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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.

Part - 110

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Part - 111- (Last Part)



Few days slipped nd it was d day of Geet's check up along with Dadima's bb oth went to Dr Das's nH ,, Dr Shikha was Geet's gynie , she was in her chamber nd then Geet went to meet Meera in her room ,, Dadima was in Dr Das's room,, after check up nd tests Dadima decided to start a topic regarding Meera's marriage in a gen way.

Dadima: Das I want to ask about Meera ,, r u not thinking about her marriage now ?

Dr Das became lil sad on this Q nd gave a faint smile , he didn't find words to reply at once .

Dadima: is everything fine Dr ? i'm sorry if u didn't like my words ,, I asked in gen way.

Dr Das: no, it's is not like that Mrs Khurana , I didn't mind ,, u r like a family member for me .

Dadima: thanks Dr , I just ask ...

Dr Das: I know Mrs Khurana ,,, nd I don't how u take it ,, actually Meera's marriage is not a easy task for me ,, I thought many times when I saw good match for her in our community but few gave -ive response ,, now i'm fear to repeat same thing in front of all ,, it's an insult for me nd my daughter.

Dadima: why u feel like this Dr ,, Meera is a very sweet girl , who cn reject her ?

Dr Das: she is sweet but not her past ,, there is a black mark on her past which I cn't hide ,, I want a mature nd understandable family/person for her .

Dadima: don't talk in riddles Dr ,, what's wrong with her ? ( dadima afraid if she had some health issue)

Dr Das hesitantly : mrs Khurana , Meera got married in her childhood .

Dadima: what !!! ,, what r u saying Das ?

Dr Das: yes , this is d bitter truth of my poor child ,, she was only 4 yrs old that time.

Dadima: OMG!!! Child marriage ,, how cd u do this Das ?

Dr Das: it was my Maa behind all this ,, she did this in my absence ,, u know Meera lost her mother when she was 2yrs old ,, (Meera's mom died at d time of her 2nd delivery ) my maa lived with us to look after her ,, she was good by heart but she was orthodox nd in that thinking she had ruined my Meer's future.

Dadima: why she did this even didn't ask u ?

Dr Das: she nd her bro had a good bond ,, his bro helped her in her tough time ,, my uncle had a grand son ,, he was 5 yr old when got ill ,, he was serious ,, medicines wr not showing its effect ,, whole family was praying nd trying all d ways for his life ,, pandits, diff pooja's , maulviees , fakirs ,, everything then some one suggested that made d kid married to a girl who had a good Kundli ,, wife's luck cd save him ,, being a Dr I was against all these things , but who cd change their mind whose child's life was on risk they cd do anything for to save him ,, my uncle's family was secretly trying for d girl nd showed few Kundlies to Pandit nd in that processes my maa showed Meera's too which matched but she was worried about my denial ,, she was sure that I won't accept this so she nd her bro planned nd they sent me out of city for a day nd got married Meera with that boy in hospital ,, a pundit did all this ,, when I came next day nd got d news which shcked me ,, i refused to accept this marriage but my ma and uncle's family started their emotional nd spiritual drama ,, after few days d kid's health started improving nd all wr prasing Meera's luck ,, uncle's family was treating Meera as their DIL ,, ( Dr das shied) elders decided that they wd got married Meer and that boy properly after completing their education ,, few yrs passed nd I came in Delhi nd settled here ,, in between my Ma and uncle passed away nd that boy went UK for graduation ,, 2yrs back I got d news that that d boy refused to accept his marriage nd got married to his British girl friend there ,, he refused to come India ,, his family folded their hands infront of me nd said sorry ,, but in all this my Meer suffered a lot ,, all our relatives knew that Meer and that boy r married , even Meera knew that , though she was not in contact with that boy but she accepted this reality that she was married to that guy in childhood nd now after d refusal she felt insulted nd annoyed when I talked about that marriage in front of any families ,, ppl asked many useless Qs which ircked Meera nd me ,, we cn'd hide d truth ma'am ,, Pata nahi kaun meri beti ko ess sach kesath accept karega aur respect dega.

Dadima felt very bad for Dr Das nd Meera ,, they wr suffering for no reason nd poor Meera got only pain for saving d happiness of a family ,, that time she came back quietly ,, after thinking a lot she decided to talk in front of Maan, Geet nd Dev .

When Dev came Delhi for a week Dadima disclosed Meera's fact after dinner nd voice out her desire .

Dadima: app sab Meera mei koi kami nazar ati hei ,, kya ess sabme uski koi galti hei ?

Maan: no Dadima , but why she thought herself married ? that was not a proper marriage nd both wr kids .

Geet & Dev: yes Dadima Maan/ bro is right .

Dadima : it is our thinking but their family treated her nd declaired her their DIL ,, she brought up with this fact that she was married nd after grown up they wd get a proper marriage .

Maan: why they r taking this marriage seriously ,, that was illegal nd now d boy is married to some one else ,, it is useless to thing about that .

Dadima: Dev what do u think about this?

Dev: bro is right Dadima ,, why they wr thinking that a marriage nd why Meera nd Dr uncle wr taking that seriously ,, she was a nice girl nd cd start her life fresh with no effect of that crap ppl .

Dadima: cn u accept Meera with out any 2nd thought ?

Maan nd Dev wr stunned at Dadima's words but Geet got a smile , but she was sad for Meera ,, a btful innocent girl faced this bitterness ,, she loked at Dev with a hope .

Maan: Dadima aap kya kahan chahti hein?

Dev: Dadima aap to mere bare mei sab janty ho .

Dadima: haan aura ur kaffi aur log bhi tumhare divorce ke bare mei janty hein ,, kuch shaadi ka proposal bhi leker aaye lekin humne mana ker diya ,, lekin Meera ko hum ess ghar mei chahty hein , wo iss family aur aapke liye perfect hei ,, agar aapko koi prob nah o to hum Dr Das se baat Karen ? Maan , Geet aapko ye match kaisa laga..?

Geet: it's good Dadima ,, Meera is perfect for Dev ,, but we have to know her willingness too ,, she faced a rejection .

Dadima : hummm,, esliy hum pahale aap sab se baat kerna chahaty thy ,, uske baad hi Das aur Meera se baat karenge ,, bolo Dev , kya hum aapke liye decision le sakty hein ?

Dev thought for few min ,, all wr looking at him nd then he gave his willingness nodding his head ,, all wr very happy ,, Dadima caressed Dev cheek lovingly nd pecked his forehead ... Thanku beta ,, trust me ,, Meera bahot acchi ladki hei.

Next day Dadima planned a dinner nd invited Dr Das nd Meera ,, all enjoyed d lavish dinner together then all went to sit in living hall near fireplace ,, having their hot coffee in chilled winter ,, Dadima voice out her desire in front of Dr Das nd Meera ,, both wr stunned , staring at Dadima nd other turn by turn ,, Dev was sitting with down head though he was blank nd ready for any reply ,, acceptance or rejection but some where deep in heart his heart desired for a +ive reply .

Meera became serious nd left from there excusing herself ,, Geet followed her both wr in corridor ,, Geet placed her hand on Meera's shoulder ,, she turned her face ,, her eyes wr wet ,, Geet came in front of her ,cupped her face lovingly ,, wiped her tears nd noded in a No .

Geet: Meera , hume sab kuch pata hei ,, tumhe kuch bhi kahane ki jaroorat nahi hei,, wo sab baaty humare liye koi matlab nahi rakhti ,, humne tumhe jana hei aur wahi kafi hei ,, aur Dev ne bhhi ek tough time face kiya hei .

Meera: Geet , kya etna assan hei ateet ko bhulna ?

Geet: ateet mei agar yaad rakhne ke liye kuch accha na ho to ku yaad kerna ? usse jitna jaldi bhool jao accha hei aur tumhari to koi galti bhi nahi fir ku suffer kerna kisi dusre keliye ? Meera don't look back nd plzz accept this happiness with open arms .

Meera beamed nd hugged Geet ,, Dev who was watching them from far got a smile ,, he was there to have a talk with Meera after accepting Dr Das .

Dev: Geet , ( both d girls parted nd looked at him ) cn I talk to Meera plz ?

Geet: Of course Dev ,, a clear talk is must ,, all d best .

Geet went from there patting meera's cheek with a smile ,, she went in Dadima gave her news that Dr Das is ready nd everything on Meera .

Geet: wo haan hi kahegi ,, aap chinta matt karo ,, mai sweets lati hu ,, aaj aap bhi thoda meetha kha sakti hein ,, 2 Drs hein treatment ke liye .

All smiled nd Geet went to kitchen for bringing sweets for all ,, she was very happy for Dev nd Meera .

There Dev nd Meera had a lil talk ,, both knew each other past nd need a base without d shadow of past .

Dev: Meera , there is no forcing ,, u cn choose what u want good for u ,, u r a very nice girl nd deserve much better than me .

Meera: how cn u say what is better for me , rejection or acceptance ? U know about my past too .

Dev: that was nothing for me ,, u r no where at fault .

Meera: tumhe sach mei koi farak nahi padta ?

Dev: nahi , aur tumhe ?

Meera: mujhe bhi , lekin ek request hei ..

Dev: kya ?

Meera: mujhe kabi compare matt kerna ,, apne attet ko beech mei matt lana .

Dev: nahi Meera , essa kabhi nahi hoga .

Meera: sure ,, nahi to mera dil toot jayega .

Dev: nahi tootega , ess reason ke liye to nahi,, baki tumhara dil kab aur kis baat per toot jaye wo pata nahi . ( he smiled naughtily nd Meera showed her pout )

Maan called Dev nd both went inside ,, their faces wr showing their willingness ,, Dadima made Meera to sit next to her ,, took out her gold bangles nd made her wore ,, Meera was shying with lower head .

Dadima : meera tumse ye hope nahi thi hume ,, tumne to dil hi tod diya humara .

Meera shocked : ji ,, maine kya kiya ?

Dadima: arrre tum sharma rahi ho ,, na a a ,, hume hope thi jump kerne lagogi ,, hum sabko hug karogi aur haan,, hume congrats karogi.

Meera : ji ,, mai ?

All wr laughting at her leg pulling nd enjoying her expressions ,, poor soul was in trap today.

Dadima : haan ,, hume DIL jo mil gai hei , Geet & Maan ko SIL , Dev ko life partner aur Dr Das ko Son-in-law ,, to ab tum bhi to hum sabko wish karo na .

Meera: Dadima ,, aap meri leg pull ker rahe ho ,, sab mil gaye ,, she pouted nd hide her face in dadima's neck hugging her ,, d KM filled with laughters nd happiness.

Maan was in their room nd kissing nd talking his baby ,, who was kicking here nd there nd Maan nd Geet wr enjoying d movements .

Geet pouted: tum dono ki masti mujhe costly padti hei ,, mai maar kha rahi hun .

Maan: accha hei na , mera baby badlale raha hei ,, tum bhi to mujhe night mei jagati ho ,, daily new demand.

Geet: wo meri nahi tumhare is naughty baby ki demand hoti hei warna mei aur daily Pasta khau,, eeww.

Maan: thanks baby bas Italian khana dad ki tarah ,, we'll have a good team .( baby hit his hand ,, Maan beamed nd Geet pouted .

Geet: bana lo team ,, meri team to Dadima ke sath hei ,, mujhe nahi aana tum dono ki team mei ,, chod do mujhe akela .

Maan raised on his elbow nd pecked on her lips ,, nd then her tummy .

Maan: we cn't live with out u Sona ,, u r our part nd we r urs ... Inseparable .

He cocooned her close to him nd sleep saying ... GN to baby , nd don't tease mom,, love u Jaan nd grabbed her pouted lips for a full mouth kiss .


Precap ---- Khuranas welcome two new members ...


Epilogue ..Pg 18





😃 Upcoming...


sorry for mistakes ...



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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

babie tum iss time😲


😃 abhi skull se aai hun,,
update daal rahi hu..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


😃 abhi skull se aai hun,,
update daal rahi hu..😃



daalo daalo jaldi se daalo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😃 Updated Pt 111 ...Pg...3


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Posted: 10 years ago
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meera aur dev ki setting bhi karwayi😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

aagayi tu. kaha gayi thi



😆 aaj sabhi pics update ke time search kerni padi aur kuch epi se nikali..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chalo sab sahi hogaye...sab maan gaye...aur child marriage toh aise bhi maana nehi jaata...m happy fr dev...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

n also waiting fr d new story eagerly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24



😆 aaj sabhi pics update ke time search kerni padi aur kuch epi se nikali..



tu kuch new story ki pic baat ki meri thread par wo kya hai, kaunsi pic
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww...what a beautiful story once again...cannot believe it has come to an end...so glad Meera and Dev got a new future with each other together...nice...waitig for the pre cap to see Maaneet and their baby/babies...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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for the new Thread babie



Haww?
Last part?
but i loved it
Poor Meera face a lot without any fault
but she got what she deserved..
I m sure two rejected hearts will accept each other perfectly
Edited by Rashmi... - 10 years ago

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