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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


thats because of your regular updates!
n try n reply all the comments... 😊


i will 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deep002

wonderful update dear, geet has to complete her three task OMG, she will do it for her maan


thanks sweety !!!😃
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thank u...
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Originally posted by: Desire6

lovly part..maan s so happy as she is participating in singing competiition

cont soon
thanks for pm dear...



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thank you!!!
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Originally posted by: flowing_river

geet's friends are true friends in every sense...
loved the way they care,protect each other..😃
and maan and chicku are so so cute...geet has habit to share every thing with maan..
maan is jumping like kid for geet..😛



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice updates...

is meera jealous and type of negative in here


and so geet will sing and try ti win also hope she does



thanka for ur comment..m glad u liked it!!
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Special thanks to UMA for these lovely banners... I LOVE U GIRL..!!!!!!!!

Thank u all...for loving this ff...!!I had replied all ur comments if I dint then plz don't mind.. actually I reply though my cell..so sometimes I not able to reply all..!!I am very happy with ur likes and comments so..i am giving u all double update today...

I need to make certain things clear

Mr khuarna-Rajander khurana maan's father

Mrs.khurana-Maan s mother Sunaina khurana

Sujata khurana-Maan's step mom

Rano handa-Geet's mom

Mohinder handa-Geet's dad

Aniee-sujata's 13 year old daughter..studying in shimla

As ill be writing little of the past ..so u will need this information..

PART 7

Maan was very haapy throughout the day Mr.Khurana and arush could feel his excitement but both had knw idea why!!

Geet came from college early she dint go with pratty .She freshened up n sat with her books. She prepared a chart which could help her Okay so exams are 3 and half months later the competition is next week and vivas 3 months k baad. Okhay so if I start studying now little I'll be able to finish the basics.

She prepared her timetable sincerely and started studying. She dint wanted to disappoint maan dis time. Later akshu came to meet her and saw geet totally lost in her books. She was surprised but was glad geet started her syllabus preparations. She spoke about the techniques to crack the problems and other stuffs.

Yash arrived in afternoon. Whole day he was with meera who was throwing tantrums at him. He went to meet geet after a while and saw her immersed in books. He made no noise and entered her room quietly .He took small steps towards her leaned closer to her ears and shouted..gettt

She dropped her pen and shut her eyes tightly getting scared aaa

Hahahahaah...gettu yash laid on her bed laughing.

She pouted and made a cute angry face Gosh bhai..u r too much I hate you u scared me again huuhh she complained

They had little chat. Yash listened things that took place in his absence wished her luck and he left.

Next day-

Maan beta Mr.khurana called Maan

Ji aya dad he said loudly took long strides and reached dining table wer his dad was waiting for him.

Maan u r not coming office today mr.Khurana informed him take a sip of his steaming coffee

What y dad Maan exclaimed...

Maan ...seriously I can handle one day...alone I want u to sit at home and decide wer u want to fo ur MBA..Ur results will be out in 2 weeks.

Mumbai dad.. how can I leave her and go..Maan murrmered.

What ..

Nothing dad..i was planning to do it from Mumbai only..

Maan mumbai dosent have best colleges..and ur marks can provide with best college..u could try for overseas universitites..

Dad I ..

No maaan if u r taking dis decision for me..no..i want u to get the best..beta please..tumhe age KHURANA's ki companies sambalni hai..soo u have to opt the best..

HAAA JI aapka toh yehi beta hi hai..aur toh koi nahi hai..

Sujata said smirking ...and sat on the dinning chair..

Haina maan hum aur humari beti toh kuch nahi hai..

Nahi massi maa aisa kuch nahi..hai Jitna mera hai utna hi.aapka hai..he said

She laughed and spat we just slaves right..Dats y ur father married me forcefully after my di died...

Bas ek aur shabad nahi bologi tum Mr.khuaran roared ...He threw the napkin and stood up

Tumhe mere sath shaddi karni padi because of anni ..who was in ur womb.. who bhi kiska pata nahi Ur parents are responsible ..for dat..Humne kabhi tumhe takleef nahi di..toh tum bhi hume mat do..
Just stay in ur limits and don't interfere in our matters..
He said fuming

Maan rushed to him..And held his back patting it..Dad please shant ho jaye..

While Sujata shrugged her shoulder gave them a cold smile sipping her tea calmly... Like his words had no effect on her.

Chaliyee dad maan took his dad outside in the garden. Paani piliye ..He said offering him glass of water..

MR.khurana had it.. he patted his cheek and lowered his lashes in shame ..M soory beta I couldn't give a good mother..

Tumahari maa k jane k baad I thought ur massi will become ur mother..but I was so wrong..i m and bad father

Maan held his hand no dad u r the best dad..please don't say dis..He hugged him..Aapne joh kiya acha kiya I m happy na...agar aap aise nahi karte toh pata nahi..annie(sujata's daughter) aaj.. he paused ...U r the best dad...m lucky to have u

Mr.Khurana thanked his wife for giving him maan as a son.Maan decided to stay back and think over universities while his father left for office.

Geet had decided to practice singing alternate days.So Geet pratty and akshu met at ajay's place .Akshata was all the way feeling shy..she was slowly developing feelings for ajay..while ajay enjoyed her company he could feel her getting nervous again and again.Both wer playing hide and seek through their eyes. Pratty noticed them many times but dint Utter a word.Ronak was busy toh she couldn't come..(good nahi toh AJAY AND akshu ki love story start hone nahi deti...possessive ronak)

Geet it's the 3rd time ..please sing properly Dil se gana gaoo.tumahre sur thik se nahi lag rahe .ajay told her again..

Every time she sang she either forgot her lyrics or her pitch or sur was not proper she was nervous..She wished maan was here with her.

Mujhese nahi hoga ajay...She said sadly

Aree Don inte jaldi haar nahi maante..lets take a break and then phir se start karenge..Pratty said looking at geet's condition.

Okay ill get something for u guys..ajay said getting up..

U also go with him..pratty fingered akshata...

Akshata nodded and left with him.

As they left Geet raised her brows and gave pratty a what-is -happening- look.

Pratty rolled his eyes at her stupid look..Dhakan cant u see them..They seem to like each other..he said as a matter of fact..

What nonsense..akshu ne kabhi kisi lakde ko dekh like like wike nahi kiya she said sitting next to him

u r kidding cant u see their chemistry their bonding..plus dono itna nervous ho jate hai..ek durse ko dekh k its obvious man..

Ohh love guru akshata is not like ur type of girls..she replied punching his shoulder..

Ouuchh ..i knw dats y..i can see dat in her eyes..Don. he relied honestly

Hmmm..lets c agar aisa hai toh we shall help them she said grinning

Sure agar teri ronak ne ajay ko zinda choda..Y she is behind data ajay..She literally scares him to death..he said making an horrible expression.

Hehehe geet giggled she is just possessive about her...ill handle her don't worry..

Wait..pratty rushed outside as he got his gf's call..

Geet sighed and again tried to sing..but again her alaap was not proper...she was not able to concentrate

Giving up..she called maan..

Maan picked up her call..

Maaan plzz tell me what to do I m not able to sing in baby tone..

Maan almost laughed but he controlled Chiku just sing from ur heart..He paused and sofly said..meri chiku world ki best singer hai..pata hai na..

Geet beamed with happiness she was so happy to hear those words...It raised her confidence level..

Now go...n do ur best.

Yes maaan thank you...

Ummm

And ur the best...mannnu she said hurriedly and cut the call..feeling happy.

Maan smiled and shook his head.He assumed that she was practicing.

But maine toh use bataya nahi tha about my competition..She got confused..

Zayda soch mat geet use pata hi hoga he is keeping ur track..Punishment diya hai toh nibana toh padega na..and giggled at her own joke...

Ajay and akshata came smiling with their snacks.Pratty and geet observed them..while eating.patty gestured at them..to geet nodding her looking at their bonding.

It was time for geet to sing again..She closed her eyes recollected maaan's words smiled..and sang the song.She kept her eyes closed while singing .Ajay akshata and pratty applauded as she finished her song..She smiled at them and excitedly ask ajay..Was I good..??

U wer the best...He exclaimed..

Geet smiled widely and hugged akshu and pratty. Practiced for some more time.

Later all bid bye to ajay and left.

Maaan spent half day thinking about geet and about MBA.He dint wanted to leave Mumbai..but couldn't neglect his dad's words.

His phone rang it was geet..

He instantly picked up..Ha chiku... He said sweetly

MAAN mai tumhare ghar k neeche hu..come fast and she cut the call.

Maan got confused he immediately got up and ran down..There she was standing in his garden.

She was wearing patiyala suit today...the colour red suited the most. Her curls teasing her cheeks uff..he was totally fida ..and that pout it will be death of him some day. He saw her cute angry expressions and came out of his dream land.

He went near her with an cold expression..

Why did u come here??Mujhe kyu bulaya..mai free nahi hu humesha u have to ask me...before coming here ..

His words wer falling on her deaf ears.Geet just twisted her lips at him..She was used to his angry expressions. She feared him only wen she did something wrong.. And showed her hand indicating him to stop...He pressed his lips together making a thin line...and place hands on his waist

She turned

Bas geet ko chilana ata hai...tumhe.. .Maaan baad mai gussa karna mujh par I have important work with you now .please she said making baby face..

He immediately got serious kya hua..chikuu..kuch problem hai kya..holding her arms he turned her...

She saw his face and kept looking. This was the first time that she was continuously staring at him.She saw something else other than care and concern his those eyes..which she failed to read that.

Maan was waiting for her to speak while she was lost in him...

Scroll down for next part..

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PART 8

Maan snapped his fingers ... to bring her out of her lost look. She came out of her trance and was confused about her behavior.

Chiku tell me kya hua he asked her now holding her from shoulders..

She made o shape and shook her head..getting back to normal

Maanu mujhe shopping pe jana hai . I have my 1st round on 2nd of next month . I have nothing good to wear she said pouting

Geeet he growled R u mad to call me for dis he pinched the bridge of his nose in anger.

Yes now lets leave its already 5-30 chalo..na jaldi she pleaded him

After lot of pleading maan agreed.They sat his in his car and left for mall. She was blabbering continuously about her day and her practice session and also about ajay and akshata. She even explained him about their bonding. Maan completely enjoyed her company he would just smile at her and nod his head indicating he is listening to her.

They stopped at the signal and a vendor came to sell chikoo. Maan rolled his window screen down.

Babu ji le le chikuu yeh sabse sweet and tasty chikoo hai... bohot hi meeta hai..

Maan looked at geet who was fuming.

Nahi chayiee chiku tumhare jaoo yaha se joaao.warna.she threatened the man and he left getting scared.

Maan burst into laughter. While geet rolled her eyes.

Past

Rano was running behind geet with fruits salad in her hand.

Geet ruko beta mom is tired now..she said panting heavily

Little geet came and sat next to her

Mom geetu ko yeh nahi khana plzz she said childishly

Rano picked her in her arms and made her sit in her lap.Beta fruits nahi kahogge to bade kaise honge aap..hmm she tried making her understand..

She made a cute angry face and saw the fruits She noticed brown colour fruit .

Mumma mujhe yeh wala khana hai pointing at that.

Rano singhed finally her ziddi daughter decided to have something .. Accha aapko chikoo khana hai..Beta yeh bohot sweet hai..khaoo aap

Geet looked her with big eyes and listen everything rano said about the benefits of chikoo while making her eat. She liked its taste.

Aap isse kahoge toh aap bhi sweet sweet ho jaoge...she said and tickled her..

After that maan came to meet geet in her room

Maanu tum mujhe chiku bulaoo..she stated

Kyaaa..??kyuu? he asked narrowing his brows

Mom ne kaha chikuu is sweet u saw..mai bhi sweet hu na isliye... she said proudly

Maan laughed and replied nahi who toh fruit hai...u r not fruit..u r not dat

Tears formed in her eyes at his comment. Maan rushed to her hugged her and said achaa baba I will call u chikuu bas..now to cry please ..he said wiping her tears

Geet giggled

Back to present

The honking of cars bought them back to present. Maan resumed driving with a smile on his face while geet was twisting her lips.

They reached mall and geet pulled him towards women's section.

There were many people in mall that time so it was quite a rush .While walking ahead someone pushed her and she lost her balanced closed her eyes preparing herself for and hard fall. Strangely it never happened She opened her eyes to witness his chocolate brown eyes. Maan held her before she could fall and landed her in his arms. His one hand was clutching her waist and the other was on her back. Both wer lost in each other's eyes. GEet circled her hands around his shoulder and neck .

She could feel her own heart beating fast and butterflies in her stomach as maan slid his hand along her waist.She feeling strangely good. Geet's cell broke their eyelock. Maan made her stand properly and both straighten themselves. Maan cursed himself for not controlling his feelings wen she is near. Geet was still confused and lost her cell was still ringing .Maan asked her to answer .She came back to reality and took the call.it was ronak geet explained her about the practice session and informed her being with maan and cut the call .Both wer feeling awkward but geet decided to end it.She held his arm and pulled him to women's section.

Geet was fussing over the clothes while maan was following her. His eyes fell on a dress which was gorgeous and pretty .He instantly imagined geet in that dress and decide to make her wear that.Geet had selected few tops and jeans and was moving towards the changing room to try those when maan came behind and tapped her shoulder and gave her the dress.

Geet took the dress . It was nice and pretty .It was orange colour sleeveless one piece . Geet checked the size and said

I don't think so... its my size maan.

I think so its ur size.. He said in trance who would knw ur size better than me..

What she said little loudly

Maan fumbled wooh I mean yeh acha ..I mean try dis it will suit u...please he said

Geet nodded and left for changing. She decided to try her tops and jeans and try the one piece. Outside the room maan was pacing back and forth impatiently. Finally after 20 mins geet called him

Mmmaan she called slowly

Geet he said and walked to her

He simply stood there as his eyes fell on her.

She was looking beautiful the dress perfectly hugged her at right places. It reached little above her knees. She was looking very elegant and stunning at the same time. The small beads dat wer dazzling around the neck area were making aesthetic.

Geet saw maan and his facial expressions could speak his appreciation for her.She smiled lowering her eyelashes and called him..

MMaan is it ohkay..

Ummm he said dreamily

Maaan she called out loudly

Haaa geet attractive..he bit his tongue the dress is attractive after all I chose it for u..

Geet just frowned at him

U Change and come ill wait for u at the desk..

She mouthed yes and shut the door cursing his for not giving a proper compliment.

SAVITRI NIWAS-

Hum tang aa chuke us maan se ab Sujata said on the phone

Aap yeh yaad rakhiye agar maan zinda hai toh geet k liye plan kabhi kaam nahi karega..

Usi time par agar who unke sath .. She sighed aapko humse milna padega we have to plan something big..

And kept the phone.

Hume hi kuch karna padega ab... Sujata said with an wicked smile.

Back to maneet.

Maan came outside and tried to suppress his emotions .He knew geet was unknown to his feelings as she was naive in dis matter .These instances would only confuse her further. Geet came after 10 mins. He payed for the dress and both left to car. Geet was still angry with him so she ignored him.

Maan knew y she was angry but dint say a word. They drove towards handa mansion.

I hope u r taking ur tasks seriously.. maan broke the silence..

Yess offcourse I m she said looking at him.I wont let u down dis time maan I promise she said. While maan nodded. They reached geet got down gave him a sweet smile and maan gave her fav chocolates to her. She squealed and grabbed the chocolates .Maan smiled at her childishness and left after a while.

hope u like it..!!!

Love

Sweta

plz comment if u liked the update...also give suggestions if u have any!!!!!!

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Nice parts maan want 2 stay at mumbai nd do mba bt his step mom wants him 2 go away 😡
geets is praticing bt cant do it properly she cald maan nd he filld courage in her nd she sang so nicely 😃
Geet is feelng smthing 4 maan nw dats gd 👏
geets dragd maan 4 shoppng nd maan lost in geet 😉
nw wt maan's step mom is upto 😡
uma nice banner baby lovd it 👏
waitng 4 d nxt part 😃

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