MG FF :Saath Nibhana Sathiya pt 12 n note pg 107 11/may/17 - Page 62

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Posted: 8 years ago
updating part 12 and part 13 is blog update as its 18+
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Part 12

After dinner all the oldies goes to their respective rooms...as they are staying here for one night...
And all the youngsters decided to have fun at night as this is the first all are staying together...Vicky already done all the arrangement from their sitting to snacks in.the backyard of the garden which is also decorated with lights...than settled them selves on the flooring bed...they all are sitting in a big circle
Maaneet is sitting opposite to each other... Geet's one side is anjali n one side Maanvi... Annie is next to anjali and besides vicky brij is sitting beside maan
(samjh aya...i know nhi aya...chalo chado)
Than they start playing truth n dare...but there's a twist...chits will decide truth n dare
First was geet's turn than n she gets dare...Maanvi anjali tell her to sing
Geet : nhi maine nhi...mujhse nhi hoga
Anjali : geet plz sing na
Maanvi : di plz na acha jiju k liye koi gana gado...
After getting pressurised from Maanvi n anjali she asked maan through her eyes n he blinks his lashes in giving her permission
Geet ;
kabhi neem neem kabhi shahad shahad

kabhi narm narm kabhi sakht sakht

mora piya mora piya mora piya...

nazron ki teer mai basa hai pyaar

jab bhi chala wo dil k paaar

lajja se mar re ye jiya
All the time geet maan is looking at each other...unaware of their surrounding ..and clapping and hooting sound broke their trance and they came back to reality
geet started blushing furiously and hides her face in her both palm and and maan smilingly turn her his face
and they continue the game and now it's annie's turn but she denied to play the game and leave from there maan also get up to go behind her but geet stop him
Geet :ap game kheliye main dekh k aati hu
maan nodes

she went to annie's room and found it empty then after a minutes of searching she found her near the swimming pool

G :annie tumhe toh neend aa rhi thi na

annie look behind and found geet with crossed arms

Annie :bhabhi aap..ap yaha ya kar rhi ho
G :mai bhi wahi puchna chahti hu tum yaha kya kar rhi ho...tumhe toh sona tha na she said while coming beside her
Annie :mai bas aise hi yaha aa gyi ab bas apne room mai hi ja rhi hu

annie turns to go but geet stop her by holding her hand

G :ruko annie mujhe tumse baat karti hai
Annie :ji kahiye bhabhi

G :tum apne bhaiya ki wajha se hi waha se uth k aa gyi na
Annie :ai.ai...sa.aisa kuch nhi hai bhabhi
G:tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe pta nhi chalta us din k incident se tum apne bhaiya se baat nhi kar rhi..jo behan har tym maan bhai maan bhai karti rehti thi wo apne maan bhai o dehte hi chup ho jati hai aur apna muh mod leti hai kyo annie

silence covered them for few minutes and tears flowing down from annie's eyes and geet eyes are also wet

After few minutes of silence
Annie :aap bhaiya ko kaise maaf kar sakti hai bhabi...aap itni easily sab kaise bhul sakti hai

G:unhe maaf karne ka sawal hi nhi uthta jab galti meri thi.jante hue ki humari families mai ladkiyo ko age padne ki izzazat nhi hai aur shaddi k baad toh bilkul nhi (she chuckles sadly ) fir bhi maine doctor banne la sapna dekha

Annie:toh kya ab aap apna sapna bhul jaooge
geet smiles sadly
G :tum bhul payi (she nodes negatively) toh mai kaise bhul sati hu...ha bas ab pura hone ki umeed choddi

again silence covered them and then vicky came towards them by calling their names
Vicky :bhabhi game htam ho gyi aur bhai aapka room mai wait kar rhe hai and annie tu bhi ja sone (both nodes and wish each other good night and leave for their respective rooms)

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part 13 is on Blog

I'll only going to give password to those who commented

Edited by CuteStrawberry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Note :

Hey Guyz

I started updating on forum
But But But
If at anytime I found that you guyz are not comment
then I'll again shift all my work to blog

and one more thing i'm not completely back yes i started writing new updates but will only update after the completion of whole ff so my loyal readers could not suffer

you guyz have waited for so long so long wait for some more time

will be back asap
Edited by CuteStrawberry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks 4 updating! terrific update! well written! lovely song! Maaneet only have eyes 4 each other! Annie's anger is justified! Geet speaks 2 Annie! Feeling 4 Geet! hope she gets 2 fulfil her dream! update asap. thanks 4 da note - bt I am confused - Will u nt be updating this???

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I'll update the new parts after the completion of whole ff in my word pad
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part
loved maanet's part
they r looking for each other
Annie's angry on geet and I love geet's maturity here

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Posted: 8 years ago
hi kriti dear
thanks for pm ,surely i will read ..and then comment dear..
.i love my maaneet..definetly i will read ...but plz give me some time..i need caugh up ur previos part 😃
Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting Part

Annie cannot believe that Geet is ready to forget her dreams just because she is married I believe Annie understands Geet better because she too wants to become a dancer and she cannot tell her family otherwise her mother will marry her off but then Maan himself does not want a working wife
Vicky has organized the game for the youngsters truth or dare and with pressure from Geet's both sisters she has to sing but first seeking permission from Maan and then she sings
strangely because of old traditions the girls cannot study further Geet knew this before marriage and now that she is married and pregnant Maan will not let her study , I suppose its not totally his fault he too follows family tradition and he wants his wife just for him a full time mother to his child too while she is also a DIL so yeah I really don't blame Maan

Edited by taahir004 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great update
Annie is shock to know
Geet is ready to forgive her dreams
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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