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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

hi all ha thoda late ho gaya

this part written by our disha31





Part 4

Geet was worn out physically and mentally. But today meeting Pari and Dadima gave a little peace to her heart.The affection and care that she got today from their caring words made her to believe that still someone can care for her.She yearned for that love and care ..but none in her family were ready to give her.With a heavy heart she went to her so called home...




As she was not feeling well she just went to her room to take rest.She closed her eyes to sleep...but sleep as far away from her eyes.Just then she heard her sasuma's sound. She and her friends were returning home after visiting the temple.Sasuma opened the door with spare key...she was unaware of Geet's presence...



F1:Savita...where is Geet.Time is 7 now,till now she hasn't reached home kya?




S : Don't know ..why till that maharani didn't come home...



F2:I told u na Savita,don't say ok to this girl...girls who are working won't be taking good care of the family




S:What to tell Seema.Before marriage itself I told to my son that she is working and not it for our family.But my son,he only wanted a girl who is working .



F1:Haan..nowdays all boys think like this only...see my son too...yahi haal hai mere ghar mai bhi..par when she became preg..my son strictly told that she should not go for work...par ithni si bath ko meri bahu ek bahout bada thamasha bana diya...



S:Aaj kal ki ladkiyaan sab aise hai...sab apni manmaani



F1:Haan..she too wants to work...she said that she want to work..it was her dream..hr parents worked hard to make her study... blah... blah..



S:Phir kya hua?Is she going to job now too...



F1:Nahi ...mera beta sher hai...he made her to come in track...hearing this all laughed.



F2:Savita tell ur son also to do the same...warna ur bahu will get in ur head and u have to do all the work from taking care of the baby to house hold works...




S: Haan mujhe kuch karna padega...ab pata nahi humare hismat mai pota ya pothi lika hai..agar ladki hui toh...




F1:Haan u r ri8...ladki hui toh with that maharani you have to bear that burden too...




S:Wahi toh darr hai..so only today I prayed to devi maa that ladka hona chahiye...and their talkings continued...





All these were heard by Geet...hearing her sasu,her friends made her numb,how could they think their DIL as a burden. And more than that didn't she think twice before saying her baby as a burden.what is the difference if it is a boy or girl...on the whole it is a life na.Suddenly a fear engulfed her...what if they tried to harm her baby if it a girl..she put her hand on her tummy and said baby I won't let anything happen to u..its ur mom's promise...and tears were continuously flowing from her eyes...she was helpless..where to go..with whom to share her fear ...sadly none were ther to hear her silent cries...



(This is the thing that is happening in many houses.In houses where girls are considered as a burden...where always there is a difference between BOY and GIRL.don't those girls have any dream, don't they need love and care..don't they have rights to decide or take a decision in their life...why always they have to obey someone's rule.She have to take care of everyone... her husband ,her in laws...what about her?Who will take care of HER?who will listen to her silent cries...who will wipe her tears...who will give her a shoulder to cry..who will take care of her when she is ill...her husband?her in laws?who...from where to get answer...yeh sawaloon ho unsuna kardega ye society...)


In KHURANA Mansion...

Maan, Pari and Dadi were sitting in the hall.Pari was playing game in Maan's cell.



Dadi:Pari bete...kya game khel rahi hai aap?



Pari:Angry Birds game Dadi..



Dadi:How to play it bete...tell me too na



And pari explained the game carefully to dadi...



Pari:Dadi..i love the red color angry bird..its cute na



Dadi:But I like the blue on...woh bilkul aapki tarah hai...bahout chote...



Pari:Papa dheko na Dadi telling me choti..me big girl na...



Maan took Pari in his lap and said...haan u r big girl



Pari kissed Maan's cheeks:You are the BEST papa...I love u.. a lot ..



Dadi turned her face with faking anger and said Nobody loves me...


Pari and Maan gave a look to each other.Pari..hello Drama Queen aapna drama band karo...any ways papa loves me more than you and I love my papa more...and she hugged Maan.



Dadi looked with a pout and Maan and Pari giggled.



Dadi:papa ki chamchi and she started tickling Pari...her laugh filled the whole mansion.



Maan: Dadima.. tomorrow we have to attend a party.Mr.Chopra invited us all.So be ready at 6 in the evening.Pari beta u too get ready soon...



Pari:ok Papa..Papa will Geet aunty come there.




Maan:No beta ...kyun?




Pari:Papa call her also na..plss...I really want to meet and play with her..plzzz..she asked with a puppy face.




Maan was surprised to see Pari asking for Geet...He know her daughter was reserved type and it would take her some time to mingle with others..but with Geet she got attached very soon...



Dadi:Haan Maan bete,call her too na..it will be really nice.



Maan:Dadima aap bhi...she has a family too...and more than that its not some professional party...then with what reason I will call her.




Dadima:OK...aap fikar math karo...mai aur Pari usko bulathe hai...haina Pari..both Dadi and Pari hi-5ed eachother.Maan just nodded his head at their antics and went away...None know what their fate had decided for them tomorrow...


Precap-May be last part...







oh yarr.. i feel like i'v read this but haven't liked n commented 😲

anyways dishu u did good job baby 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

part 5

Geet totally shake with her mil word she feel like someone like someone hitting my head with hammer ,her whole body is shaking with fear , fear from her own relation MIL who is like mother world say and now that women all ready to snatch another life who even don't come in world'

She sit on nearby chair and put her shaking hand on her tummy she try to fell that unborn baby who is part of her body for her , her beautiful moment with her husband who involved with her for his physical need after so many year of marriage also she can not say surely that he stand for her or not...' she know he always go with his parent decision

Geet smile sadly , what an agony world called him my soul mate ,but he is only mate when soul get involved in our so called relation till now she is thinking that her any dramatic step may be cause hurt to her parent but for that one thought till how many year she have to bare so called relation of Good wife and good DIL she is tiered now with adjustment as wife as dil , always control her desire for cloth to any big decision of her life

Na she get tired with all this adjustment name on name of Ideal wife, dil she all feel now suffocicated with all this and this new fear just shake her till death

She need someone who talk with her , share her problem give her guidance but who ...will that is big question of her life ,home and office , office and home is bitch main khud ke liye jina to bhool gayi thi to friend ...big ?

So many questions but no ans she caressed her tummy with worry at LAST she took decision yes she is going to ask her husband today ,same time her husband entered in room as usual blank face geet think for while , how someone face can be so blank no emotions at all

He put his laptop aside and start to went to washroom ,just geet called him with all her courage and say " I am pregnant and I want this child ,but I am not staying in home because I want my promotion also and one more think either girl or boy I want this baby"

Before he react on her talk same time his mother entered and froze with geet talk she first time saw geet talking with so much confidence and determination

Mil start drama in full swing "what do u mean ha geet u want we took burden of your girl also first we taking your burden that is not enough ha kon sikha raha hai ye sab tume talk like this your parent ya fhir office main ka koi ha geet

She ask with smirk

Geet feel so insulated she look to her husband with hope at list for baby he say something but again his blank look ...geet miss bit of her heart when his cold word hit her tight like storm "we going to test if its boy than ok else ..." U get na what am I saying , he ask in cold voice shiver run from geet spin , she look to him with pure disgust like what is he wife na hi sahi did he don't feel something for his own blood his own baby.

But geet get one think she have took stand for herself now or never anf for her baby she have to fight

Geet look to her so called husband eyes and say " I am not going to any TEST ,jo bhi hoga wo mera hai so muje nahi farak padata wo Girl hai ya Boy." both son and mother look her shock so firm decision that's also against them

Next moment geet get tight slap on her cheek , tear gather in her eyes ...but she look to him and again repeat in more cold voice I am not going to any test ,and now if u try to hit me than in next 10 min police will be reach in your house door get it

First time ma and son get scared with geet cold words ...he want to try say soothing but ma hold his hand and say bahu is right beta nati hi sahi wo apni hi hogi na

Geet husband give look to his ma a surprise look how ma took u turn within min But geet get alert she feel something is fishy

MIL- oh geet we r sorry wahi hoga jo tum chahogi , now u take rest I brought some milk for u ok ...

Geet husband went behind his mother and geet sit on bed with confusion what is this MIL so soft behavior its strange

Geet make note in her mind that she have to be alert else because her mil behavior make her more confused and scare she took her mobile she want to send sms to pinky her colleges which she have little relation

Same time her phone beep ...its massage from MK she get confused why he send massage to her she open massage

Hello Mrs geet ,

sorry to disturbed u ( geet nodded typical Mk ) sorry to disturbed u in this hour but pari want to u attend party on tomorrow

Its her wish if u say yes it will be our plaser we need only pari happiness

Your faithfully

MSK

Ye mk request kar rahe hai ya kisi company ko latter bhej rahe hai

Geet again heard sound from outside she get alert now she have to act fast she just type

Hi , pinky I know u get confused with sudden sms thou we don't share closed friendship but today I need your help now I can say only I am in danger in my own house reason I will tale personally please u make any excuse and come here to take me out because if I try to go they will get alert

Just help me from out from this house please ...it is question of my unborn baby please and she send it but in fear tension she don't look for whom she send sms that sms get send to MK

Geet took her small bag and collect all her certificate and image of Gansha in bag along with her lap top and mobile she waitng to reply of pinky she again and again check her mobile that it is ok or not with going of each second her fear start to turn big and big she start to mummer kuch nahi hoga baby don't worry sab thik ho jaayega , please pinky ans me please

Now it is more than 1 hour and geet start lose hope for pinky help she again and again check her mobile

She hear bail door bail and she rush to out tho she pretant to clam face but she get hope may be pinky on door she pray in mind and with shaking hand open door and get froze with surprised and shock ...MK on door along with dadi

Befor geet say anything which damage situation maan saw mobile and mummer your sms geet get that sms send to mk in fear her eyes well up with their coming dadi nodded in know just than her mil voice Kon hai geet some from inside

Geet took long breath and control her feeling and say mummyji mere boss and unki ma hai

All gather in hall they know khurana is big name


ok seems like i got hit with my long list of "res" 😆

best thing was sms getting sent to maan;
even i doubt her mil planning smthing, maybe to give her some harmful medi
her hubby is a spineless creature... i loathe him😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was so painful to see her state; i cant imagine what will i do if i find such people in real life

i hope things will be better for geet from now on as she has moved away from that hell;

i think she should file a divorce petition 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
haha this was my fav part...
i have always loved this type of maan... fast n tez in alll 😉

hash! i expected this from her parents; happy it happened.

but i have a point here to raise; it is not always the others like a husband or mil or the family
sometimes the women themselves are so obsessed of having a boy that she goes ahead with abortion. i have seen such cases around me, so we cannot make a pre-notion tht its always a family pressure and a mother cannot abort her child knowingly; the world is too sefish; though she may feel guilty n all latter but...


and y are u putting disha here again; she has written her part already na 😲
its part 4 i think!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Poooja

haha this was my fav part...

i have always loved this type of maan... fast n tez in alll 😉

hash! i expected this from her parents; happy it happened.

but i have a point here to raise; it is not always the others like a husband or mil or the family
sometimes the women themselves are so obsessed of having a boy that she goes ahead with abortion. i have seen such cases around me, so we cannot make a pre-notion tht its always a family pressure and a mother cannot abort her child knowingly; the world is too sefish; though she may feel guilty n all latter but...


and y are u putting disha here again; she has written her part already na 😲
its part 4 i think!!




no ji next wala bhi she already write it but that get delete by her sis 😕😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan




no ji next wala bhi she already write it but that get delete by her sis 😕😭


aaiii 😲😲
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Poooja


aaiii 😲😲



kya
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Posted: 9 years ago


Sorry Mommy and all Readers of this Story
Because of me the update delayed😡
It took too long for me to give update
1st my health then my colg work did't let me come here for many days😭
Missed u all

and really a BIG Sorry!!😭
Edited by disha31 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I have given nxt part to Mommy..she will proof read and update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: disha31

I have given nxt part to Mommy..she will proof read and update


good
do u want update 😉

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