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Posted: 10 years ago

.thanx vampy n naz fr such beautfl banner ...🤗
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i m hell nervous for this part...plss let me know if i did ohk job or any improvmnt needed...
@sanjhi...big updte fr u



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maan went inside the restaurant...bring all d memories back...

their first meeting then hw he proposed to her...


Flashback

After their first meeting...they exchanged their id of fb...she was not sure about giving no. to someone she just met her...

first thing he did was send her friend request n keep refreshing same page again n again to c if she is online or not as he had already checked her dp numerous time...she look so amazing...n finally that moment come...now she is his friend...he did a winning dance n get back to his lappy...n then just pinged her...

hi...then waited for her reply...n within a min he got his reply...

hi...hwz u?...he was too happy that day...n that was beginning of their friendship...n love for him...after chatting for hrs n talking on phone for 4 months ...he decided to propose her...n choose same restaurant where they met...

but he wanted to make it special for her...deep down he knows she is also in love with her...as after just 1 week they exchanged no. n there was no looking back...whenever they r free from their college...they r talking with each other...n share each n everything

so making it special is big deal for him...he searched net n even read lots of romantic novel too...but all in vain...he is not sure himself what he wanted n how he wanted to make special...then he decide to go one by one...choose song first...her fav obviously then gift n lastly a surprise

he called her to meet her at xyz place in evening around 7...till than he keep checking d arrangement...he used all his saving from his part time to make it special for her...

Then she walked in beautiful white top teamed up with black jeans n with min. make up...she looked mystified looking at the place...

n first thing she said was what's u planning maan...

i looked at her shocked...n thought...lo gyi bhais paani mein...bolne se phele hi sab pata chal gya but how cum she know ...is it that obvious...then when i looked around...i guessed arrangement make her think that way as it just like she dreamed of n secondly she is my besti too n know too much of me...i just smiled at her n said...let's not ruin my hardwork miss dreamy.....yeah i called her miss dreamy as she always dream about her future life ...

she giggled with my anwser...and said go on Mr. lost before u r lost again ...

i sighed n asked for her hand...she said directly like this maan...😡

i replied...can u b quite for a moment...i m scared already yar...m just asking u to sit here...

she smiled n sit down n keep staring at me...n i knew...she won't change...even i don't want too bcz i lover her that way only...

thn i gave hint to waiter...he started her fav song...


Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you
That is how I know you
go on.

Far across the distance
And spaces Between us
You have come to show you
go on .

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on,
Once more you open the door,
And you're here in my heart and
My heart will go on and on.


n she smiled at me...first thing approved then waiter come with plate n put in front of her...

seeing d box she looked at me ...i just asked her to open it...n then seeing it her expression were priceless...her voice got choked n then i took ring n kneel down in front to her...n said...

You r my shining star at night.

I will never let you down.
I will never make you cry.
I will never tell a lie.
I will always be truthful to you.
I sing a lullaby at night.
I will always hold you tight no matter what.
I will always be there for you.
I will take care of you if you was in need.
I will help you when you fall.
will treasure you for all times.
You r my heart.
You r my soul.
But my feelings for you will never let go.
I want you to smile, smile for me.
I propose to you.
I will always love you (from net)

With this ring, I give you my heart, I promise from this day forward, you shall not walk alone, may my heart by your shelter, and my arms be your home... (net too...as m not good wd this sweet things😆😆)

n she just turned giving her back to me...i was shocked seeing her reaction...don't know what to do now...to stand up n ask her or to wait for more...then suddenly she turned back to me n hugged me n said those magical word...i love u too maan...then feeling wetness on my shirt i realized she is emotional n knowing her from long i know she won't show her weaker side to anyone...but then i got lost in her hug...n her confession too...that was best day of my life...

Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime
And never let go till we're gone

Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

You're here, there's nothing I fear
And I know that my heart will go on
We'll stay forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on.


Flashback end


i hate myself right now as loosing again n again in her memories...i need to find her not to waste tym thinking about past...then suddenly my eyes went to gate of restaurant...n there she is...after 5 yrs...m able to see her...she is changed totally...i rushed towards gate not to her this tym...when i was about to reach her, near d gate i bumped into sum1...

hey you...watch were u going...girl told me

u also see where u going miss...he was about to leave...

when that girl hold his hand...it's not ur park where u were running like this...apologize...he sees towards d gate...she went away sitting in her car...n his temper just got bad n turned towards the girl who is reason bcz of which he lost her...may b before i would...but now...no way...do what u want to do...m leaving n dare u stop me...n he left.,..


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Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
Mayuvani5 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written... Maan had a dreamy proposal...
Contunue soon.😊
Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor heart broken
he was very nice guy in past
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
dreamy proposal for miss dreamy from maan😆
in present finally maan saw her, totally changed she is now!!!!!
now i am having doubts , about the girl due to the last part of the update!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
just now read all updates .nice.continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
purposal part was lovely..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update!!!Loved Proposal part is so beautiful...Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Is the women is loved sameera I thing and the girl he Bumped into was it geet I hope wat did women do to Mann can't wait for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
U updated the part and I didn't know 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

miss u too dear...🤗

its nt late dear...i send u pm today only n u r here...m so gald u read...😊

thnx dear

yeah BT late to late hai na.I will try to cm bk soon as I also want to start new story BT u knw my schedule
.BT will cm as soon as possible.actually I love ur concept BT can't understand. Arjuna character BT it will reveal soon...BT have to say awsme writer just r !

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