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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional and painful Update
Maneet bhi alag ho gaye, Adi-pinky bhi alag ho gaye

Maneet ek dusre per kitna trust kerte hai,loved it, geet maan ke saamne brave dikhne ki koshish ker rahi thi jabki ander se dil ro raha tha, maan was surprised ki geet itni jaldi kaise mature ho gayi, poor maan pinky ko kaise handle kerga

Agar adi ko doubt tha ki maan jhoot bol raha hai tu use waha se bhaagna nahi chaheya tha shayad jaldi sub kuchh jaldi theek ho jata, ab pata nahi maan kab waapis aayega

feeling very sad for them
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! beautiful update...u portrayed the emotions & pain of each character so beautifully...
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing part. loved it.
geet became so mature in a day. she consoled maan to be brave n strong.
pinky, maan, geet, adi are so much hurt.
pinky thinks that she is impure now.
adi is sad n thinks pinky didnt trust his love.
geet is also feeling miserable.
waiting to see that how maan will prove his innocence. n will make pinkys mind change.
plz update soon dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 15
thats shocking...
poor Pinky...
Edited by spvd - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 16
poor them...
damn that Pammi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very emntl updte mahi...
loved it
the pain was felt in updte...
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Posted: 10 years ago
sad n touchy update
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-16
Pammi is so witty. She framed maan for raping pinky which is not true. Good that maan kill Brij that so brutally.
Geet had immense trust on maan & she knows maan will never take some wrong step in life.

Part-17
So emotional. Geet & maan parted away & now everyone is going through so much. Hope they all will reunite once again.
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Posted: 10 years ago

part 18

In that same place so many change get happen more tree r surrounded that place that place waiting for that person which brought some life in that place thodi der ke liye sahi but that place feel alive ...one person one time in week alwyes present their without fail , barish ho ya kadhi dhoop ya fhir sardi this routing don't get fail

That person always get reach on time its routing of last 4 year , that person come and clean that temple area than lighten lamp in mandir and come closed to that old tree always pray for some people ...lakin that place don't get smile on that face which always rested before 4 year

All tree like asking each other how she don't come yet ,its never happen in last 4 year kuch bhi ho she will here to spend time with her past ,her haven jan yaha aati hai to pure

White dress main lakin yaha aane ke baad aise sajati hai jaise kisi ki dulhan lakin wo khoobsurati bhi ahoori lagti thi jab uske aankho ka pain ,aur khoi hui muskurahat nahi dekh pata tha ye nature

Tree start to dance in new tuen their they heard foot step of their life geet handa na na mrs geet maan khurana in white sari age 18 ,turn so beautiful long hair which r hide under sari ,and start her daily ruting and withing 15 min she change in colorful sari with mangalsutra and sindoor in maang with chuda in hand ...sshe pray for all pry to her baba

She ask baba meri itcha to app jante ho na ek baar unse milwa do ya fhir dur se dikha do unki zhalak please baba 4 saal ho gaye hai unko dekhe hui ab ye dil nahi maan raaha hai wo sirf unko dekhana chata hai ek baaar sirf ek baar muje pata hai apne ne unko ache se rakha hoga fhir bhi ek baar baba mila do and some tear fail from her eyes

Her tear effect wind also wind start to flow in big like koi tuffan same time nature get shrived they heard some foot sound stranger foot noise ,they want to alert her but how she so lost in thought of her bila her maan

And before she get anything she lost her hosh when someone put cloth on her mouth its happen within blink of eye lashes

She don't get chance to protect herself

Afther haour she get her hosh and try to adjust her eye , its like cave so much dark some voice coming from outside like some peole fighting

She try to heard n land slip from her leg

One man - He is not here today , and I am going to enjoy her u can not stop me

Other man - I will its against our group thought u can not do this get it ...

One man - and who going to stop me ...u he laugh loudly

Than geet heard some noise like fighting she try to come out from tied leg and hand but can not blood start to come out from her hand and leg ...

She stop for while when she hear foot steps she pry baba bacha lena apki beti ki amanat hu baba madat karo baba

She waitng like so death coming to her its not less than death for her , yes she want to die before any other touch her after few second that person come to her and try to touch her her eyes winded in shock and before that dirty man touch her he fall on floor with such force geet try to look who is her seviour but fail as that person back is to her she can not saw his face ,and that saviour throu chunri to her and command hide her face she fallow instruction as student and closed her face with chunari

He three four time punch that man and he lost his hosh

Saviour - can u know to sit on hourse

Geet is so much lost in voice and this fearful incidence she mummer softly yes

He say than follow me after open her hand and leg she follow him like blind man pata nahi ku but in few second she trust him both come out from cave and he talk with other one man and indicate geet to sit on other horse and he sit on one horse

One other man r front of geet and her savior that man showing path of place where that dirty man kidnapeed geet

They reach almost near and saviour stop for while and ask that man yahi jagah hai , aise jangle main that man nodded in yes ssaviour think for while other side geet can not saw his face properly the duppata of her face hiding her view ,she once want to saw his face ...who save her

Saviour ask loudly yahi place hai kya ,geet again get confused with voice ,ye voice ...she mummer softly yes

That saviour dismiss that other man and start to ride horse to that place and within 15 min they reach near temple

He come out from horse and ask in serious tone ,app yaha rehate ho now also his back to her ...she mummer ha

His heart beat start to inscreed with her ans he so much want to turn and look to her but his soul don't give permission some how he control his mind and say ok take care ...aise jagha pe rukana danger hai

Geet mummer ji ...muje yaha sabse jada safe lagta hai her voice make him restless he want to turn and saw he face but again control and say in hard tone jaise apki marzi muje jana hoga ,abhi bhi app muje ghar ka pata bata sakti hai

Geet - nahi app jayiye main chali jaaungi ...

That savior nodded in yes and turn for leave he walk some step but froze with her cry and her sentence

When he walk some step she broke down and hug that tree and cried veer Baaaba ...thanks for saving me baba nahi to bile ko kaise face karti main baba

That person trun in swift moment and look to that women who looking married he mummer softly cuhiya and geet froze in her place so much emotions passing from her face ,her heart stop to work her gaze stop on his face she mummer softly bila...

He froze in place thou her veil stopping his view when his eyes searching to her image wind must get his plea and a veil fail down because of that force of wind and he lost in her eyes which smiling like before ,nature get more happier they look smile on geet face after big 4 year gap ...

Precap

Maan mummer u married to some one...

Next part may be tomorrow

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Posted: 10 years ago
😃 me isko pehley read kya
aur me hi late coment de rahi ho 😉 😆

awesome update

4 year leap 😲

geet living as widow to the world but in their secret place she was his wife ☺️

who is the men how dare he kidnap her 😡

saviour came and save her


both did not see each other faces

geet felt some kind of protectiveness around like she felt when maan her bella is with her

both want to see each other face but hesitate

ohhh babji yeh maan hai aur yeh ullta q samjta hai 😡

geet saw him 😃


what happen to adi and pinky ????

Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago

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