'Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli' MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Really Mahi...your beti is so innocent 😲...maine socha jaise Maa waise beti hogi 😛...pura family nautanki 😡...and that too with me 😆




na dear sacchi
look my work
sirf journy 1 main hot part hai
lakin phir ye devil ki deemand and you know no mahi is so innocent
na nahi bol sakti so
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi ratna,mahi,gunjar🤗
Uma update yepudu chesthaavu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Hi ratna,mahi,gunjar🤗

Uma update yepudu chesthaavu

hi mithuna 🤗
uma update evala sayentram lopala estundi annukunta..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Hi ratna,mahi,gunjar🤗

Uma update yepudu chesthaavu


Hi Padma 🤗...Uma said hi and disappeared.😕
we all are waiting here for the update...join the line😆



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gunjar

hi mithuna 🤗
uma update evala sayentram lopala estundi annukunta..


Tana peru Padma...needi nijanga Gunjar yena lekunta vere na ?



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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u for one and all who pressed like and commented ,supported me...continue this guys.

love

uma 🤗



My two lovely siggy's




Bye nishi 😛



Bye gunjar 😛



PART-1



One newly married girl around 18 years is sitting in the middle of a decorated king size bed ,her palms turned cold due to fear and was praying to god continously!!!!




Geet - "oye geet teri kismath itni phuti kyu hai...hamesha tere saath hi kyu ha...kya mera pati cum lecturar bhi saare patiyon ki tarah aaj tere saath ringa ringa roses khelega kya bed pe? 😲 babaji !!!! nai aaj sirf babaji nai jesus,allah sab bhagwan meri rakhsa karna iss rakhshas se pls god"(oy geet y ur fate is bad...always y it happens with u only...will my husband cum lecturer also behave alike all husbands ??will he too play ringa ringa roses on bed with me 😲...babaji !!!!!!no not babaji today jesus,allah all gods pls save me from that devil" )

Waise saare mard apni hawas puri karne keliye hi hote hai..(B/w all men r for satiating their lust only..)she thought disgustedly..


Tears clouded in her beautiful almond eyes dreading of her future ...


CREAK...!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just then door opened and maan entered in slow steps rising geet's heart beat with each step...

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak!!!!!!!!!

As maan neared her ..geet started shivering badly remembering past incident...

"Geet" maan called her her name with so much love and desire but geet is so much into her fear has failed to feel anything...


Ji.jjji...geet shuttered...

Maan turned other side not able to control himself seeing her ...geet's anxiety is increasing with each passing second of what he is going to say...

wo thume pareshaan hone ki koi baat nahi hai...mujhe pata hai ki humari shadi thumari marzi ke khilaaf hui hai par mai vaada karta hu ki hum ye rishta thumari sharto par hi nibhayenge.. jab tak tum chahti ho tak tum iss riste mai ho..jab bhi tum aazaadi chahti ho me thume divorce de dunga(oh u dont have worry about anything..i know that our
marriage is against ur wish..but i promise u that this relation is continued as per ur wish ..u can continue this relation till u like..the moment u u want to be free i'll give u divorce)Dying hundred deaths maan said the most acerbic words of his life...(jhutas chappals r most welcome dearies 🤗...😆 .)

As soon as he said those words he left the room saying he will take the other room leaving a shocked and grinning geet..!!!!!!!!!!



Geet left the breath she was holding from long..Bhagwan koti koti dhanyawaad aapko..mujhe bachaliya ..mai na aapki mandir ko ghutne ne chalke aawoongi..aaj bhudwar haina mai aage se har bhudwar ek bund pani piye bina rahongi..nai nai oye jhalli ye kuch zyaada nai huva ..waise bi tu har somwar ko fast rakhti hai na ..ha mai na 101 naariyal chadaungi ye thik rahega haina babaji(God thanx a ton for saving me..i will come to ur temple on my knees and as today is wednesday from now onwards i'll not eat anything on wednesday..no no u duffer is this is not too much..as u fast on monday too..ya i'll break 101 coconuts in temple this will be ok na babaji)


Waise somwar se yaad aaya shivji maine aapke liye fast isliye rakha taaki aap mujhe accha pati de naki jaldi shali ke liye gurrr(lord shiv iam fasting on monday as i wanted nice husband but not for early marriage ..gurrr )she muttered angrily looking at the ceiling..


And she went into a deep slumber..

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Maan's room

maan layed on bed staring at the ceiling..thinking about the day his life had been changed ..the day when he saw his life,his love,his geet..

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Handa mansion

Jay went to geet's room in tears thinking of his chutki,his princess ..



**********flash back*********

Geet's room

geet was sitting on her bed and laughing holding her stomach..just then jay entered and stood there admiring his sis laugh..out of curiousity



Hey chuti kya dekhke itna has rahi ho??(hey chutki what have u seen that ur laughing like this..??) he asked..

Dekho bhaiyya..heheheh meri dost disha ne ye FB mai pic bheja hai..(See bro my friend disha has sent me this pic in FB) she said while laughing and showed him the pic..

read matter in the pic guys..



Jay too started laughing with geet..

bhaiyya koi mujhe dish jitna hassa nahi sakte(Bro no one can make me laugh like this other than dish)geet said..

Jay narrowed his eyes "R u sure no one can make u laugh like ur friend??" he questioned

Geet saw him confused..but before she realised at what he was hinting..again fits of geet's laughter filled in the room

Jay was continously tikling her..

Bhaiyya..heheheh..pls..hheheh..sto..heheh..stop..mamma..sorry ...heheh...sorry...pls stop...heheh..!!!!!!!!!!


*************flash back ends*************

Jay's thought process came to end by the rano's call..he wiped his tears and went down stairs..

Maan's room

here maan too thinking of past..

*********flashback**********

NMRECW(Geet's college)

As unlike his routine maan after morning sesson class dint went for office as there was meeting with principal in college on freshers matter ...

"Satish check those schedule of second years and mail me"maan ordered his assistent in college..and headed to his car by running as it was raining heavily..soon he entered his car and ordered driver to start..

The car was about to reach the main gate ..Something pulled maan and he slanted his neck to his left side towards the college ground..







and then ..

the time stopped for maan..there was his angel..dancing and twirling with her friend..



Geet agar princy ne hume yaha yese dekhliya tho..humari khair nahi(Geet if princy sees us like this means..nothing can save us..)shouted disha playing with in rain as geet..

Tu chup dish..hamesha princy se darti hai..wo to college mai phone restriction and discipline blah blah bolti hai..bahar bhi..(U shutup dish ..u always fear princy..she kept phone restriction and discipline in college..blah blah..now outside also..)chided geet


Now just enjoy..saying again both jumped in ground ..splashing water..But both failed to notice someone is staring them continously..

Maan was in his own dreamland..sorry geetland..😆

she's gorgeous, stunning, ravishing, dazzling, bewitching, fetching ..no no..the beauty of this sculpture is only stated by understatement..maan's heat and mind r thinking of which is apt word for geet..




she is totally drenced from tip to toe..her cream colour suit is clinging to her body..her face is covered with pure rain water..her dark lashes and plump lips have rain drops
sticking to them..

na hrudayamlo nidurinche cheli
nee hrudayam lo chutistava mari||2||
pallavi ga nannu allukoni pate neevaynave
na hrudayamlo nidurinche cheli

preminche manasundani eenade adi telisindi
premaki bavana nevvani aa manase vivarinchindi
maduramaina na uhallo reyi pavalu nilichavamma
kammani oo nijamavamantu kalale kantunnaneee
na hrudayamlo nidurinche cheli
nee hrudayam lo chutistava mari
pallavi ga nannu allukoni pate neevaynave
na hrudayamlo nidurinche cheli

nenante adi neevani kanupapalu kaburampayi
nee vente na payanam ani kala kavithalu varamichayi
padilamayna na hrudayam lo gudini neeke kadtane
inkevvariki chotivvanani mate istunnane
na hrudayamlo nidurinche cheli
nee hrudayam lo chutistava mari||2||
pallavi ga nannu allukoni pate neevaynave
na hrudayamlo nidurinche cheli

Maan's whole body is humming song..he felt alive..he never saw or felt about any girl ..


Maan tu kya soch raha hai wo student hai shayad..par maan tu budda to nai na..student
ho to kya..(maan what r u thinking she must be student..but maan u r not old ..even if she
is student what's wrong)his inner voice growled at him..

Just then main gate opened and driver started car..


STOP!!!!!!!!!!

Maan shouted on poor driver literally scaring him..

god!!!!!!!!! whats wrong with me..wait what i said "god" ..Maan tu kabse bhagwan ka
naam lene laga hai..gurr ye ladki mujhe pagal kardegi(Maan from when u started taking
god's name..gurr this girl drives me crazy..)famous MSK dialogue.😆.


Maan closed his eyes taking deep breath he ordered driver to start the car!!!!!!!!!whole day maan was only thinking and imagining only geet ..geet..and geet!!!!!!!!!


No i have to find her!!!!!!!!

******************flashback ends*****************

From that day maan started finding geet's whereabouts through detectives..as if he took
info from college means it rises doubts ..

He came to know that his love's name is GEET ..song ..engineering 1st year..branch
IT..Mohinder handa's daughter etc etc..

He thought to wait for her till she completes her college..but almighty had some other
plans..thus landed up in marrying her..

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Same time, Arora house..

Sitting in his bar there's a man around 24 yrs ..defeated , frustated and was boiling in
sheer anger and hatred..

Maan singh khurana..every thing which i wished for is snatched by you..professionally
and now personally too..Tum ne meri business deals cheena ..par ab tumne mujshe meri
shikar wo geet bhi cheel ki tarah uda legay!!!!!!!(Yu snatched my business deals..but now u even took away my prey that geet also like an eagle..)thundered Pratam arora..




Aaahhh!!!!!!!!!!! Sreamed pratam braking all glasses and bottles on the table..




Precap- The morning after 😛



IMP NOTE -Guys no offence for emraan hasmi photo its just 4 fun...its not critisizing r anything..me too like his acting.. .just that i came across some fun videos and pics i saw this and u see 😉 😃

HOWS IT?????????

Guys biting nails and my skin too ...😆 as i have habit of biting my nails from childhood...my mom teases me like this only 😆

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love


Uma 🤗



Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yipee me first comment...
Awesome update dear...

inta baga rasvu ante nenu cheppadaniki matale levu uma...
eppudu nuve chepu nenu asalu emi chepali ...
but i can say one thing that u will surely be one of the best writer in predecting the feelings dear...
oh so geet and maan are married😃
lovely thing..
geet very nervous on her sr and complening to her babaji..
maan kitna sweet and caring hey yaar
kitna accha samjha geet ko aur usse khushi denekeliye khud appni ko thakleef deraha hai uss se door rehthe huve...
he said all those to make geet comfortable there..
but with his each word his heart broke into many pieces😭
feel very sad for him...
geet uski jaane ki baad kya ker rahi thi yaar😆😆😆
babji ko nariyal phodneki vrath rakhne ki ho god 🤣 too hilarious dear...
hayye maan ko phele sight per hi pyaar hogaya geet say😳😳
love the flach back to core dear...
loved jay and geet&disha bonding...
ho hate this pratam for lying his eyes on geet😡😡
uma now really waiting to read next dear...
continue soon...

Edited by gunjar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--


Tana peru Padma...needi nijanga Gunjar yena lekunta vere na ?



its acutally Gunjar as per records
ghar per sablog shanti bulathe hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--


Hi Padma 🤗...Uma said hi and disappeared.😕
we all are waiting here for the update...join the line😆



She said she would update yesterday only na
U at home or work😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

She said she would update yesterday only na
U at home or work😊


Midnight here...will sleep soon...was waiting for Uma to update 😊


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