MG~ FF~The Jinx ~ THREAD-2~ UPDATED pt 20 / Pg 139 / 21st Oct........ - Page 87

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
maan called geet to talk with manu which geet avoid n ask him to be away from their life.
maan feel light after alking with geet n remember past how he rudely behave with geet when he took admission in geet's college
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for..late..comment

Mumma is.
making me..do..all.the chores!!!
well..it was nice.update

.maan missing manu ..so much
but what happened in the past..??

plz update sooon ...m.waiting for..them to meet again..!!
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my dear friends




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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 19

Part - 20

Geet was in her bed having manu close to her ,,she was patting his back to make him sleep nd he was clinging to her holding her kurti's neck in his small fist ,, she pecked his forehead nd caressed his head , combing back his curly hair ,, he slept after few min but sleep was away from Geet eyes ,, d tension of facing Khurana family again giving her shivering , though Yash uncle nd Rashi aunty was caring for her till d last day nd Yash helped her a lot like his child but there her soul was wounded ,, Geet remembered how this very man .. MSK humiliated her .

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All d students got their admit cards for exams nd busy in preparations ,, practicals wr running nd only few wr remaining ,, now Jrs wr throwing d farewell party for final yr students ,, d richie rich wr planning rave parties after d farewell party ,, there wr planning n planning in students ,, Geet never attend any party nd outing ,, these parties needed some good pocket money nd Geet never asked money for these things ,, she gen wore Annie's suits but now she had few coz Annie too left for UK ,, at home nd college she wore very simple suits ,, she didn't have good expensive dresses for parties so always avoided them .

It was her last practical / viva nd she was in her comp lab sitting in d last corner near d window revising her notes then few words caught her attention ,, they wr taking Maan's name , she didn't know who wr they but their talk made her alert nd she gave her attention to their talks.

Gr: I missed u darling , i'm seeing u r ignoring me.

By: I missed u too sweetheart ,but I was busy nd doing ur work .

Gr: means d trap is ready .

By: yes nd now its ur turn to act perfectly ,, then we play with him ,, MSK d gr8 .. become a blank cheque for us .

Gr: r u 100% sure we cn get good amount ,, what about his dad ? what type of person he is?

By: totally family person ,, like meri izzat , oocha khandan ,, family repo , social values nd morals ,, he 'll deffo open his account for his so called repo , sam darling be careful nd today after party manage any how , this was a golden chance .

Gr: don't worry i'll handle Maan ,, he cn't deny me ,, did u bring that tab ?

By: yeah ,, keep it , I make him drink nd 1 tab is enough if u feel more then try to gave 1 more , Ok .

Gr: fine , but don't go away from me .

By: don't worry sam , rest of d work i'll do ,, MSK 's full welcome .

Gr: OK darling let me go now , that romeo calling me again nd again ,, u read him right Dev .

Dev: he was with me in gds nd I knew his weakness ,, this was d healthiest fish to eat sweetheart .

Sam : who make my account healthy . Ok bye for now , see u at eve, muuaahh

Dev: bye sweetheart ,, muuaah

They went but Geet was stunned otherside of d wall ,, they wr Maan's friends nd planning to trap him ,, how nd why ? For money , but they wr rich nd belonged to well family then why this ? OMG !! today they had party aur Maan wd be there nd they wr planning to trap him ,, now how she stopped him ,, uncle nd aunty wr out of city for a week nd he never trust me ,even not Dadima then how she stopped him ,,, Babaji . but having no other option she decided to warn him once , at least he became lil alert .

Her turned had come nd she went for her viva ,, after finishing her work she went to search Maan in canteen area nd find him with his few friends near MP theatre ,, she went near them with thudding heart with fear ,, she knew that she was inviting her trouble coming here after his warning but she had to do an effort to stop him ,, she clutched her bags strip tightly nd came infront of him ,, a girl was sitting with him resting her head on his shoulder ,, Maan saw her nd next moments his eyes turned red ..How dare she ?

Maan groaned : get lost .

All his friend looked at them ,, d girl sat straight nd looked at her with a frown .

Maan grinded his jaws: I said , get lost .

Geet: I,, i'll , but I want to say u one thing , plzz.

A frnd: wow !! MSK 's maid in his service , sun le yaar .

Maan: shut up , nd u jinx how dare u ?

Geet: plzz , listen to me , ur friend sam nd her frnd planning to trap u , they r cheater nd ...

Sam gasped nd stood from her place nd shouted .. how dare u b***** B**** ? MK ur maid is insulting me , OMG!! She calling me a cheater in front of u ,, he y guys did I cheated u , u all r my friends .

Maan: sam , plzz calm doen , i'm talking .

Sam: what talking ,, she insulted me , OMG!! She called me cheater .

She started shedding tears nd other frnds circled them ,, Maan tried to consoled Sam but she snapped him ,, few other frnd provoked Maan which fuelled his anger ,, Maan pushed Geet lil back nd she trembled but controlled herself ,, she knew that now he'll surly kill her ,, Maan's eyes wr shooting fire nd jaws wr tightened ,, his hands wr tightened in a fist nd Geet heard a sound of bones ,, she stepped back in fear nd her whole body was trembling .

Maan: u r gone today ,, u spoil my day ,, this is d limit .

Geet lost all her wit ,, she didn't get what to do ,, Maan raised his hand to catch her neck but in a flesh Geet snapped his hand nd run away in full speed ,, she didn't look back nd stopped at outside d college gate ,, hurriedly stopped an auto nd told him to drop at XYZ stop ,, she looked back from d auto to check if he was behind her or not nd took a sigh that he was not there ,, but she knew that her end was near .

She was not wrong nd did her duty towards this family nd d person who was her god father nd helping her ,, she reached home , directly went in her room nd shut her inside , but storm won't stop closing d door .


Precap ... a scuffle ...


Part - 21

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sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update soon di... waiting eagerly for the part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Abhi tak koi nahi aaya😡
Me chali jaugi fir sone..
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi maitri😃
kitni laal ho😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! amazing update...yes the time has really changed ...& with time maan has changed...

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