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Posted: 10 years ago

here is the last part...!!!

enjoy the update!!


PART 7


By the end of the week they were behaving typically like a couple.. Mishty was falling for Mk more. She could feel that her love was reciprocated by him too. His eyes ,his gestures spoke that but his lips they never proclaimed his love ever.

They were talked about in the whole campus. The duo were seen alone many a times. Mishty's sudden involvement with college's heart throb definitely attracted eye balls. For Mk , he was bothered bout these artificial things he was still the same reserved and just quite types..but the only change in his life was mishty. He was little more expressive with her...sadly not in expressing his love.

They were together for nearly a month now. For mishty she was loving this new feeling and the new person in her life. They used go out for movies sometimes on dates too. They never missed family functions where they still played hide seek in front their parents.

The acceptance she got for their relation by her girls made her feel overwhelmed. Life was perfect for her.

One day she was walking pass the corridor making her way to library. They had subjects and were in different field so to manage their time they would meet in library where they would study... It was more of drooling session. Or perhaps in the canteen during lunch time with her frnds and in between their lectures through messages and chats.

Well messages..it wasn't lovey dovey ones...but just smileys. Both dint feel the need to say anuthing or talk about anything.

She peeped in library and ran her eyes all over the place trying to find Mk.

He is not here...kaha gaya hoga... She thought.

She messaged him

Where r u...??

Tapped her foot waiting for his reply

He replied in less than a minute

In room 301

She smiled widely...and turned behind walking as fast as she could.


she paused in front of the room where he was in. Straightening her dress and smiled and was about to open the door when she heard..

I..know we r going really good thanks... Mk said smiling

U guys r really the eye candid in the college Mk...but honestly m happy that u found her.. His frnd jay said...jay was his frnd from Switzerland. kind of his best frnd Mk was really open to him about his life.

Thank you..i don't think about their talks u knw that

Ya...but mishty well I never knew that u and she u both could be a couple as u both are opposite to each other.. is she understanding ??...um do u guys really have a thing

Yaa...She really cares for me...infact she understands me a lot...without even me saying anything to her he said blushing

Whoa..thats amazing..so when did it all started..u never told me..

She told me that she always had a thing for me..since childhood...can u believe it..she loved me for so many years..and dumb ass like me..never guessed it he said softly

Ohh..childhood love huh..thats interesting u love her..dont u...??U fell for her love

i..I..hmm..Mk smiled sweetly...yes I do..How could I not fall for her..She is so caring understanding. And importantly she never lied to me..U knw when I probed her y she kissed me...she confessed her love..she could have lied...and voided the topic but she dint...

and that's y U could bring ur self to think about her...jay said

Mk nodded she is most beautiful thing happened in my life... Our kiss I'll cherish it life long

Where is she...Mk??M dying to meet her now..

Mk laughed I pinged her she will be here in a moment...

Okay

Tears spilled through eyes seeing his love .She never imagined that he could actually fell for her...She thought its just a regular bf and gf thing happening between them. Though for her it was beyond that ..But always felt that for him it may be not love. Unfortunately he did mean a lot to him.

His trust his confidence everything broke her into tears. She gasped squeezing her eyes tight hating her self. She somehow held herself and ran out .

At home

Mishty thumped on ground crying bitterly recalling mK words. He believed everything what he said and that's y decided to giver a chance. But she..she was such a heartless creature she betrayed him. She hid the fact that it was all a bet...the kiss which meant so much to him was a part of a silly dam bet.

She sobbed loudly...

I don't deserve u Maanu...I m nothing but a cheap bitch who tricked u in this relationship...infact m the worst thing that happened to u...really worse than worse...

_______

"poor mishty" cidel said...

" she is feeling so guilty about whatever she did to mk..'" vani said

" that y u shouldn't lie..." fariya said...

" shshhh guys it's a critical situation ..zip ur mouths...aunty plz continue.." vandy said desperately


" well after that mishty went onto depression state..she wouldn't come out fo her house just cried all day in her room feeling terribly guilty.."

"And mk??" cutie asked

" Mk tried contacting her but she had completely scorned to reply any one...ohh sorry did I tell u..Mk was suppose to leave the city and go back to Switzerland for his higher studies.,.."geet said

" whattt??????????" they all said shockingly..

" relax girls...yes..mishty wasn't aware of this..as Mk thought to give this piece of information as a surprise...Mishty knew his subject of interests as once he did mention about that and she was glad that he shared this with her ...but had no idea where u would wana pursue them"

" when was he leaving.." cutie said

" he was supposed to leave the next week..."

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MK walked out dejectedly out of her house. It was 5th time he visited her place in order to meet her. But her parents informed him that she was out of town. Mishty and told them not to tell anyone of her presence here. Poor parents couldn't go against her seeing their daughter's condition.

Kate, Mahi, Kamna couldn't meet her too. They knew that she had disconnected herself from the world also warned them not to tell anyone or approach Mk . they were so worried for her but were helpless in front of her.

Back at mishty each second without talking or meeting him was getting impossible for her. Though she had completely backed out of this relation she carved for him, for his voice. But she had prepared herself for this. Its better to live without his love than bearing his hatred. Once he knows that she lied him...he will eventually hate her. She dint had wits to face that.

Her heart was aching badly and she was torn out.

It was next morning when kamna called her at landline...

" mishty Mk is going Switzerland..its nearly 20th time he has begged us to disclose where u are..sweety y u doing this to ur self...??he really loves u..."

Mishty closed her eyes in pain listening her words

" love??...he doesn't knw that I cheated him...when he'll be exposed to his truth he will ate me.."

Mahi took the receiver from kamna

" mishty he is leaving...u don't even want to meet him...??"

"..i..i..." she kept down the receiver running back in her room crying.

"she cut the call "mahi said with a sigh

"I hope everything gets back to normal i cant see our mishty like thiis" kamna said..

Mk was glancing at the airport waiting for mishty to come. He was tapping his foot in nervousness. He still hand dropped his guns down...still waited for her to meet him.

" u wait here..i'll get the formalities in done,," Mk's dad said

Mk nodded...and his dad moved to the counter.

He was feeling suffocated in here and hence came outside the airport to breath in some air. He went back side.

He called her once again ...Stangley he heard the ringtone for her cell

He looked sideways ...holding his cell in one hand and then turned which made him froze in his place...

" mishty..." he uttered in shock.

There she was with a small smile and tears in her eyes. She looked completely wrecked.

Before he could say anything...she rushed to him ...hugging him tight. She tried hard to let go the feelings pent up in her hear of him. But couldn't her heart deceived her and could no longer bear this. Finally she decided to at least attempt telling the truth to him. Because he deserved to known every bit of this..

Maan took a couple of seconds to realize her torn state and importantly her tears...She cried hugging him thinking it may possibly be the last time she is hugging him.

" mishty...shhh..wht happened " he asked worriedly cocooning her in his arms..

Tears flowed down her cheeks she tighten her hold..

"mk..i..i...want...to say...something to u.." she said in between her hiccups..

Mk nodded helpessly still unable to digest it..he tried to part her but she pleaded

" don't..please...just hear me..out...plz.."

" baby I will..but ur condition..is...what happened to u..is everything alight" he said in a worried voice brushing her hair in comforting manner.

She couldn't hide anymore. Her emotions were at peak..

" Mk..i..i lied to u...that..day when I kissed ...u..u..it was..part fo a bet...and...and to cover it...up...I lied again...that..i love u...

But...But...i..I.."

She stopped as she felt him loosening her hold . Her thoughts were true her nightmares of MK hating her was coming true. And sadly she couldn't help it.

Mk parted her forcefully staring her...in anger..

And then happened which dint expect...at all..

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Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😲😲
ds is last part...m schkd
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Posted: 10 years ago
oye kidhr gyi...m dien out of suspnse...
give d epilogue
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Posted: 10 years ago
last part is just suprb...loved it
beautflly wrrtn...loved evry emnts n flt mishty pain too
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Posted: 10 years ago

Guys please read the para after the epilogue...too!!

Epilogue


Mk famed her face and kissed her hard on lips...Mishty widen her eyes ...at his move. He swiftly entered his tongue inside her mouth latching in deep inside. He pulled her closer slipping his hand around her waist while she clutched her shirt.

They were at the back side in the parking lot so...luckily there were hardly any people.

He held her nape in one hand tilting it in proper angle to receive a better kiss while she just flowed in his passion. She was lost in the kiss , it was hard ,demanding with something which she couldn't understand.

__________

" this is edited for u guys...just knw that he kissed her softly.."

" but actually toh,,this happened" Geet said blushing imagining their kiss...

________

Mk broke the kiss when he felt her going breathless. He placed his forehead on hers and enveloping her in his arms. He licked her ...she quivered slightly. She hadn't opened her eyes...Mk stared at her lovingly and kissed her forehead.

Another tears slipped out...of eyes..

" mishty plz..dont.." Mk said remorsefully

" open u r eyes..." He demanded which was evident in his firm tone

She slowly opened her eyes

" y r u crying..." he said cupping her face..

" u...u r not angry...I told u all about the bet thing" she said innocently

" no..babes..how can I be angry on u...hmmm..??" he said with a small smile

Mishty stared him in confusion

" but...woh.."

Shhh Mk silenced her by keeping finger on her lips..

She quieten..immediately he gazed her lovingly which made her dip her head low blushing hard..

" Mishty...U hid that fact...but u aren't aware of my small little secret thing...i hope u will forgive me to for that.."

what thing??' she said looking him...

" Actually..u remember that day I ran away..when u said u loved him since childhood...ummm there is something more to it..." He said making a baby face

what more??'

" I ran away because u mirrored my feelings...that time and I couldn't control my heart" he smiling charmingly

" what?? I dint get u...' I mirrored ur feelings..ummm" she tried to understand his words...and the...widen her eyes

" matalb tum mujh se..." she made a o shape face

" umm..yes..i have loved u since childhood...I always have I always will..."

" gosh..u never told me...that"

" ya..babe because I thought u will never like a person like me..i dint fit in ur life..thats y...'

" aisa nahi hai...maanu" she said cutely cupping his cheek

Mk smiled at her innocence " I knw that now..baby..so when u came up to me...I knew u that wasn't true...but I couldn't stop my feelings for u...and hence I decided that.."

" decided to give me a chance...give this relationship a chance,,," she said smiling

Mk nodded" yes if we are to be together then we will be..and see we are now..."

" I love u "
Mishty said hugging him...

" I knw..that" he laughed when she hit him with her fist demanding a proper answer

" I love u too.,.."

__________

" aweee that was so cute" fariya said

" But mom...who jay and Mk ...kya scene tha??" cutie said

" Beta jay dint knw about Mk's little secret...but when he came to meet him..he sort of got to about his relations with a girl...and so Mk just told him few things not the whole truth..."

" he was protecting her right...he dint wanted anyone to disrespect her..telling them that she kissed him just for a bet...right??" Vani said

" whoa..thats absolutely correct...vani.." geet said ruffling her hair

" Phir kya hua dono ne parents ko bolkar shaddi Karli??" cidel said

" no beta..they were just 18 very young...and parents ko bhi nahi bola"

" toh phir kya hua aunty I mean ..i ll tell u mK dint leave for Switzerland..right?? they lived together...happy ending" vandy said

" no..beta..this was just a beginning happy ending to is phase ki hai..Mk went to Switzerland like he was suppose to"

" but phir kya hua...uske baad??" pooja asked curiously

" phir kya...life jaisi honi chayie waise thi..aur kya..."

but unka relationship"??? cutie asked

" beta. Relationship toh pyar trust pe hota hai..if u religiously follow this funda no one can breal ur relationship...and happy ending ka questions thoda complicated hai..

Life is a journey...yah ape bohot sare points ate hai..ups and downs hote hhai...so something u flair good and sometimes u don't..so aapka relationships ka life us par hi dependent hota...hai..

U knw that was a very young age...and uske baad unka love trust and understanding hi unhe life k sare cheezo ko face karke ka power and confidence dega..."

" hmmm" they all nodded understanding the depth of her words

" but isse yeh toh pata chal gaya na..ki first kiss is..."

" very very special...it was mishty's luck that she kissed Mk...aur ha yeh bhi ki kabhi ksisi se jhoot nahi bolna chayiee" pooja said

" haaa"

" ha our lies might hurt us and also the other person too,," cutie said

" good girls...ohh..mai toh bhul hi gayi..i have to make rotis chalo..before ur dad's home u guys enjoy.. m going.." geet said and stood to leave

" helllooo..girls.." maan said smiling as she entered the room..

" dad...' cutie jumped and ran to him hugging him..

" hey..my princess.." he kissed cutie...All the other girls gathered near him.

Geet shook her head...and left downstairs...

" who wants gifts???" maan said smirking...

" yeeehh..me" everyone shouted..

"Maan laughed and took out gifts for everyone...

" happy children day my princesses..." He wished all..

" wow...thanks .." they all beamed with happiness and hugged him

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Geet was in the kitchen making rotis when she felt two hands sliding down on her waist hugging her..

"maaan" she moaned when he kissed her neck... he inhaled her sweetie mush smell and whispered

" I missed u..."

Geet smiled.." acha subha tum kaam k liye gaye and just in 9 hrs u missed me ha ..anyway how was ur day...Did u meet Divya.(desire6)??

"Yeyy..i did" he said tightening his hold on her stomach and placing his face in the crook of her neck...

" she is one of the really good admirer I must say..."

I knw that I have read her comments on ur article she is really a great fan of urs...I liked all her comments about u "

" and a good person too..u knw and m glad that I met her...i dint knw that my article could affect someone so much..."

" hmm...acha " she said giggling when he slowly tickled her stomach..

" so..kya baate chal rai thi..upar girls k sath..hmmm"

" who...' she laughed...

kya hua.. " maan said parting a little and making her face him..

Geet wounded her hands around his neck while he pulled her closer..

" ur princesses wanted to know about first kiss...story...so.."

so..." He said looking in her eyes

" so..i told them our first kiss story..."

what...??" Maan said gasping...

" shhh.." geet said shushing him by placing her finger on his lips.." chup warna sab aa jaynege neeche..."

Maan kissed her finger and took edit back...blushing' maanu'

" tumhe sach mai sab bata diya??"

" nahi baba..maine names lag rakhe the..." She said smirking

" kya names diye the hume??" maan asked curiously

Geet giggled

" mishty and maanu..." she laughed seeing his expressions

" geet no way..thats my childhood name...and tum ne..unhe kyu bataya mere kya image rahegi unke mind mai...maanu sounds..so..so...' he cribbed

" are..baba...maine tumhaar maan disclose nahi kiya na...and mujh kuch aur ni sujh raha tha so I used that name..." she said patting his cheek..

hmmm achaaa...mishty acha naam hai na..tumhaara childhood name itna acha and mera..aisa " he said pouting

" maaan she hit his shoulder

" stop behaving like a kid...u r dad and too to of a 17yr old daughter...so behave like one..."

hmmm waise acha hua u dint say our names warna shocho kya bolta mai use..that her mom kissed me first and..actually kissed me first two times and then I kissed her...' he said pulling her closer...

" maaan tum na.." she said pinching him

He laughed a little and kept his head on hers..

They stayed like that for some time.

geet waise main eek baat tumhe nahi bataya...ab tak..."

" kya" she said looking up from his chest ..

" who us din canteen m I had heard about that bet when I was passing by..and isliyee I entered the canteen first "

" what??...haww..maan cheater mujhe lagta tha..ki I was so lucky..and thought that we were destined to be together..and tum ne..u cheater...u made me kiss u.." she wacked his arms

" areyy...how could I let anyone stole my frist kiss...ur first kiss..hmm? "he said raising his brows..

" and waise bhi I was completely cleaned bowled with ur kiss..it was just a small peck but it had made me shiver...isliye bhagna pada mujhe waha se.."

Geet shook her head and looked away putting

Maan smiled and pulled her closer holding her waist

Geet knotted her brows at him

" MRS. GEET MAAN KHUARANA we were destined to live together..and if we weren't ...still I would have bend it like beckham to get u with me..."

Geet giggled

" oohh..forcefully bhi ? hmmm??"

" nahi..baba..pyar se..hi lata tumhe apne pass ..."

Their moment broke with a loud noise that came from upstairs,,

Both sighed" chalo dekhte hai...ab kya kiya ladkiyo ne.." maan said offering her hand

She clashed his hand with and both left the kitchen..

Heyy guys it's a emotional moment for me...past few days..this story really made a special place in my heart..and I would really miss writing it..

I wana say two things..

One to my readers..thank u thank u ...for being with me through this..i m grateful to u all for reading this new concept and liking it too...

And to my all frnds whom I have included in this story..honestly I have soo lucky to have frnds like u...who are so close to me.

One day without Gf and with out u all...my readers my frnds is next to impossible for me.

M glad that this story bought small of ur faces..and that means a lot to me...

Love u all...

Sweta

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

oye kidhr gyi...m dien out of suspnse...

give d epilogue


sorry. .my net went down...Hehehehhe I have updated the epilogue ..sweeety!
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Posted: 10 years ago
misthy is so much in love with her handsome love this story u have written in a different style with all the members name awesome idea
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was indeed the most beautiful one di loved reading it aur will read again over the weekend as well😊
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wow so beautiful jitne soche the us se zyaada ache the i love it a lottt
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Originally posted by: soniaz121

misthy is so much in love with her handsome love this story u have written in a different style with all the members name awesome idea


thanks dear...glad u liked it!!!

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