Awesum awesum awesum... .
Simply superb all i can say.
Just yesterday go through ur this ff HAQ nd really amazed to see the way u penned it down.
Firstly the concept u choose is quite different n unique.nd also title haq is also gud .
The way u penned it down one can easily visualize the scene in mind .
Really hatsoff to u.
I hv shortage of words now in now ur praise.u r an excellent writer with amazing writingi skills.
Nd now after the concept coming to the characters all r perfect at their place.maan when loves someone then love to no extent nd when hate sumone then hate to no extent.short tempered when comes his little angel.
Geet a 19 yr a widow with a 3 months old baby.being so young she never give up nd stnd on her feet to fulfill her little angle's every wish.
Bt sumwhere is little bit immature .unknown to many things .bt have a kind n big heart.
Dadi is so nice .took care of family nd understnd everyones needs nd love everyone.
Vicky is such a damn nice guy.his acts really made anyone laugh .esepcially when faced maan's anger (specially when becoz his little angel cry nd he can't make it up her).
Annie ,meera ,vicky n yash all r nice .
Bt my fav n most important character is only n only our cutie pie MITU.
She is such a joy of bundle.her cute innocent face bring smile on anyones face.
Really her cute antics make anyone crazy to take her in their arms n pull her chubby cheeks.
Bt mithu is mithu.so moody .never give her attention so easily.
Her beautiful smile,her pouty lips, cranky face ,angry face ,crying face all r just so cute .anyone want this angel to take in arms.
She is bst in all her moods.
Nd the way of her grabbing attention is mindblowing.
all chptrs r wonderful.not a single chptr when anyone get bored of reading it.really u beautifully write each n every part.its not like a fiction.every part is real.
Coming to the story maan loves geet unknown to the fact that she is a widow nd hv a daughter.bt still after after knowing about her past he still loves her with whole heart.
Thnkgod dadi there with him n encourage him to try once nd confess his feelings to her.
As she also a widow hence knows that everyone shuld get a secnd chance to live there again nd live it happily.
Maan confess his love to geet bt geet's reaction is soo obvious.she hardly knows him nd a sudden proposel only shock her..how can she accept easily .its hard to forget ur past.nd for her life is only surround by mitu .
Bt after her denial he don't show any force n accept her decision.
Puja at km nd entry of geet with mithu bring smile on km family .everyone happy a little angle .also all r happy to see geet.
Bt our mitu never give her attention so easily.vicky n mithu is really so sweet.she don't come in any others arms nd enjoy surrounding in vicky arms.as he is tall hence she fully enjoy scenes.
Even maan feel content when he took mithu in his arms .he never thought she is someone's else daughter nd mithu also respond him so lovingly.
Dadi give a beautiful locket to mithu .
When geet feel uncomfortable as she has to feed to mithu bt where maan sense her problm nd took her to his room .even meera shock to see her in his room bt feel happy for maan .
Geet feel annoyed to see such an expensive locket in mitu's neck as she thought maan do it intentiknally .nd poor her anger on him without knowi g that dadi give it mithu.
He gave peemission her to take mithu with her in office if she wants.
Bt when she left alone her in cabin to visit site problem nd maan saw mitu crying his anger boiled up.
Nd seeing geet's carelessness he become furious nd poor geet hv to face maan's anger.
How can she left her alone.
Bt maan took care of mithu in her absence like a father.
Again geet came in km with mitu bt this destiny play its part to tie up maan n geet for rest of life..
Everyone happy bt after suhani bua's entry nd her n geet encounter only bring tension.suhani bua taunts her as a bad omen who snatch away her son nd her family happiness.bt maan's anger boil up to see geet in such vunerable state where its not all her fault nd her tears give sting in his heart.
Shasha n suhani bua fumes to see that bt who cares.
All r happy for them except for both of them except suhani n shasha .
Bt geet in shock with sudden incident took place nd change her life.
Its hard to gulp it .she don't even about mithu nd try to harm herself.bt maan give reality check to her nd after coming to senses she realised what is going to do nd regert for it.
Bt maan assure her nd also dadi make her understnd.
Finally she accept half heartly nd give a chance to this relation.after agreeing both do pooja nd left for their trip.
This trip bring many chnges in their life.
Bus scenes r really cute .all siblings teasing n leg pulling.
Mithu's antics ,nd eagerness to came into maan's arms nd vicky's pouty face to see her little angel gf ditched him for his dadda is so funny.
Geet gave head massage to maan nd all family membets grinning to see them bt our mithu is so possessive about her dadda don't let come near him nd withdraw his attention from her.
Maan is too understanding.make comfortable her to feed mithu nd give her privacy .bt sudden wheather chnge stop them to go ahead.
so maaneet with stays for night in hotel.its such an adventures thing .goon sudden attack make her scared to hell .thankfully maan came on time nd save her.nd took her in his embrace to assure everything is fine now.he is there for her.
Bt this incident create fear in her only maan's warm eembrace gave her peace .maan happily took care of both her angels.
Outing of maneet ,roaming in local market ,shopping for mithu , eating together nd seeing geet in jeans top nd maan's heart beat skipped to see her bt he hardly control to see her in this attire .coming to park nd geet eats kachi ami nd the way she cherrished its taste.all these incidents gave sweet memories to them.
Bt seeing mithu in pain really make maan n geet heart wrench.both r suffocated to show their little angel in pain.geet feel guilty to know that due to unintentionally she is responsible for mithu's state.nd for this geet face maan's anger..bt finally she manofy her.
Seeing geet drench fully in rain maan's burn with desire .nd starts day dreaming .to control himself he left from there bt geet see him nd felt guilty that she can't fulfilled the needs as a wife .
Nd due to this she thought to married with him someone she again create blunder
maan's anger is totally jusrified .how she can think about that.nd especially separating mitu from him.
bt maan don't suffered mitu for this.he still loves her nd shows his full right on her.
geet is guilty for her mistake nd thnkfully make her understnd.
nd finally she understnd nd give a chance to their relationship.
maneet married again.buaji too realise that its not geet's fault nd ahe whole heartly accept her dil nd grand daughter.
all bck to km.
everyone make arrangement for their first night.maan shocked to see all that bt think geet also want this.bt listening prithvi's name from her he felt hurt .even geet felt guilty .bt he is right .he love her with all his right only when she fully ready to accept him with all her heart.
geet went to meet krishna bt she is shocked to see her as married .bt the main reason that she thought mitu is snatched by her.her obessive nature towards mitu shocked geet.krishna accuse geet nd geet totally numb listening her allegation
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she told her to keep mitu with her bt listening this maan temper reached to its peak.again she is parting mitu away from him.nd is nowhere to listen her now.
krishna is pregent nd both her husband n geet happy for her.now she is guilty about what she said about her.
bt geet forgive her.
bt maan is no mood to forgive geet
his silence n ignorance give unbearable paun to geet .nd she fell ill.
bt dadi give reality check to him that geet is still immature nd how can he accept her that she do always thing knowingly.in such a small age she suffered alpt.she needs love n care nd support of all of us .
nd now its time for maan to feel guilty.nd he all ready to give all his love her to heal her n make her happy.
even geet is shocked to see the change in him.
nd she feeling something different in his presence .she drool over him.nd feel content to see him around.
after long time she shares her feeling with maan about her family n dream.
slowly slowly their relation developing .both coming close each other n happy too.
bt again their happiness ruined after the news that maan is listening.
again geet is accused for everything nd blamed as a bad omen..nd listening this from dadi she is completely shattered .nd decide to leave all of them.
again she is all alone.bt never blamed anyone for this nd still praying their well being n maan's safely come bck .
her prayer is listen .maan is bck n shock to see her dadi in that state .
otherside mitu happy to see her dadda nd missing his warm embrace bt now she can't go into his arms.
geet decide now not get anyone close to her so that she get used to it.nd searching for job to start again a new journey with maan n family.
bt poor mitu is suffering withour ant fault. nd fallen ill.
meera is also shocked to see dadi reaction about geet .
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what happen maan comes to know about geet n mitu?
nd will he believe meera that becoz of dadi geet left them or not?
will he able to bring them bck into their life.??
so eager to read it nxt .
plz plz update its nxt part soon...
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