SACRED LOVE|| MG FF||PART 23- PAGE 120||UPDATED 18/12 - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago
Meera is trying in her way to make Geet understand them !
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Part 17 Geet couldn't win but maan consoled her
Part 18 Maan making Geet's Annie's tutor and he is investigating on sujatha
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PART 19


Maan's father asked Arush to inform geet about anie's tuition. Arush was glad that at least her problem would be resolved .

At night he message all on Whatsapp...

Ronak immediately called arush..

Uncle asked her to take anie's tutions..but what about SU aunty(ronak gave sujata this nickname)..All of them got not so good vibes form her.but geet and maan never agreed !!

I don't knw we have to figure out something.arush said.they did call conferencing and connected all except ajay..he was..in family party(Ronak was happy about this)!

ronak- Sooo

akshata- soo

Hmm...geet said rubbing her chin

arush- SO..what Guys..I think geet should go ahead for this

pratty - Ya..Don how hard will it be to teach a 8th std. girl..huh..

Ronak came up with an amazing idea..

Sweets..u could take her tuitions in the evening after 7 u knw..maan will be der by that time..Su aunty wont taunt her before him.. she thought

But what has she got to do..in that geet asked totally confused

Nothing babes just chuck it..

They talked for an hr..and bid bye and slept.

Next day...maan braced himself to investigate sujata on his own..he definitely couldn't sit like this when is chiku is involved

He sat on the breakfast table..waiting for sujata..

All others came..and anie informed them that sujata has gone to Shimla for some urgent work..

Shimla...she was talking to someone about visiting Shimla.

Maan bete what happened why are u not eating anything..Rajeneder asked him

Uhh..nothing dad he came out of his thoughts and nibbled his food quietly.

The gang had a normal day and geet left straight to SAVITRI NIWAS after her lecs..pratty left her

She came out of the giggling...

U wont come na.. she asked shaking her head

No don..i prefer dying at my old age rather than..now..So I m not interested entering a devil's den..he scares me

Hey don't call him dat..stupid she smacked his head.

Pratty stepped back and winked at her. Changing the gear he..left

Geet went inside...happily and a cheerful aniee greeted her..She hugged her in excitement

Yeyy,,di u'll be my teacher..

Heheh..yes sweety ..she chuckled at her

U knw aap na kabhi kabhi yah ape ruk jana so..we can have long chats...at night She widen her eyes in excitement...

Geet smiled at her and nodded

I guess she is here to take ur tuitions choti...girls day out k liye nahi

Both turned their heads to see maan who was giving them..What r u guys upto look

Geet and anie frowned at him..while He raised his brows...

Get started...anie get ur books..Go he said sternly...anie nodded making a face and moved to her room.

chiku sit ...she ignored him..and sat..

Both sat there quietly...

He looked at geet couple of times...but she dint spare him a glance...he narrowed his brows..

Ummhmm He cleared his throat...in order to gain her attention

Aniiee...aniee...come fast I m here to teach u...She said the last part glaring him..

Maan sighed...

Geet its...

No I get it...u are pretty strict about her tutions and my job...I knw..its alright..

Look chiku.I dint...anie came with her books..and sat down..with geet on the sofa..maan quieten

Geet smiled at her..So lets start...

Yep di...We will start with maths...

Okay..geet shot a prayer to babaji...I hope yeh easy ho..

She took her rough book and started with the first sum. Maan looked at them..both were engrossed . He checked his phone.there was no call from his detective. He couldn't leave mr.khurana and anie alone here ...so he asked the detective...to do so. Since then..its been 8 hours..but he dint call back yet. Maan was waiting for his call eagerly

Bhai...bhai..Anie's loud voice broke his thoughts...

Maan turned to aniee who was patting geet's back..as she was coughing hard.

chiku...within seconds he was next to her holding her and rubbing her back..

Anie get water..chiku are u okay..aniee ran to kitchen..

Maan....cough...I..m okay cough...

Maan panicked seeing her state..she constantly rubbed her back..anie bought water and he made her drink it..

She stopped coughing..and felt a little better...Maan kept the glass and held her shoulder..chiku are u alright now...

Di u r okay..anie asked worriedly

HMm..she smiled a little at anie..m okay cough..

Chiku how many times have I told u not have ice cream...huh..???humesha aise karti ho..kabhi meri baat nahi sunti maan said angrily..

But...maanu...she made a baby face..maan shook his head..and helped her sitting properly

Di aap okay ho na...anie asked as she sat by her...geet nodded yeh ice cream ka kya funda hai..

Maan moved back to his place..jane do anie..long story chiku jab bhi ice creame khati hai..she immeaitely has waiter..due to which she gets sever cough..yeh kisi ki baat sunti hi nahi...humesha apni manmarzi karti hai..and looked away..he never likes the way she ignores her health

Geet frowned at him....yaa..mai manm,arzi karti...aaj tak sab kuch toh tumhare pasand se hi hua..maan haw...and u say ki mai..tumhari baat nahi manti...I m not gona talk to u..huhh...

Here goes the drama queen again he thought...Anie was giggling continuously...the servant bought..snacks for them..

Geet and anie immediately pounced at it..While maan took his coffee

Samosas..nahi ...hai geet said..eating her slice of pizza...

Chiku already there is enough food ...in ur plate..aur kitna kahogi..waise wonder itna sara khana jata kaha ahi.. He said chuckling geet shot him a angry look and made a O shape face

Ha..di aap still itna maintain kaise kar leti..ho...If I ear this much I'll definitely turn fat ..aur aapki to skin bhi achi hai anie said in awe..

Aree aniee I'll tell u my secret..and ignore ur brothers...i'll tell u she started explaining..giving her skin tips..

Maan looked at both the weirdo's...yeh dono pagal hai...and smiled shaking his head...

After a while...when they wer done..maan volunteered to drop geet home. Geet bid bye to anie...and moved outside..

Chiku..y so quiet andar toh itna sara gossip kar rahe ti..anie k sath..hmmm maan asked they wer had way through..and still she dint open his mouth..

She dint answer just looked away..Maan parked the car ..in the middle of the road..

He turned to face..chiku...chikuu he called her once again..She still dint see him..he slowly held her shoulder making her face him..only to see tears brimming in her eyes...

Chikku...he said totally shocked...she dipped her eyes low..

Maan framed her face...chiku what happened...y are u crying..kya hua he looked her helplessly...wiping her tears

Geet lifted her lashes to see him...the care and concern in his eyes..she looked away...

u..u said that..i don't follow ur words...mai..mai apni mann ki karti..hu she said sniffing...She really felt hurt...when he uttered those words...

No...chiku...who maine...he sighed hevily...

Maine toh who gusse mai..bola tha...bacha..i dint mean..u knw I get so worried for u for u health dats y...m so sorry...he said genuinely...He couldn't imagine that those words would hurt her..so much that it would make her cry this baldy..

m...M sso ssoory chiku...he said cutely holding his ears..

she looked him...and made a baby face...

Hmmm nahi maanu...she held his hand and shook her head...

maan took out his hanky and wiped her tears lovingly...while geet smiled softly

After she was better he resumed. Driving and...reached her place.

She got down...and smiled widely..good night..

Maan removed a chocolate bar form bqck seat and gave it to her..good night chiku...

She beamed in happiness..thank u ..maanu and cutely pulled his cheeks...through window..

Chikuuu...maan scowled...

Heheh..okay sorry sorry gn...she waved him bye

He smiled and...drove outside..

Maan reached home..and got a call from his detectives..

Sir...the scam that ur company is facing...is due to her, our investigation proves that she is behind all this...

What ..??u mean 90 croers wer illegally handed over to her..??

Yes sir in her account...she was using her credit card..for shopping..and when we investigated further..we came across this scam..

Hmm..and whom did she meet dere..

She went st.michela's school...and did shopping and was in her hotel..ha..and met Mrs. Rekha sharma ..nothing fishy or absurd happened

Rekha shrama..she is masi's frnd...and maybe she went to anie s school for anie's work...

Okay..thank u..

Maan crashed on bed

Masi maa was behind this scam..but unhe paise chayie the toh humse hi mang leti...after all she is in our family..i cant say this to dad...It ll only create differences between them..

he trusted her ..that she couldnt harm him or his chiku

And if masi maa is insecure about something...I ll help her fix it...

Hmm...and maine hi geet ka naam suna hoga..masi maa aise kyu karegi...yaa I suppose I dint hear properly...

Shimla-

Mam u r job is done..we told him exactly what u said...

Thanks.u'll get ur payment soon....sujata said with a crooked smile.when detective followed her to Shimla..she confronted them and offered much more than maan..to work for her

Poor maan beta...Humari fitrat ka andaza bhi aapko nahi hai...hum apni neyat itna jaldi aapke samne nahi ane denge not at least i m dont with my motive...and laughed

Pecap- exams

happy Diwali to all of u...guys!!

Plz hit like and comment...and tell me which update u want next...i mean after Diwali...:P :P

Love

sweta

Edited by crazy_sweta - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing. Itna mystery kyun hain 🤔 . maan's maasi ke saath.
Loved geet teaching annie. maan worrying for geet./. Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Update
Gosh Sujata is damn evil and very more cunning and Maan still wants to trust her , these dectectives reay they can do anything just for money
hope Maan soon finds the whoe truth about Sujata before its too late
Geet gets hurt by Maan's words but he too apologizes and she sees
his concern for her and as always she just forgives him easily

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no last mein yeh kya dhamaka diya. uss chudail ne tho paasa hi palat diya and detective ko hi khareed liya.😲😲😡ab maan kya karege. wo buddu ko ab kuch bhi nahi maloom hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
What is sujata upto?
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...geet started taking annie's tution...masi maa is really dangerous...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part baby geet went 2 maan's house nd annie was very much happy 2 c her 😃
Maan scolded geet as she nt takng care of herself 👍🏼
bt geet took it 2 heart nd cried nd maan felt bad 2 c her cryng 😭
maan said sry 2 his chiku in cute way 😳
maan's masi is very dangerous hpe maan ill find out abt her
waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice👏👏



geet in km😉



maan hurt geet😭



maan asked sorry😉



sujatha mislead maan😡



update soon

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