi hai

Geet : listen me maan

I want my friend back firstly

Then I want my husband too ... Soon

She winks towards him...he smiled seeing her smile...

That's like my maan

Flashback out

Precap : celebrate KarvaChauth with some twists WinkEvil Smile

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awsemmpast effecting present maan not ready to believe geet
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Geet prepared breakfast for Mann he told it's nice asked her to message the restaurant name but she told she prepared
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Originally posted by: idunno

chapter-13
so maan don't want to give divorce he tried to search her, it means he still loves her.geet was in coma and recently she came out of it he admit hr mistake to her father and father console her that he will not allow maan to go to new york ill he cant patch up between two.


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Originally posted by: idunno

read all parts again it is long time i haven't seen updates.part 21 was missed out, so now geet wants to win his heart first and letting him know about children afterwards.

here maan thinks she betrayed him and moved forward in her life, not ready to forgive her.
geet try to seduce him but he is not kneeling down.
Bahon mein chale aao
Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Yeh aaj ka nahin milan
Yeh sang hain umar bhar ka
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Chale hi jaana hain nazar churake yun
Phir thami thi saajan tumne meri kalayi kyu, haan
Chale hi jaana hain nazar churake yun
Phir thami thi saajan tumne meri kalayi kyu

Kisi ko apna banake chod de
Aisa koi nahin karta
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Kabhi kabhi kuch to kaho piya humse
Aye, kam se kam aaj to khulake milo zara humse
Kabhi kabhi kuch to kaho piya humse
Aye, kam se kam aaj to khulake milo zara humse

Hai raat apni, jo tum ho apne
Kisi ka phir humhe dar kya
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda

Yeh aaj ka nahin milan
Yeh sang hain umar bhar ka
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh

Bahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
this song suits quite to their currant situation.


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