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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗 Hello my dear friends...
🥱 i still have mild fever ..
try to update in eve ...😊





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hai babbie

kaisi ho ab?

fever kam hua na?
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Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 Hello my dear friends...
🥱 i still have mild fever ..
try to update in eve ...😊






aap bus apna dhayan rako n jab bhi tik lage tab hi update dena whether its in eve or at night r tomorrow but firstly take care of yourself
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Hello friends...🤗
Updating...


Thank you so much...🤗



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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.




Part - 57



Part - 58





Geet told them from start to end in short way with wet eyes ,, An was angry over Maan'd rejection nd irresponsible behaviour ,, but Aj was quiet ,, many thing depend on prospective ,, some caught -ive points 1st nd some +ive ,, Arjun saw many ups nd downs nd he knew that life is not predictable nd we had to accept what comes in our way but generally ppl react instantly on situations which made everything more tough nd Maan did that ,, his loyalty towards his love hurt a pure soul .

AN: how cd he hurt a girl like this ? What is d future of this relation ?

AJ: annie , though he was wrong at few places but he was right at some too , we cn't blame him for all d things ,, he was helpless at his place too.

AN: don't take his favour Aru ,, how cd he reject a girl like this ?

AJ: Annie , Geet , listen ,, nd think ,,, He asid that he wanted to say everything before marriage but coz of Dadima he cdn't right Geet.

Geet: hum .

AJ: nd he gave u option to break d relation if u want ,,

Geet: how cd I do that after marriage ,, what about my nd my family repo ,, my family killed me nd i didn't have any hope from them ,, Dadima accepted me nd love me like her child then how cd I hurt her ?

AJ: right u had ur prob nd he had his ,, he was in love nd heart broken .

AN: so , he broke her heart too.

AJ: Annie , he gave her an option from his side ,, he was OK with d terms ,, it was Geet's decision to stay in d relation ,, he didn't misbehave her .

AN: but he didn't fulfill his responsibilities towards her nd behaved inferior ,, didn't accept her in front of all nd still he was behaving like a stranger ,,, why ?

AJ: here he was wrong ,, he cd behaved normal in front of all ,, things r between he nd Geet .

Geet: I too cornered my self ,, closeness increase hopes nd i didn't see any hope so I distanced myself.

AN: right , sochna bhi matt uske bare mei ,, DevDas kahin ka .

AJ: Annie essan nahi kahaty ,, uske liye bhi sab tough hei , kudk ko uski jagah per rakh ker dekho aur tab socho ,, Annie kya tum kisi aur ke bare mei soch sakti ho ? Ya mei kisi aur ko accept ker sakta hun ? Kya eassy hei kisi ko bhulna ,, time lagta hei , samjhna padta hei ,, Annie tumhe koi force kare kisi aur se shaadi kerni ko ya mujhe kare , kaisa lagega ? ( he raised his voice a lil)

Both Annie nd Geet looked at him shocked ,, this was d other side of d coin which was showing d fact .

AJ: Annie hum dono ek dusre se pyaar kerty hein , kya alag ho pana assan hei ? Soch sakti ho mujhse alag hona ,, saha sakti ho ? Bhool jaogi do din mei mujhe ?

Annie nodded in a NO nd whispered .. kabhi nahi ,, Geet looked at her stunned .

AJ: Annie , kiddo , Maan ke liye bhi situation tough thi , kunki wo kisi se pyaar kerta tha ,, tum nahi Geet ,, tum jitni aasani se usse accept ker logi wo nahi ker payega .

An: agar wo aage bhi nahi ker paya to , Geet ka kya ?

AJ : though he was wrong at some place but Geet to didn't want to brake d relation coz of some reasons, then go with d flow .

An: matlab ? ( Geet too looked at him )

AJ: time apne aap decise ker dega Geet ,, bas apne dil ko khushiyon ke liye rokna matt ,, tumhe khush rahane ka haq hei ,, agar tumne kuch khoya hei to kuch paya bhi hei ,, keep open ur heart for happiness ,, u r not alone nd depand ,, we r always with u , hummm .

Geet nodded in a yes but puzzled ,, they heard class over bell nd came in sense ... God she became late .

Geet: OMG!! Mei aaj late ho gai ,, Dadima wait ker rahi hogi,, mai chalti hun , but ,plzzz I request u again , keep it with u .

A&A gave her a grp hug .

An: tu ruk cindie hum tujhe drop ker denge ,, jaldi ghar pahoch jayegi ,, OK.

AJ: haan kiddo , chalo hum sath chalty hein , tumhe drop kerke ghar chale jayenge.

Geet agreed nd all came out to go ,, they dropped her KM nd went to their home ,, Dadima was waiting for her .

Meanwhile in KM ...

Dadima called D&N in her room when they wr back from KC ,, Dadima was very serious nd gave a thoughtful look to D&N, gestured them to sit ,, they quietly sat .

Dadima: Dev , d thing which i'm going to say listen carefully ,, NT won't understand that coz she was not d part of this family when ur parents left us ,, u r not matured enough that time nd me nd Maan handled d falling business ,, saw loses nd gathered everything ,, u didn't know how Maan managed that with his study ,, he tried his best to gave u all d happiness which he didn't get buried in responsibilities .

Dadima's voice became heavy , Dev felt that nd looked at her painfully ,, he got up nd sat near her on d bed nd held her hands .

Dev: I know Dadima , I remember everything .

Dadima: if u remember then u have to respect Maan's decisions nd his wife , now u r capable to take responsibilities to streghten his hands ,, if u think u r a big name today then remember one thing that it was coz of Maan's hard work nd scrifices ,, if he thought to live like u then who brought KC at this place today ? u ?

Dev: no Dadima.

Dadima: u saw that time nd only u cn feel d heat which Maan bore nd he kept u away from all prob not NT who was not with u that time ,, she didn't see d hard time of Khurana ,, Dev I don't want any misbehave for Maan nd Geet ,, they r elder both of u ,, at least bado ki izzat karni chahiye ye to pata hi hoga na tumhe ,, bas hume aur kuch nahi kehana , umeed kerty hei ki hume dobara essa kuch nahi kehana padega , ab aap dono jaey.

Both left from there to their room, they met with Geet in d living room who was going to meet Dadima after searching her on living room nd then asked from Nakul ,, she saw D&N nd wished them Hi with a faint smile ,, they too replied her in nd went ,, Dev was thinking that Geet didn't stuck to a thing nd became normal after few min nd behaved like nothing had happened ,, she was very casual in KM nd very formal outside , but they wr failed here ,, he realized that he had to change otherwise they won't be able to lift their eyes .

There Geet entered in Dadima's room nd said sorry for lil late nd showed her new phone ,, Dadima was happy that at least she had a phone with her ,, she dialled Dadima's number nd both saved that in their phons ,, Geet was fumbling with d keypad coz she was not used to nd Dadima was smiling at her innocence .


Precap - Geet realized some facts ...

Part - 59 + 60

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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
kaissi ho Barbee doll? feeling better now
get well wali jhappi🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part..Finally Geet told truth about her & Maan relation..I hope Maan also tell her about his part..Maybe she understand..I hope Dev-NT go back..
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Posted: 11 years ago
hallo
how r u


thanks for update
nice update
geet share her all with a n a
aniee get angry on maan
but arjun show both other side of coin
he dint say that maan is right but he show both maan's point of view
geet also understand what arjun told her
daai ask to behave properly n give maan n geet their elderly respect
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update. Geet got a different perspective look at her situation from Arjun and hopefully she will be more receptive to Maan now. Happy Dev realized his shortcomings.

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