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I wish you were here


😃 missed u too dear..
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hi babie main bhi aagayi hoon

kal raat tu nahi aayi kya?
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sorry i was not able to come...
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 25


Part - 26

Geet was sitting quietly while Maan nd manu wr chatting non stop ,, Maan was showing him outside d window nd telling about d things ,, Geet felt a burn in d corners of her eyes remembering her departure 3 yrs back ,, she was all alone that time , dejected nd insulted.

Maan was very excited after receiving Geet call before boarding ,, he re check d room ,, arranged nd postponed his meetings ,, ordered Adi nd Sasha to keep d things on order nd contact him in emergency coz he was off for 2-3 days .

Maan got up early mrng nd befor leaving for airport he arrange an arti thali in pooja room ,, kept that aside ,, called Nakul nd Satish from their room ,, instructed them to stay in KM few more things nd wait for his call nd went ,, when they wr half of their way Maan called at KM's land line phone ,, after many ringings (both slept in living room on carpet ) he ordered Nakul to call everyone in main hall with all arrangement which he told him .

Nakul nd Satish wr confused with Maan strange behaviour nd gussing who was coming ,, they went nd wake up Dadima , YSK nd Rashi ,, gave Maan's msg to them ,, they too wr very confused ,, all gathered in living hall nd started waiting for Maan ,, Rashi called Maan nd asked where was he but he replied that he wd be there in few min nd cut d call ,, there Geet's heart was thudding facing all of them again with lots of Qs , specially related to Manu , thought she was well prepared to reply them but there was a fear in her heart that how Yash uncle nd Rashi aunty wd react nd how much venom Dadima pour out for her ,, Maan's totally behaviour was beyond her imagination nd confussing her .

Finally they reached at KM nd Maan's SUV stopped in d porch ,, he came out having Manu in his arms nd looked at hesitated Geet , understanding her dilemma , gave a faint smile to her ,, driver opened d Geet's side door nd she came out ,, Manu was asking his non stop Qs to Maan .

Manu: this is ul house ?

Maan: yeah baby , u like it .

Manu : yeah , vely big ,, see mommy uncle's house is so o o big .

Geet gave a simile nodding her head ,,Maan stopped Geet at d entrance nd sent driver to informe all ,, He went nd after few sec all wr at d trashhold curious ,, Nakul was holding d pooja thali ,, Maan hide Geet behind him nd stood infront on her having Manu with a smile who also was looking at everyone curiously ,, all wr surprized nd hell confused seeing Maan with a small cute kid in his arms .

Rashi: Maan , ye kaun hei ?

Maan smiled nd replied : abhi pata chl jayega , pahale arti ki thali to lo welcome kerne ke liye nd then he gave a wide nd meaningful smile to Yash , which made yash nd all more confused .

Nakul handed thali to Rashi nd she came forward ,, did arti nd put tilak on manu's forehead who was smiling at her she carded his head nd cheek lovingly ,then Maan slowly moved side way giving Geet a clear look for all ,, all looked at her for a moment nd then gasped , a whisper came out from all's lips .. G e e t.

Geet was looking at all with a faint smile nd with pain in her eyes ,, dadima , Rashi nd Yash was looking at her surprised ,, she was there after 3 yrs .

Maan: mom , ab dekhti hi rahogi ya usse ander bhi aane dogi .

Rashi did Geet's arti nd put a teeka on her forehead with a wet smile ,, Yash was looking at Geet with wet eyes ,, some where he nd Rashi had an idea that Geet never come in KM after that incident ,, though she talked to them many times but after passing time their cono reduced nd she had called after months only for asking that how wr they nd they too asked about her well being nd study ,, both knew that she got a good job there nd settled there ,, once they told her to visit home but she refused ssaying that it was good for d Khurana family if she was away ,, she didn't want to break d family .

Her arrival was a pleasant surprise for them but they wr more surprised that Maan brought her nd hide d news about her means he knew that she was coming,, Dadima too was confused ,, she never thought that Maan do this ,, it was he who forced her to leave d Km nd today he himself brought her in KM nd giving her respect .

Geet too was surprized nd confused getting this warm welcome in KM ,, not only she Nakul nd Satish too wr shocked .. Chote Saab brought Geet in KM ,, all wr surprised at their places ,, driver put d language inside nd went .

Geet came in nd Rashi hugged her lovingly ,, pecked her forehead saying that she was so happy to see her ,, Geet wished Dadima too by folding her hands in a namasty ,, she didn't have courage to go near her like Rashi ,, d bitter past was blocking d way .

Then Geet moved towards Yash , wished him , he was chocked nd didn't say a word just hugged her tightly , pecking her forehead ,, they remained like that for few sec, pouring out their pain ,, Maan too felt burning in his eyes ,, he gulped nd composed himself ,, Manu was looking at all curiously .

Maan: Dad, I brought ur Geet back nd ,,, OMG!! I forgot , meet Manu ,, Geet's cute son .

All: What !!!! ,,, Geet's son ,,, all looked at Geet nd then Manu in Maan's arms.

Rashi: OMG!!! Ye sab kab hua , tumne bataya bhi nahi Geet .

Yash looked at Geet with shock : tumne ek baar bhi hint nahi diya ? etni badi baat chupai Geet.

Geet: sorry , lekin aapne bhi to bahot kuch chupaya hei ,, mujhe paraya samjha na ?

Yash: essa nahi hei beta ,, maine tumhe kabhi paraya nahi samjha.

Geet: fir apne heart attack ke bare mei na aaapne bataya aur na hi aynty ne ,, kya Annie bhi nahi janti ,, usse bhi nahi bataya ?

All became quiet ,, they informed her nd she came at once ,, Geet understood nd gave a weak smile .

Geet: it's OK , kuch baaten na hi kahi - suni jaye to accha hei ,, reason sab janty hein ,, ab aap kaise hein uncle ?

Yash: mei theek hun .

Maan: khade hoker hi sab baat kerni hei aur ense to milo , cute pie Manu .

All went in living hall ns settled in sofas ,, YSK with Geet ,, Rashi came close to Maan nd Manu with a smile .

Maan: manu baby , who is she ?

Manu: glanny .

Rashi: tum mujhe janty ho ?

Maan smiled: mom , he don't know hindi nd then smiled at Nakul nd Satish .

Rashi: Oh , u know me manu ?

Manu: yeah .

Maan: he knew all of us .

Rashi : really .

Maan gestured at Yash nd asked about him nd manu cutly said Dadu ,, Yash gave a wide smile listening that then Maan pointed at Dadima .. gleat glanny ,, then Nakul ,,, istish(Satish) ,, both wr very happy nd admired Manu that he knew them without meeting them ,, both gave a smile to Geet .

All wr very happy , even Dadima too she was looking at Maan now nd then who was very excited nd happy today ,, they took Manu in their arms nd loved him ,,,now Manu remembered d main member .. Jojo .

Manu: uncle Maan whele is Jojo .

Maan: Satish , jao aur Jojo ko lao , jaldi se , my baby is eager to meey his Jojo.

Now all got d mystry behind this new Jojo nd looked at Maan who was giving only smiles ,,

Satish brought Jojo with a thin rope ,, Manu jumped with joy from Maan's lap.

Manu: mommy , see , Jojo ,, he knelt near jojo who was wagging his tail ,, Manu patted his head lovingly .. Jojo .


Maan: manu say hello to Jojo .

Manu forward his small hand : hel lo jojo .

Jojo raise his one hand (leg) nd placed that on manu's palm which made manu more happy .

Manu: mommy ,, see , jojo say ing me he l lo .

Geet smiled : yes baby

She was shocked to see a small Jojo bcoz d previous was big ,, she looked at Maan nd other questioningly .

Maan: baad mei bataunga ,, abhii nahi ( he understood her confussion )

Maan: Nakul ji , kuch chai ,coffee milegi ? Geet what do u want for Manu?


Precap ---- Maan revealed that he spent time with Geet nd Manu in US...



Part - 27




sorry for mistakes ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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😭babie ko main nahi dikhi
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Originally posted by: priya111111

😭babie ko main nahi dikhi



Hi Priya..
red ho to kaise dikhogi...?
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Di kaisi ho? Hw ws ur Diwali?
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Hi Priya..
red ho to kaise dikhogi...?



main tho green hi hoona😲

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