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Chapter 3





Maaneet wedding was conducted on a grand scale. Of course, no noisy functions were held but all rituals were completed within few hours. Marriage was legally registered, copies of certs were collected and everyone returned home after 4 days. They were soo
happy that finally geet cud relax without any more trouble.





After lunch that afternoon, ladies were sitting in the huge lounge room, geet was lying on rano's lap and all were chatting away merrily. Just then, a maid came forward holdin the cordless and gave it to rano saying it was her sister's call. Rano took it and
hung up in two minutes. She looked worried about something.
Dadi and shivani guessed it, and asked her what was up.






"Meri behen pammi apni beti kamya ke sath aa rahi hai kal. Wo yaha rahegi kuch din." Rano replied looking at geet nervously.




"Oh no! geet groaned. Ab dekhna mumma, kamya muje phir tang karegi. She complained.




"Kamya tuje tang karti hai bache?" Shivani asked her. " Haan mom. Wo na muje raat mei sone nai deti. Meri toys vi kharab kar deti hai. Last time aayi thi tab usne meri wo angel wali skirt tear kar di, jo aap meri b'day ko leke aye." Geet complained very cutely.





Dadi and shivani decided to watch out for kamya. The girl sounded bothersome. Rasno too did not like her behavior but kept quiet as she dint wanna hurt her sis.




Next morning:




Geet was sitting on her bed, waiting for maan to finish his bath. They wud go to the dining hall together as geet was given to running down the stairs. Maan wanted to take her safely, as her feet could slip on the smooth marble floor. Coming out of the shower, maan dressed and picked up his phone to answer the call exiting the room for proper reception. Geet went to the balcony, enjoying the cool breeze. She had only stood there for a minute when something weighed heavily upon her and she felt a strong tug in her head. "Owww! she cried out in pain. Someone was pulling her hair with slight force. Then she heard mischievous laughter.
She turned in confusion and saw her cousin kamya, making silly faces and clutching her hair. Geet said, "kamya mere bal choro." But the girl kept on tugging them more. As geet yowled in pain once more, shivani appeared at the door and glared at the mean girl in front.





"Kamya, geet ko chodo." She roared angrily. Kamya instantly left geet and came out of the balcony. Geet was rubbing her head. Shivani went to her and made her sit on the bed. Then she applied warm ointment on geet's head where kamya had pulled her hair. Geet's pain lessened and she sighed in relief.




"Geetu, dining mei jao, maan aur dadi wait kar rae hain." She said and the girl went downstairs. Kamya started following her but shivani stopped her and asked the reason for pulling geet's hair.





"aunty, mei bas geet ko surprise kar rai thi." Kamya replied grinning. "Ye koi surprise nai hoti kamya, tumgeet ko hurt kar rai thi. Muje tumara bartav bilkul acha nai laga. Try to behave yourself while you are here." Shivani warned her and left.






Dinign room:





Pammi and kamya were seated and geet went to take her chair. Just then, pammi stopped her saying, " Are geet puttar, tum baith kaise rahi ho? Sabse pehle kitchen se sab items lekar aao. Table set kar ke sab ko serve karo, tabhi tum khaogi. Ab tumari shadi ho gai hai. Tum ne hi sabko nashta, lunch aur dinner serve karna chahiye." Pammi taunted geet slyly.




Geet just gaped at the mother-daughter. Poor girl did not know what meant by kitchen or chores, how cud she serve all the food or even set the table? She stood there with a shrunken face, just then shivani and all others came from behind. They had heard every word and were fuming at pammi.




Shivani said, "Pammi, kya patti padha rai ho meri beti ko?" "kuch nai bhai, said Pammi. " Main to bas geet ko samjha rai thi ki ab iski shadi hui hai to isne pehle sab ko khana serve karke phir baad mei khana chaiye. " "Ab to iski duty banti hai na." Pammi grinned around.




Dadima replied, "Pammi, geet ghar ki maid nai hamari bachi hai. Serve karne ka kaam maid ka hota hai. Waise aap ne ye sare family manners kamya ko to sikhye hongi hi. To kyu nai aaj kamya hum logo ko serve kare? Humei bhi to pata chale ki Aap ki beti in kaamo mei kitni expert hai!" Dadima teased pammi unmercifully.





Now kamya had no choice but to accept. She knew they cud not refuse dadima. Mahesh indicated her to follow him. Kamya went straight to the kitchen where butlers were piling food bowls on trays. Vinod handed her one tray laden with bowls and crockery. Then they all went outside again kamya following them. She was about to put the plates down when Dadi ma said, "Rukiye kamya. Pehle tablecloth spread kijiye. uske pehle serve kar rai ho aap?"





Nakul helped kamya hold the tablecloth and they spread it together. Then the girl arranged the bowls, crockery and cutlery along with the staff. Jugs full of water and fresh juice, glasses for serving drinks and dessert pots came next. Kamya laid out everything laboriously. She was about to start serving food when shobit interrupted her saying that she forgot the warm milk for geet. He asked her to get it from the kitchen. Kamya nodded her head and again went to bring the milk. Deepak showed her the kettle and took ouit the mug and spoon. He put in haldi powder and half spoon sugar. Then he had kamya pour out the milk. She did it carefully in case the milk spilled out and someone again scolded her.





Then deepak put the mug carefully on the small tray and asked kamya to take it outside. Kamya was seething in anger. She carried the tray to the table and served the milk to geet. But she banged the mug slightly while putting it down. Geet jumped with the sound and the three men glared at kamya.




"Kya kar rai ho tum? Tum ko theek se serve karna nai ata? Shobit burst out and carefully inspected geet's arm to check if she got burned. But the girl was okay so he said nothing. Kamya then served the breakfast for everyone rapidly. Twenty minutes went on like this. Finally serving her own plate, she sat down. Running around all the time and arranging all the things had exhausted her. Kamya was tired and hungry, also irritated as she was made to work so much before eating. Everyone ate silently. Half an hour later, breakfast was over and staff cleared away the table and other things. Maan, dadi ma and mohinder were smiling in their sleeves. Pammi was unable to utter a single word, because nobody wud stand the slightest nonsense from her. Bidding geet and the ladies goodbye, the men left for office. Dadi ma, geet and rano went to the garden with shivani while pammi and kamya went to their room.





Kamya sat with both hands dipped in a hot water bowl. Her hands were aching due to the weighty crockery she had held to serve food. Hailing from a rich family herself from her late father's side, even kamya was not used to doing such kind of work. She burst out at her mom. "Mom, apko kya zarurat thi geet ko kuch bolne ki? Aap ki wajah se Maan ki dadi aur parents ne muje kitna daudaya kaam kar ne ke liye. Mere dono hath toot rahe hai." She whimpered in pain.




"Beta, mai to geet ko sabke samne inferior prove karna cha rai thi. Muje kya pata tha ki Khuranas itna gussa ho jayenge! Wo sab usko bahot pyar karte hai. I think geet ko unse dur karne ke liye itna kafi nai hoga. Kuch idea se hi geet ko is ghar se hatana padega. Tabhi tum is ghar mei geet ki jagah par maan se shadi karke aa sakogi. Yaha tum ko hona chaiye, na ki geet ko." Pammi soothed her daughter. She wowed to get kamya wedded to maan anyhow by hook or by crook.



Here is part 3. Pls comment n like. Me want responses.




Chapter 4 - Page 2



Edited by turbulence - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow update after so long!
Hmm but I have a small complaint. ...😔
Its been 3 parts not even one maaneet scene!
Not fair...😛

N please try n update soon. .
Waiting for the next!
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Hey dear!!!!!!!!!!!


just read the three parts


they are amazing 👏


great start ⭐️


missing maaneet 😭


ek scene to banta hai boss 😛 😉 😆


do cont soon


love


uma... 🤗
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Chapter 4







Evening in H.K Mansion:







Maan came early from office after finishing his meeting. Dadi maa and his mothers

were out to visit some friends. On inquiring from Madhav he got to know that

Pammi was in the parlour with her daughter. Geet was inside the study room. He

went to his room and freshening up quickly, went to the study to meet his angel.

In the study room a very cute sight met his eyes. Geet was standing in fromt of a

huge canvas and applying finishing touches to a lovely painting. He quietly went

forward and put his hands on her delicate waist. Surprised geet turned around and

instantly hugged him grinning widely. Maan caressed her soft hair with his long

fingers and said, "Aaj itne dino ke baad kya paint ho raha hai?" Geet smiled and

said, "Maanu mai na dono moms aur dadi ji ke liye dresses design kar rai hoon.

Dekho aisi dresses banegi un teeno ke liye. Aur dono dady and tumare liye ye wale

tuxedo. Kaisi hai?" She showed him the completed paintings. Looking at her work

he was totally spell bound. Gosh the designs wer just awesome. Maan was aware of

Geet's talent but had seen it for the first time today. The garments were so lovely

that Geet cud easily start her own fashion house anywhere in the world that very

moment.

"Bahot achi hai mishty. Acha ab inko dry hone do phir sab ko dikhayenge." Maan

retorted happily. But geet said, "Naai manu sabko dikhayi to meri puri surprise

khatam ho jayegi. Pls inko ready hoke aane do phir sab ko gift karenge." She said

with such an adorably cute expression that maan cudn't help smiling. Hugging his

doll closely he wondered how much she loved her whole family, specially him. He

was really lucky to have the angel in his life. Maan then decided it was the time for

his surprise as well. He took a big packet and started opening it. It was wrapped in

a shiny pink wrapping paper. Geet was really happy and excited looking at the

present. She asked him, "Ye kya hai maanu?" He replied with a smile, "Shone ye

tumari gift. Dekho tumari fav pooh dress hai." He took out a dark yellow pooh

pant and red colored pooh tank top. Geet squealed happily and took it. "Mai kab

wear karu?" She asked him and he said her to wear it instantly. She went to the

dressing room and wore it. But then geet quickly returned in 5 minutes. She was

glaring agrily at maan. The poor guy cudn't understand what happened. He gulped

and asked her, "Kya hua sweety? Tum ko dress achi nai lagi?" Geet again glared at

him and said tugging the top, "Itni short wali top kyu laye tumne? Dekho meri pant

se niche nai jati hai. Pata hai na ghar mei itni short dress kisi ko pasand nai hai. Sab

muje datenge isko dekh ke. Dadi ji kya sochingi?" Geet was worried about her dadi

and parents' reaction after seeing the dress. Maan smilingly shook his head and

taking her on his lap after settling on the couch, clutched her little face lovingly and

said, "Cutie maine ye sab ke samne wear kar ne ke liye tumari dress nai kharidi. Ye

to tumare liye nightsuit hai. Ise tum sirf sote time pehnogi. Tab koi bhi nai dekhega.

Samjhi?" Geet nodded her head seriously making him laugh. She was a complete

baby. It was so easy to convince her. Maan just sat there hugging her. Her soft little

form in his embrace gave him so much peace. He wished the time would just stop and

his love should multiply more and more.





At Dinner time:

The whole family was seated for dinner around the huge 30

seater table. Pammi and kamya were lil bit away as the little space was over

crowded by all the main family members. Everyone was happily sharing the

day's events. Mohinder and shobit were relating the meeting stories and

funny incidents about the clients. Laughter was heard and the atmosphere

was really joyful. Geet was being carefully served the food items by everyone.

In turn, she was piling food on everyone's plates along with maan. In fact it

was geet who always insisted that the entire family should serve each other

instead of waiting for the staff to keep serving all the dishes. Her idea was

liked by everyone. As geet was giggling on mohinder and shobit's funny office

stories, kamya was burning in anger and jealousy. She remembered her own

father. He too was just like geet and maan's fathers. He loved his wife and

daughter very much. But fate was cruel to kamya as five years ago she lost

her dad to a heart disease. Since that day she had become irritable and also

somewhat nasty. Her father's death was something she could not overcome

nor forget it. Unable to eat any more she just rose and left the table. Pammi

sighed sadly and followed her daughter to the garden. They both felt peace

in the cool open air.


After finishing the dinner everyone completed their evening walk and

retired to their bedrooms. All were tired after the hectic day so needed some

rest. Few hours passed. Even maaneet were sleeping soundly in their room.

Suddenly geet stirred from her sleep and feeling thirsty looked around for

the water. But she saw the jug empty. She looked at maan but he was sleeping

so she didn't want to disturb him. So quietly getting out of her bed, Geet tiptoed

out of the room. She walked very silently thru the corridor and down the big

staircase. As she reached the ground floor she saw someone going inside the

kitchen. She went forward and tapped the person on the shoulder. With a

gasp of horror the woman turned around and geet's eyes widened in shock.

It was none other than our dear sweet dadi maa. She too lokked at geet in

surprise and asked her what she was doing there. Geet said, "Dadi ji mai to

ice-cream khane ayi thi. " Dadi maa smiled and said, "Waise bete hum bhi

ice cream khane hi aaye hai. Hum kisi ko bolte to koi manta nahi. Aur aaj

hum ko bahot man ho raha tha ice cream khane ka. Geet smiled and said that

they ought to go and eat right then. Dadi maa smiled and both went inside

the kitchen. Daadi opened the big freezer and took out the tub of chocohip

ice cream. Geet took two spoons and both sat at the little square table to enjoy

their dessert. With happy swirling sounds both were slurping the ice cream

from their spoons. Just then geet stopped eating and became very still. Dadi

maa raised her eyebrows and asked what was up. Geet put a finger on her lips

and pointed outside. Dadi maa quickly switched off the light and both hid just

behind the table in a corner.


Quick footsteps echoed outside in the hall. Holding hands two men were

walking fast towards the kitchen. Actually mohinder had sensed someone

crossing the corridor while geet was creeping towards the kitchen for her post

midnight treat. So silently going into shobit's room he woke his friend and

they both had come down to check themselves. They suspected it was their

naughty old mother who mostly behaved like a kid. Shobit was still yawning

and mohinder pulled inside the kitchen. They both saw around very carefully.

Moonlight was streaming inside from a side window grill so the kitchen was

bright enuf to observe properly.


"Lagta hai yaha koi nai hai mohi. Chal jakar so jate hai. Waise hi aadhi

raat ho gayi hai." Shobit said drowsily. He could not understand why his

friend was so picky about looking for the night walker. "Oye chup kar. Muje

lagta hai zaroor maa yaha par aayi hongi. Tujhe pata hai na, itni buzurg ho

gayi hai phir bhi bacho ki tarah zidd karti hai ice cream ke liye. Doctor ne

forbid kiya hai phir bhi khati rehti hain hum sab se chhupa kay. Khud to

kabhi kuch bolega nahi lekin unki tabiyat kharaab ho gayi toh? Kaun unko

sambhalega phir?" He scolded his friend. Shobit nodded his head in an

understanding manner. He knew his naughty mother very well. She never

took the doctor's advice seriously. She loved cold food and would always

sneak inside the kitchen for any cold treats whenever she could. "Theek hai.

Chalo light on karke dekhte hain. They switched on the lights and looked all

around the huge kitchen. But both ladies were hiding behind the farthest fruit

table so the men could not see them at all. Thinking that he must been really

mistaken, mohinder put out the lights and both friends went away to their

rooms chatting merrily as they ascended the stairs.



After 10 minutes Geet and Dadi maa finished their ice cream and then

threw away the empty tub. Washing their chocolate smeared faces, Dadi maa

said geet that it was quite late now so they ought to go and sleep. Geet agreed

and started following dadi maa to her room. But she was not aware that the

next moment would snatch the ground from under her feet. A shocker was

coming her way rapidly. It was going to give her a very horrifying surprise.








Guys updated chapter 4. Read karo and lazy bums pls comment fast. Kyu

muje naraaz kar rahe ho? Pata hai fingers mei kitna pain ho raha hai? Chalo

ab jaldi se comments karo. Nai to update phir kabi nai dungi.









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very nice part geet is so cute n dadima also
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wow
lovly part
geet n dadi r so cute...
what is surprise???
Update nxt a bit earlier
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Writer giving dhamki😲
chalo thank god we had a maaneet scene finally!!
Loved the part geet is too cute
n such a sweet family😳

Waiting for the next!

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superb update... wht is this pammi & kamya upto now?

missing maneet moments
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Parts 3 -4

Awesome Updates

You did mention that Geet is between 18-19 years old right
Maan just adores his lovely cute wife , while Pammi and Kamya wants to make her feel low in front of everybody and Pammi was shocked to see the love the Khurana's hold for Geet .
Pammi also promises Kamya that she'll get her married to Maan
but why do they dislike Geet that much .
Daadima and Geet sneaking into the kitchen for ice cream was just so cute loved that whole while the two men are looking for the night prowlers .
precap sounds a little scary

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