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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on new thread
Nice teaser
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Congrats for new thread.

interesting teaser.
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Interesting teaser...it kind of makes sense...maan realizes what he feels for ..geet is love and not infatuation as he has something to compare to ..his feelings earlier, but for Geet, as no previous experience nor did she get anything from Maan from the beginning, she does not know what it is and what she should expect from him...I think now that Maan has confessed, she will slowly start realizing her feelings with him showing her his love without any expectations (hopefully he will be patient and give her space and time but at the same time shower all his love and attention and care on her)
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Congrats for new thread... n teaser.. 😲 well She is too right at her own place..
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congrats on the new thread!!!!
nice teaser!!!!
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why teaser in place of update...first time it happened...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD👏
NICE TEASER😊
WAITING FOR THE UPDATE...MAAN AB KYA BOLEGA
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congrats for new thread
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.



Part - 77
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4141938/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-12-updated-pt-77-pg-120-31st-aug

Part - 78


She was staring at screen nd then looked at Maan nervous ,, her wedding pic brought back many memories , Maan slowly came close to her , there was a soft smile at his face , looking very calm nd compose ,, he was not in his office attire , he was Maan that time, only Maan.

He held her hand in his , caressed them with his thumb softly, came on his one knee, nd this lil gestured shivered Geet ,, she was looking at him with uneven heartbeats , puzzled why he arranged things like this ?

Maan: Geet I know u r confused that why I called u here like this ? Geet I want to start from that place where we left ,, sorry not u, but I left behind ,, our relation I still there ,, time had change but not our relation .

Geet I accept that it was all my fault to through u in pain nd lonliness ,, Geet with ur acceptance I want to start my life with u ,,( he bent on his knee holding her hand ) Geet plzz make me a part of ur life nd let me walk with u to complete this life journey ,, I want to live with u , want to see dreams with u nd want to fulfill them with u .

Geet kya tum mujhe apni zindgi mei shamil karogi ?

Geet was staring at him , her eyes turned wet nd thought that where she cd go ? If she accepted him or not, she was his ,, life was tough for both , he didn't hide anything from her nd now accepting all his mistake ,, if some one say sorry then he/she deserves a chance then why not he .

She nodded in a yes nd he beamed ,, got up , took a box from d table nd opened that ,, there was a pair of band , took a band nd inserted in her empty ring finger nd then kissed that .


Maan: thanks Geet , thanks a lot .

He forwarded d other to her ,, she took nd made him wore ,, Maan cupped her face nd pecked on her forehead nd then hugged her with a contented smile .

Maan: I love u Geet .

They wr remained like that for long assuring each other that they r together now not alone , but both have different feelings in their heart ,, here Maan was sure for his love for her nd Geet was away from this feeling .

Geet: Maan , u said that u love me , but I never feel anything for u ,, I don't know how I feel this love ? I never thought that u r mine , don't u feel bad ?

Maan felt a lump in his throat nd his eyes turned moist ,, he kissed her forehead .

Maan: no Geet ,, I cn't hope that things change in a day ,, I cn wait Geet , I cn wait for ever ,, if my love is true it 'll make a place in ur heart .

Geet: aur mujhe kaise pata chalega ?

Maan smiled : tumhara dil tumhe eska Ehasaas kara dega Geet.

Geet: aap bata do ,, aapke dil ne kya mahasoos kiya ?

Maan: nahi Geet , tum ess Khoobsurat ehasaaas ko khud hi Mahasoos karo ,, Pyaar ka ehasaas bahot khobsoorat hota hei ,, esse jio Geet .

Geet: aap jeety ho?

Maan: huumm .

Geet: kaise?

Maan smiled , parted a lil , lifted her face placing a finger under her chin nd gave an eskimo kiss to her then gave a quick feather kiss on her soft lips .. feel it .

She blushed hard nd hide her face in his chest ,,waves of current passed through her body , blood rushed to her cheeks nd ears nd made them warm ,, her grip became tight on his back ,, Maan sensed her body reactions ,, smiled naughtily nd hugged her more tightly ,, closed his eyes to absorb these beautiful moments ,, his heart felt peace .

They took their dinner , this was d 1st time they wr out together ,, while taking dinner she remembered Dadima nd called her ,, asked about her dinner , she shied telling her that she nd Maan wr having their dinner ,, Maan was amazed seeing that how a simple thing made her shy .. both came out from d cottage nd she asked about her pics .

Geet: aap meri wo photo yahin chod doge ?

Maan smiled: nahi , Adi mrng mei aaker sab le jayega ,, waise tum chao to yahin ruk jaty hein.

Geet; nahi ,, mujhe ghar jana hei , Dadima ko meds deni hei , aur wo humare liye wait ker rahi hongi.

He was touched with her care ,, she put Dadima nd family above her happiness ,, she was such an angel , very caring , loving nd forgiving ,, they wr in KM ,, Dadima was waiting for them nd asked about their dinner ,, she brought her meds nd gave her then all went for their respective rooms ,, both changed , finished some of their work nd went to sleep ,, though her closeness affected him but he had to suppress his feelings bcoz she was away form these feelings nd he wanted d same desires nd longings in her like he felt for her .

It was morning nd all wr at BF table ,, Geet served nd then sat near Maan ,, Sam was sitting next to Geet ,, all wr having their BF with small chitchat ,, Dev said that he had to go Nanital for 2-3 days ,, NT glared at him nd said.

NT: why n nd what about d party which I organised for Sam in ***** day after TM ,, u have to come that day.

Dev: i'll try my best ,, Aj called me nd said there wr some difficulty in making tree houses so need to visit d site .

Maan: it's good if u look yourself Dev ,, u cn advise much better ,, from here u cn't get hold , it must be needed few changes .

Dev: ji bro ,

NT fumed at this ,, she cn't go with him in this situation ,, sam was here with her nd she arranged a party for her nd invited their club friends ,, Sam too made faces ,, NT told dev to go after party but he was adamant to go in afternoon ,, he said that he wd try to come but NT was NT ,, she started her drama ,, all wr quiet , it was d matter of hubby nd wife ,, Dadima too kept quiet , she didn't like this ,, they cd solve their matter in their bedroom ,, NT stood in anger nd storm in ,, sam hurriedly followed her taking her phone but by mistake she took Geet's which look alike ,, Geet too didn't notice that nd after few min all moved from there ,, Geet secured d kitchen as well as planned d lunch with Nakul nd then came back in her room .

She was busy in her study then her phone gave a msg tone ,, Geet saw that nd opened to read ...

* mom ... tum kab milne aa rahi ho Samaira , nani aur mai intzaar ker rahe hein ,, ma'am wapas chali gai hei UK , tum ab aa sakti ho , naina ko bhi sath le aana , maa.*

Geet was confused , she after reading that msg ,, this was not her phone ,, it was sam's .

She backed d msg nd got up to return d phone ,, she went in Sam's room but she was in NT's room , she knocked before entered nd both d sis became quiet seeing her ,, Geet gave her phone to her nd said that by mistake she brought hers ,, sam said sorry nd returned Geet's .

Geet was thinking about d msg ,, her maa was sending msg to meet her nd Nani , means she was at home then why NT was lying that her mom nd nani wr in their guru's ashram ,, nd which ma'am went to UK ? why she said tum ab aa sakti ho?

Geet inwardly: kuch locha lagta hei , beti aai etne saal bad aur maa ashram chali gai ,, ye dono jhoot ku bol rahi hei ? Geet's mind was running nd then she thought a plan ... sach bolne wali dawai ,, yes ! Baba Maan singh Khurana maaf kerna aaj aapki brandy ki bottle chura rahi hun bar se .

She planned few things nd rushed to Nt's room with an evil smile ,, both wr still there ,, she entered with a smile .

Geet: aree NT plzz mood off matt karo ,, 1-2 din humare sath bhi raha lo akele ,, Sam se pata nahi kab mile ,, tum party de rahi ho uske liye to maine socha ku na aaj eve mei family party kerty hein ,, pool to KM mei bhi hei so aaj hum sab ki taraf se sam aur tumhare liye poolside party ,, ek eve to hume de sakti ho na sam , plzz .

Sam nd NT looked at each other nd agreed ,, they wr free nd said that in day time they wd go for shopping nd at eve they both join d family for d dinner ,, Get thanked nd cme out.


Precap - a poolside party from Geet ...😉



Part - 79



😊 sorry for mistakes

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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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