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Posted: 10 years ago
Such narrowmindedness. Awlful. Poor geet suffered so much.
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.






Part - 13



Part - 14





Geet nd Maan wr listening nd watching all this quietly nd thinking from their prospective ,, she was small girl of 14 yrs nd he was not matured enough, a teen age boy of 10th std ,, he was pampered by his Dadima nd heir of KC ,, Maan didn't like that for an unknown girl his Dadima nd Dad had an argument nd he made his mind against that girl , he gave an angry glare to her which made Geet cowered ,, Annie was not at home that time she was in her hostel (The La****** school , Sana**r).

Geet was feeling alone like someone left her deserted she was missing her HP home at least that was her own house though she was living a hard life there but her heart knew that they wr her family , her mother nd younger bro was there with whom she cd talk but here she had none ,, her all childhood charm vanished when her own family discarded her nd here she faced d same rejection , though Yash nd Rashi wr caring n consoling her ,, they wr talking to her lovingly but she got d same -ive vibs from Dadima nd Maan .

D diner was very quiet Yash made Geet sit near him nd served her himself ,, Dadima ns Maan wr silent nd just looking at her who was not lifting her head nd nibbling d food under d scanning eyes of Maan nd Dadima ,, after diner Rashi took Geet in her room next to gym ( she cdn't go against Dadima too) ,, she show her all d things to use ,, gave her few btful dresses of Annie who was as big as Geet ,, she made her sleep in d bed nd left out saying that TM they wd take her to a new school for her admission .

Next morning Rashi came to wake her up nd helped her in getting ready coz she was new nd didn't familiar to d things ,, they wr at d BF table she served her BF that was new for her but she liked that pasta nd omelet bread ,, Dadima ,Yash nd Maan took their BF before bcoz she wake up late .

Maan was ready for his school nd his car nd driver was waiting for him ,, when Rashi told Dadima that she was going for Geet admission in Maan's school he objected at once nd said that there wr many schools so go any where but not in his .

, Dadima too objected nd said that took her in a GOVT girls school which was very near to KM nd she cd go by walk there ,, this was much better than her village school ,, there was no need to shower extra money for other child nd didn't keep her equal to their Grand children ,, Rashi tried to make Dadima understand but she said if she was accepting Yash's decision then he had to accept hers too ,, keep her away from Maan nd Annie ,, she was adamant at her place helplessly Rashi took Geet to nearby Govt girls school ,, d school was nice nd there wr many children(girls) but not from rich family ,, d syllabus nd edu board was same as other Pvt schools (C**E) like Maan nd Annie's.

Rashi met d principal nd completed all d paper formalities ,, few left which had to complete later coz she didn't have all d transfer papers ,, Rashi requested them to find out any way so he advised her to make few paper from municipal office nd submit that later ,, she agreed nd principal admitted Geet ,, after taking a small test ,, Geet was sharp in study nd did well ,, teachers wr happy that they got an intelligent child ( In Delhi Govt school facilities wr all but admin was poor , most of d teachers wr careless nd didn't pay attention to their work but some wr very nice nd devotee to their nobel work of giving education .

They told Rashi to open a bank account for Geet's name in near by SBI nd gave d AC number to school coz there was a GOVT Scheme(Ladli) for girls that Delhi Govt deposit 5000 rupee in d ac of every girl at d time of admission nd every yr,, not only this she wd get d mid day meal nd books from school ,, Geet listened this nd she was happy that she was getting so much things from school ,, her pre school didn't give anything .

Rashi completed all d formalities nd came back home with Geet's new books , bag nd uniform ,, she informed Yash nd told him to about mcd work for which he sent his PS ,, Rashi told Geet to study well nd work hard so that Yash nd she felt proud for her , she loved her ,, settled her things at proper places nd told her told her to come for lunch ,, Maan was back from his school nd Dadima from her NGO ,, Geet refused to come in dining hall nd requested to take in her room ,, she didn't feel comfortable in Dadima nd Maan's glares ,, Rashi understood nd she sent her lunch with a servant to her room .

In dining hall Dadima asked Rashi about admission nd she told her she admitted her in Govt gr school ,, Dadima was lil relieved ,, she nd Maan wr happy not to see her there ,, they took their lunch nd retired to their respective rooms ,, this way Geet settled in KM nd stated living with them but lil away from all .

At eve Yash came lil late but with a happy mood ,, he wished Dadima nd gave a side hug to Rashi nd Maan ,, he said that he got a very big Govt contracts in Delhi * d 2010 C****n w****h games wr going to held in Delhi nd there wr lots of developments in d city so KC applied for many nd succeed to get 3 projects ,, all wr very happy getting this news ,, Yash asked about Geet , he brought many chocolates for her ,, he sent Nakul to call her ,, Nakul went nd told her , Geet followed him nd came there fearing if she did something wrong but to her surprise Yash gave her a fatherly hug , pecked her forehead nd placed many choco on her palm with a broad smile, she turn a lucky charm for him ,, he asked did she got her new admission nd she nodded in a yes ,, he asked her again did she like her new school nd she nodded in a yes again ,, Rashi said that she did excellent in test nd teachers wr happy ,, Yash repeated same words like Rashi nd told her to work hard nd tried to stay always 1st nd made him to feel proud ,, Geet nodded nd then took her leave ,, Yash went to his room to change .

After that days started rolling down ,, Geet came out very less from her room ,, Maan got busy in her study coz he was in 10th nd had board exams ,, Yash got busy in growing business nd Rashi in her works ,, she was taking care of Geet nd asked everyday about her study ,, Geet gen avoid to take meals with d Khurana's but sometime Yash himself called her nd she went to keep his words ,, after passing days she was understanding everyone nature nd their behaviour for her,, Annie came in her winter holidays ,, she was a very high headed mod girl nd didn't give any heed towards Geet but she took her a charity nd favour which his Dad was doing for his friend 's daughter ,, she was a teen age girl nd had her new fav time pass ,, chatting with her friends ,, shopping , watching movies which she didn't get in hostel nd went to play tennis in club etc ... She rarely came in gym side .

Maan's thoughts broke with d sound of d canonical hours bell of near by church ,, he checked d time nd it was wee hrs ,, he dicided to call at home nd dialled Dadima's number , asked about her nd informed her that he wd be back TM then bid bye , then he called his Dad nd informed him after few business talk that he was coming home TM ,, he cut d call nd steered in d bed ,, sleep was still away form him ,, he toss nd turn many times nd then slept .


Precap - Geet nd manu got gifts from Maan ...


Part - 15

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sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Geet settled into her own pattern with the family
She was not a jinx but a boon for Yash

Maan and Annie are in the typical world of teens and have no time for her

mujhe past ke scenes chahiye

tabhi toh future accha lagega

nice one Babbie😃
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

hi babbie
nice update
poor geet km mein bhi maan and dadimaa ..uff ..
chalo maan ka samajh aata hai kid hai but dadimaatoo much arrogant ..
yash brought chocolates for geet coz he understood that geet has brought good luck for him
geet's admission in govt school ...koi na govt school ke students bhi kai bahut acche hote hai ..
geet is reserved ...

thank u for update babbie ..ab past sab jaldi se batao takki story present mein aa sake ..

waiting for next
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hi babie

i am back. missed u a lot darling. ab tum tho fb par aathi hi nahi ho.😡aur mujhe sirf net fb ka hi saath dethi thi. gf tho open hi nahi horahi thi. aur kal tumhe reply dene keliye raat shuru kiya par post hi nahi huwa. aur post hone se pehle main hi wapas aagayi hoon😆😆😆
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie

i am back. missed u a lot darling. ab tum tho fb par aathi hi nahi ho.😡aur mujhe sirf net fb ka hi saath dethi thi. gf tho open hi nahi horahi thi. aur kal tumhe reply dene keliye raat shuru kiya par post hi nahi huwa. aur post hone se pehle main hi wapas aagayi hoon😆😆😆



🤗 Hi Priya..jhappiieess dear...
missed u a lot ...
aaj eve mei aaogi na...?
how wr ur holidays..?😃
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😊Updated Pt 14...Pg ...34

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