Veni, Vidi, Vici - updated Part 9 page 27 17/2/ - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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the tour guide and the businessman - nice start
do continue whenever you get time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Replying to comments and then I'll update 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@DAZZLINDD: Thank you so much! Haha yes, you cannot have Maan Singh Khurana without a little anger but I plan to show him in a different light as (and if) the story progresses. He will not be as angry as the GHSP Maan Singh Khurana. 😊

@mishtypie: Thank you for your comment! I'm glad that made you laugh and you enjoyed it! 😊

@IsleOfCapri: Can I just say that I adore your username so much?! Anyways, thank you!😊

@Aparna3011: Thank you so much!😊

@Sporthy_smile28: Aw your comment made me smile so much! Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed!😊

@Flame_of_Forest: Thank you for your comment! I want to (and hopefully will be able to) show a different side of Geet, although it is similar to her character in GHSP- there will be evident differences. The title of the story is one of my favourite quotes by Julius Caesar, although the context does not directly apply to the story, the title will make more sense as the story progresses. Thank you so much! 😃

@_CookieMonster_: Thank you! 😊

@Drashtilove: Thank you!😊

@_Maneet_: Thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the next part

@divya22: Awww! Thank you so much, I appreciate that a lot. I😊 hope you enjoy the next part as well.😊

@khawishfan: Thank you so much! I will try and make this into an FF but I don't know if it will happen! I don't think I'll be writing an epilogue for petals because I like the ambiguous ending and with destined to love, I am still experiencing a writer's block. I'm so glad that you liked it! You're ongoing support means a lot to me, I really appreciate it and I hope you enjoy the next part! 🤗

@Clairvoyant20: Whenever I read back over your comment, it makes me smile! Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed that! I hope you will enjoy the next part as well.😳

@Kabslocks: Thank you! 😊

@punam2712: Thank you! I hope you enjoy part 2 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hawww Geet !
SHE WILL SEE IF SHE IS FREE!!!
Not done geet so not done...👎🏼

its was such a nice invite... hmm tulips u said right

ok coming to the part it was nice..
thanks for continuing...
loved ur narration ❤️

So... Waiting for the next!


Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnks for continuing n finding time for writing despite ur xams 😃

WONDERFUL UPDATE ( Misssed Maan tho)
So geet thought that Maan is nt interested
tulips ... ( so Maan is reallyy bend on impressing her )

arghhh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, I feel like strangling Geet ( who ll do tht ????? LOL i would have jumped in ☺️ )

It was a small update ( greedy us 😛) waiting for more

Edited by DAZZLINDD - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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She'd see if she were free tonight..
are..who can ignore such an invite..specially basket full of purple orchids from a handsome..😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part geet is enjoyng her mrng nd got a invite 4m maan though he hvnt mentiond his name bt she knew it was him😃
nd wts dis logic she was thinkng abt him nd nw he hv invitd she is thinkng dat if she in free den ill go
waitng 4 d nxt part dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my loving Geet's character full of life and such vibrant to her surroundings . She is thinking of Maan & well ;
his flowers arrive with a date proposal 😳 Go for it Geet , if she's busy it better be with Maan 😆
Lovely❤️
Edited by Clairvoyant20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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when she had decided let go the encounter with Maan...
when she had decided to cherish it only as one of the many memorable meetings that happen with several people around...
there comes the surprise invitation...

lovely update, waiting for their next meeting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part
geet waited for maan call but she didn't get it ...
she recieved a bouquet and attached with note informing her to come to minerva hotel at 7 pm she know who sent the letter but she is thinking wether she will be free or not...hope she goes there
eagerly waiting for the next part

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