MG~ FF~The Mist -2- Thread-7- UPDATED Pt 46 /Pg 112 / 23rd July ...... - Page 11

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I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.

Part - 41
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4093935/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-6-updated-teasr-pg-135-18th-july


Part - 42


Maan went in his room nd sat in d chair ,, he was feeling miserable ,, his all pleasure to meet her vanished in thin air nd he was getting shock after shock ,, she proved him wrong on every step ,, she didn't give any chance to raise any finger at her but what about him ,, he was lacking every where ,, Dadima knew everything nd she was so confident about her,, trusted her ,, both understand each other * he was in dark nd it was all bcoz of him nd his negligence towards her ,, he was blindly attached to his past nd business nd forgot everything ,, it was all his fault that he didn't try to know about her ,, she was living next to him from many months nd he didn't try to talk her ,, seeing her nd Dadima happy nd satisfied he became relax nd free even neglect everything related to her ,,, it was all his fault .

He steered in d sofa nd looked d time ,, It was a long time after dinner but she didn't come in d room ,, where is she ? Maan got up nd come out to check her in Dadima's room but she was not there , then living room , lobby nd kitchen but he didn't find her ,, he came out nd looked around in dark lawn ,, Maan's heart got a blow seeing her there in lawn ,, she was sitting on d bench circling her knees with her arms ,, hurt nd lost ,, he came close to her with thudding heart , garnered his courage to speak .

Maan: Geet ,,,, yahan thand mei ku baithi ho ?

Geet: ************.

Maan: Geet, ander chalo , tumhe thand lag jayegi , aur raat bhi kaffi ho gai hei .

Geet: ********.

Maan : Geet , plzz ...

But she didn't budge ,, Maan sighed , he threaded his fingers in his hair combing them back in a helpless way nd looks at her dull face ,, he came more close nd held her hand but she gave a jerk nd snapped back rudly ,, live me alone .

Maan startled with her reply but he can't live her there ,, he thought for a sec nd then scoop her in his arms from d bench ,, 1st Geet was startled with this action nd held his neck to make balance ,, theek se pakdo nahi to gir jaogi ,, Geet came in sense nd retorted ,,, chodo mujhe ,, neeche utaro ,,, Maan didn't reply nd started to go towards d room .

Geet groaned again in anger ,,, mujhe neeche utaro ,, he didn't look at her nd replied .

Maan: wait a min ,, room mei jaker utar dunga ,, full night uthane ki himmat nahi hei mujhme , etna bhi Pehalwaan nahi hu mai.

Maan entered d room nd closed d door back with his foot ,, he placed her on d bed nd came to shut d door inside ,, Geet got up from d bed nd moved to go out but Maan held her in mid clutching her arm .

Maan: sshhh,, Geet , raat hei ,, aur zara si awaaz se sab uth sakty hei .

Geet: chodo mera hath , jaane do mujhe .

Maan: bahar thand hei Geet aur koi dekhega , puchega to kya jawab dogi ? yahan kya prob hei ?

Geet gave him an angry glare nd turned her face ,, she knew he is right here ,, there is no extra room here nd she can't go anywhere but she didn't want to share d room with him ,, both wr living apart from months nd how cd she tolerate him close to her ?

Maan: Geet try to understand ,, I know u r angry with me nd don't like me,, plzz Geet main nahi chahta ki Dadima ,Dev aur NT koi galat msg le aur sawal Karen .

Geet gave him a hard look ,, Maan mouthed plzzz again ,, helplessly she moved nd sat on d sofa ,, Maan came near her nd knelt near her with a lower head ,, Geet was startled nd looked at him shocked.

Maan: Geet , I know that everything is scattered between us nd I hurt u lot but I was helpless Geet, I,,I don't want to hide anything form u ,, I was deeply drown in my past nd forgot about my responsibilities ,, I was wrong ,, Geet u r right at ur place nd u cn pour out ur anger on me ,, Geet this communication gap between us creating prob ,, we don't know anything about each other ,, a lil gen talk cn help us .

Geet gave him a questioning glare thinking , why he was talking like this? What made him to think nd to know for each other ?

Maan: thanku Geet u handle d situ in front of all nd sorry in my dismay I didn't ask u at 1st place about all ,,, mujhe tumse pahale baat kerni chahiye thi * Geet tumhe nahi lagta ki hume dhodi to baat kerni chahiye ,, ek dusre ke bare mei janna chahiye jisse hum kisi odd situation mei na paden , jaise aaj pad gaye.

Geet didn't reply but she was thinking about that nd got d wrong msg ,,, huhh,, aaj yaad aai baat kerne ki ,, ignore kerne ka ab koi rasta nazar nahi aaya to Jan-pahachan karne aa gaye ,, Geet ye sab ess contract ki wajha se hei ,, ye nahi hota to kuch nahi badalna tha ,, ab sabke samne apni skin bachane ke liye baat kerne ka khayal aaya hei warna Geet ab tak kis duniya mei thi ye bhi pata nahi tha .

Maan looked at her hurt ,, she didn't reply but he didn't want to lose this chance to talk her ,, luckly he got this chance to spend time together.

Maan: Geet kuch bolo na ,, plzzz mujhse baat karo ,, esse chup matt raho .

Geet got up from sofa saying ..mujhe koi baat nahi kerni , kisi ko nahi janna hei ,, mai jo hun aur jaisi hun theek hu .

Maan held her dupatta from behind to stop her ,, geeett ,, plzzz ,, Geet clutched her dupatta from her neck ,, she was shocked nd rooted at her place with his behaviour ,, he came close to her from behind ,, both wr fightting with their emotions nd miseries ,, she knew that his closeness affect her but his behaviour hurt her ,, on d other side Maan was smitten by her charm nd nature ,, unknowingly he was luring towards her .

Geet gulped hard felling him close to her ,, she turned her face a lil nd find him looking at her ,, their eyes met for a fraction of sec ,, Maan's intense look bore deep in her heart nd she felt a somersault in her tummy , she hardly spoke in a shacky voice ,,, cho do ,,, nahi chodunga to ,, aap esse mujhe force nahi ker sakty ,, tumne aur koi option hi nahi choda ,, mujhe koi jaroorat nahi ,, mujhe to hei ,, kya sabkuch aapki marji se chalega ? Esme galat kya hei Geet ? Apke liye nahi hoga , mere liye hei ,, tum essa ku sochti ho ?

Geet turned in anger ,, he was pestering her , forcing her to talk him , which irked her .

Geet: enough Mr Khurana , ku karu mai wo sab jo aap chahaty hei ? aap apni jindgi apni pasand se jee rahe hei ,, aap hi nahi sab apne tareeke se jee rahe to mai ku nahi ? mai ek gaon (village ) ki ordenery ladki hu,, aapki high class std ko match nahi kerti , aap logo jaisi mod aur advance nahi hu, aapke hisaab se theek se educated bhi nahi hu ,, aap khud mujhe reject ker chuke hein , meri jimmedaari aur jaroorat sirf dadima tak hei , jo mai puri ker rahi hu ,, aapke aur mere beech na kuch tha aur na hoga ,, esliye accha hoga jo jaisa chal raha hei chalne do ,, mujhe aapko jaanne ki koi jaroorat nahi hei .

Geeettt ..


Precap --- Maan apologized ... Geet refused ...

now we both cn sleep comfortably ,, that is ur side nd this is mine ,, sleep. ..

Part - 43
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4100200/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-7-updated-pt-46-pg-112-23rd-july?pn=38



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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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sath me 2nd bhi😆
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aaj DD MB MEIN BAHUT SUNDAR LAG RAHI THI ..

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hum saath saath hai 😆😆
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abhi bhi MB dekh rahi hai??!!!!
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🤗 hello tabby nd dona...


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

hum saath saath hai 😆😆


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abhi bhi MB dekh rahi hai??!!!!
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