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Posted: 10 years ago
maan dheere...zaada jald baaji sahi nehi hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm...first kiss with such passion...nice update. Geet started feeling for maan and dhruv made her realise her love for maan... dhruv's words abt geet to maan really are awesome. Overall love-ly update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved loved jealous Maan. Gawd he was watching Dhruv with eyes like a hawk. He dint even miss something so small like of Dhruv fingers brushing Geets. He is heck of possessive lover n brother I knew but such detailing makes me sound over possessive or obsessed lover. He was burning n going all green in jealous seeing how comfortable Geet looked with Dhruv.

I loved Geet-Dhruv moments. At least she got someone with whom she could confide her heart's feelings. Dhruv solved her problem in a second but its not easy for her to agree to it. Its too early for Geet so say she is in love. She is falling for Maan but calling it love is a bit early. Loved Dhruv's teasing her.

Maan finally could make peace with himself as well Dhruv's presence after Dhruv's earnest confession regarding Geet. Dhruv telling him how special he is in Geet's life made him more hopeful about his future with her. He has so many dreams of their togetherness. I really find this Maan a lot adorable. When he loves someone he loves with all his heart. Dhruv's confession also made him comfortable n not feel insecure around him anymore. He finally got his restless heart at peace.

Him so concern about her hand n taking such a good care of her or her friends when they did combine studies, talking n discussing with her about her exams n preparations at morning breakfast, lunch n dinner; everything was so heart warming. He missed the coffee time with her but again he was so hopeful that soon she will be his. This hope of his make him sound like a innocent child who craves for love.

Her taking Maan's name when lights went off just says how much trust she has on him. She has somewhere become depended on him with his care n love he always showers on her.

But what follwed next was indeed Maan taking a leap. I'm glad she dint pushed him. I was really tensed about her reaction but breathed a sigh of relief seeing her accepting his kiss as well responding. Their first moment of closeness where both were equally involved was passionate. Though as well it was Maan who initiated but she dint stopped him n thats a good sign I guess. But what I admire was him stopping n giving her space n time so that she comes in terms with what transpired btw them n not making things awkward or difficult for her. She needs to realize n acknowledge her feelings by herself. She knew she was avoiding him but still not finding him next morning hurt her. Her mind is still not clear. She will be confused until she accepts her own growing feelings to herself.

Wonder though why she was upset? Seems like something happened in college. She was crying too.

Maan was so concerned for her. All types of questions came to him making him worry. He yet again had tried to control on his feelings n desire. Maan indeed has a great sense of self control.

But now like him even I'm confused as what happened that she slept off in bathroom n dint even realize the growing temperature of steam?

Loved the update n enjoyed it completely. Cant wait for next already.

-Sanjana!
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Posted: 10 years ago
welcome back dear... just take care of urself...and get well soon..
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...its fabulous part !! ...well written! ...firstly maan jealous to dhruv...but later he come to what a great friend he is ...dhruv teased geet...and knock some sense in her mind...that her feelings are just her building love for maan...and that maaneet first kiss!! ...just hilaraous...but suddenly what happened with geet...why she was so lost?...even maan scared by her actions...poot guy..just went to bathroom behind her in his worry...curious for next part dear...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Ana 🤗...J Maan is so adorable...glad Dhruv cleared the confusion...love the way he cares about Geet ,her friends and her feelings...Maaneet kiss ...u described the scene so beautifully 👍🏼...but why did he leave so abruptly😲...now she is all confused 😕...what was the reason for her being dull?...is it Maan or something else?...the bathroom scene 😳...waiting to see what happens next...thank u so much...hope u are feeling better now...tc 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! splendid update! Maan j of Dhruv! Bt Dhruv is js a friend! he makes Geet understand she is falling 4 Maan! Dhruv assures Maan! this gives him hope! Geet awed by Maan's care! Maaneet kiss! Geet arrives hope n is sad! Maan wonders y! is it cos of the kiss! Maan calls her bt no response! Maan goes in the bathroom! Geet stunned! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update😊
maaneet first kiss😳
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
maan jealous of dhruv😆
dhruv made geet realize her feelings for maan👏
maaneet first kiss😉
geet upset with maan
pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...👍🏼...Maan jealous on seeing Geet and Dhruv sitting together...😛...Dhruv happy on finding Geet is in love with Maan...😎...Maaneet first kiss...☺️☺️...Maan in the bathroom where Geet is bathing...😉😳...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...can't wait 4 the next update......pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update...get well soon n tc

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