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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank u gunjar for this lovely banner!!

Thank u all for ur lovely comments..guys it really motivates me.!!!

PART 15

They reached their hotel. It was a lavish 5 star hotel all his fans were waiting and cheering for him outside the hotel especially girls. Maan climbed down the car and waved his hand to them smiling.

Ayan was curiously watching the scene in front of him. Geet knew that he is a superstar but today she realized that he is really loved by all his fans and girls uff he had such a charming personality who wouldn't like him. . Their security breached through the crowd that was hovering over all of them. Ayan clasped geet tightly fearfully. Finally they checked in and crashed in their room. Naina had different room while ayan and geet stayed in one.

Naina informed maan about this scheduled later in the afternoon but maan forced her to cancel all giving a lame excuse that he is tired. Naina smirked knowing exactly whats going on in his mind and y he seemed so cranky. The guy who used complete all his work within a a day so that he could enjoy with girls and do other stuffs in the rest of his trip. She was truly glad that maan was happy now.

Geet and ayan changed and got themselves comfortable in their room.

wow mommy this is soo cool he said as he the jumping on his fluffy bed.

Geet smiled hehe..yes baby...are u hungry should I order something for you.. Its been quite a long journey...hmmm

yes..mommy I want a big portion of ice cream he said making his eyes big licking his lips..

No..ayan first have a proper meal and then..she said sternly

Okay..he uttered making a gol gappa face..He .got down from the bed and ran in the balcony to view the room.

The landline rang in her room. She frowned and picked it up..

Heeloo..

Heyy...its me maan ..hope dint disturb u he said from the other side

Heyy noo..not at all she said smiling

U guys wana come over for lunch..downstairs in the restaurant?? He asked hesitantly praying that she says yes

Umm...I... She looked over ayan and then thought why not...

Okay we'll be there..

Greattt..he said smiling widely I'll c u at 2 pm then..

Hmmm..okay

They met at the restaurant and ate their lunch together. Initially geet was silent and maan did all the talking then later on all the discomfort vanished slowly and she enjoyed their lunch.

For ayan it was a treat maan ordered everything he wwished for...so it was a party for him. Infact ayan and maan had similar taste of ice creams. Geet felt nostalgic with this..reviving her old days with her di and jiju. If they were alive today then ayan would have been this happy always... She felt tears burning her vision she wiped it before maan or ayan could see.

But it dint go unnoticed by maan . he kept mum as he dint wanted to corner her on this.

She was really grateful to maan for getting them here. The Happiness on ayan's face made her overwhelmed.

Later after their lunch they bid bye to maan who left half-heartedly to the studio to compose his unfinished song,

Geet made ayan to sleep and got herself rejuvenated with a coffee. Naina dropped by and greeted her. They both settled themselves in geet's room. Naina was talking to raj(her finace) and hence dint go with maan.

They discussed over causal stuffs ...geet really enjoyed her company.

U haven't heard any of his songs???i mean offcourse the romantic ones?? Naina said making a o shape face

Yeyy...no ..geet said bitting her lower lip..

U should then,.,.u knw he is known to be famous mostly coz of his passionate romantic sonsg,,,

Ohh...really that's nice

He never told you...or what

No..actually..

Naina dint had any idea about the previous incidents. She thought they shared good bond from start.

I knw attitude king hai who..khud toh bolega hi nahi...she said rolling her eyes to which geet smiled

But who bas bahar se aisa khadoos hai...andar se nahi..

Geet looked at her and nodded...She knew this by now..the guy literally got beaten by ayan but never did once he misbehaved with him or her. Ya they had tiffs .as she wasn't aware of his personality his nature. He did had a soft heart coz no one would do so much for just a dance partner.

Tumhe pata hai...maan bachpan se aisa tha..he was always passionate about singing..But

But..

Naina's face fell recalling those incidents..

Maan just had his dad with him whom he loved the most.. His mother had died long back. His dad too wanted him to become a singer . I remember It was our college first year and during the fresher pary it was the first time he sang in front of a live audience. And Mr. Kulkarnai our chief guest who was a music composer appreciated him and asked him to take singing lessons from him. This boosted his confidence and he told this to his dad. They weren't financially well off..but uncle got him enrolled there.1 Whole year maan learnt singing from Mr.kulkarni. they singed him for a show but...something went wrong and they had the drop this project but dint even return uncle's money which they had borrowed from him in the pretext of this show. Things dint go well...their financial problems went worst...and..maan had to take up a job which he did willingly to support his father. Uncle..he took this to his heart which made his health worsened

And...and...he he..naina felt her throat choking...she looked away

Geet could sense..this and immediately came by her side comforting her

Uncle died in his sleep...and...he..he never disclosed the fact the he had cancer..she said in a teary voice

Geet s eyes filled up.

Maan was...he was broken when he came to knw this..he blamed himself...he hated him self..until he got uncle's letter ..his last letter

He had asked maan to forgive him for this step which he took..as he wanted him to soar high in sky . And he was binding him to ground..he took his promise that he will become a singer..come what may and fulfil his dream.

That day..i saw maan completely changing ...he struggled a lot ..did everything he could and within a year he had got his singing skills and voice polished ready to make the wolrd dance on his tunes. After a few moths he singed a singing contract and got his frist break. Me and dad we encouraged and motivated him throughout,

Maan came out that situation with a positively..but still I feel something he is hiding..his grief he never shared it with anyone not even me...I tried sometimes but...she sighed he would ignore...

Outside he is happy go lucky superstar..but inside whats going on in his heart no one could guess it...

Naina wiped her tears..

Actually till now..she said smiling at geet

Geet stared her...confusingly..

Till..now??

Ya..tum ho na ab...he will share everything with u...umm thoda time lagega but bola zarror..

Huh?? m sorry naiana I dint get u..maan aisa..kyu

Naina grinned...Tum uski special frnd ho..an isliye...sab smaajh jaungi don't worry..

Hmmm...okay

Chalo I better get going...mujhe maan k concert k preparations dekhna hai..c u..girl she said hugging lost geet...

After naina left...geet sat down with naina's words floating in her mind..

Special fnrd?? She whispered to himself..hmmm??

Her lips curled to a small smile...

Later at night.

Maan came to his room feeling exhausted. He sung the song ten times but just couldn't sing it well..the words came out flat.every time he read the lyrics his mind drifted to geet thus loosing his concentration.

He changed and had a nice warm shower. When he came to his hall he surprised to see ayan in his room .

Heyy..

Heyyy ayan said jumping off his bed and coming in front of him.

I was waiting for u...kaha the tum

Mere liye wait kar rahe the?? Kyuuu??

I hope he is not thinking of a new prank on me..huh he thought

Aree to play video games..u have them with u don't u..?? he said making his eyes big in excitement

Ohh...that maan felt relief..sure champ lets..play he too loved playing games..it will freshen him

Both sat down and started playing games.

Here geet was waiting for ayan he is gone since an hour saying he ll be back soon. After ayan got up she took him around the hotel so he was quite acquainted with the area and he wouldn't get lost.

She sighed getting up and left her room.

Maan's security guy informed her of ayan being in maan's room.

..the guy had some alma matter to discus with maan so he came along with her to maan's room.

Due to security reasons...all his men had a duplicate card of his room u knw just in case of emergency. He wiped the card and his cell rang before they could enter inside.

Mam u please go inside..i'll be there within a min..

Geet nodded

I won..i won...yeippeee ayan said slumping in maan's lap

Hehe..yes champ won..he said tickling him

Ayan giggled while maan laughed with him

After catching up his breath ayan said

U knw..u r not that DD..but are this DD now and giggled..

Maan knotted his brows and held him

Which Dd I m..and which not

U were dusht danav..but now..u r ...dhak dhak..he said cutely

Dusht danav??? He made a face..yeh naam kisne rakha??

Maine..rakha tha..ayan said proudly..

Ha beta tu hi rakh sakta hai...

Acha aur ab dhak dhak kyu??

Well...mujhe new name kya rakhna hai..woh smajha hi nahi..but people they say na..ki u r dhak dhak...they want u to be their dhak dhak...waise who kya hota hai
??

Kyaa??

Haa..today when we were coming to the hotel..bahar sab log yehi bol rahe the..maine suna tha they called u dhak dhak...

But...u r just my dhak dhak..hai na??? he said cutely ..his eyes were shinning bright as he said those words...

Maan was stunted with this little boy...he had actually accepted him with so much love..the boy was indeed special...

Yes sure ur dhak dhak he said with a smile curling on his lips...

Yeyyy ayan said and hugged him and maan reciprocated patting his head

Geet smiled with tears...

She had never seen ayan this happy with someone...His bond with had developed so much and was blooming so well

After knowing so much about maan and the way he handled ayan now...just increased her respect for him. She thanked god for bringing maan in their life...

Aree geet tum kab ayi maan said coming in frnt of her with ayan in his arms..

Geet blinked back pushing her emotions back...and shook her head..wohh..mai..abhi..she mumbled..

Mom..sorry mai video games khelne mai busy hogaya..

She smiled its okay...baby.. she said moving her hands to take ayan..maan gave ayan to her

Okay chaloo dd...see u tom...gn its my sleeping time

Gn..champ..maan said smiling.,..

Momm thoda age karo na mujhe...plz..and dd tum bhi come forward

Geet and maan did what he said..

Ayan pecked maan's cheek and said goodnight...tumhe nahi pata goodnight aise wish karte..hai..see ayan thought u good manners..

Maan smiled widely...touching his cheek thanks.champ gn..ummm gn geet he said glancing her

Goodnight geet said returning his smile..

Momm..aise nahi wish karte..aap bhi bhul agye..u always wish me by kissing me..to dd ko bhi kiss karo na... ayan said cutely

Baby...aise..nahi kiss kar sakti mai...aap ki baat alag hai..

Maan had a strong urge to kiss ayan for this lovely opportunity.

i..i cant kiss him ...she said.looking at ayan.

plzz mom...plz momm...karo na...ayan pleaded her..

ayan..i..she stooped pooping out her eyes as she felt a soft peck on her cheeks..

Maan closed his eyes...landing his lips on her smooth cheek.

Ayan clapped yeyyy..

Maan leaned back...brushing back his hairs..Well he dint want to kiss her like this but couldn't resist the invitation..

Who..ayan..ne..zid...kiya toh maine he fumbled with words..

Hmmm..ohh.. its okay geet muttered feeling flushed. Her cheek was burning..

Good night she whispered before...leaving his room.

After she left maan closed his door and backing up against it..

My first kiss...with her he said placing hand on his heart to calm down his heart beats...

PRECAP-

Tujhko jo paaya ahan

To jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum Dono ke darmiyaaan

Hope u guys like this part...and one more thing...I have received pms of few readers and from cutie asking me to write a epi 2 for first kiss story...so I guess ill be writing that too and posting it by Monday!!!

please hit like and comment...

And if possible plz finish the thread!!

love

sweta

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautfl part dear...
m lovng ds stry agn n agn...maan n ayaan is so gud togthr...both miss son n father bond...
geet n maan gettn well...n dre kiss tht ws cute😆😉

n precap...tumko jo paya😉😉😉
Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update!!
Maan and ayaans bonding is great..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really
You just kiseed her for ayan
Good thing champ didn't say on lips
Or he would have done that too
He makes adorable kid
And maan a cute dad
Hmm now we know more about maan
Good we needed to know
Special friend indeed
She will know soon
Just loved this
So cute right
All getting along
Like little family
Which I hope they will be one day
Your DD and your moms ayan
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesme part...wow first kiss😆...
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Posted: 10 years ago
great part dear... 👏 ...feeling bad after knowing maan past 😭 ...but don't worry...ab geet aa gyi h na maan ki life m.. 😳 ..
wow...maan and ayan bond getting stronger.. 😃 ...omg..maan kissed geet for ayan ...😉 😆 ..continuee soonnn dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
geet came to know much about maan trhrough naina...
seeing maan's and ayan's bond she felt happy and her respect for him increased
because of ayan maan kissed geet on her cheek ..he didn't want to loose the opportunity kiss her in pretext of ayan's wish he kissed her
nice precap
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
really loved maan n ayaan's bondingg
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..Maan and Ayan's bonding is super..
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏Superb update...dreamy wala...
Loved Maan and Ayan bonding...

Ab gett ko maan ka past pata chala......

Kiss was superb...pyaar ki kahani jaldi badao...

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