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Hello friends ...
Updating...😊

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.

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Days wr passing peacefully ,, Arjun made Geet his 50 % partner though Arjun's money share was bigger than Geet but he gave her equal share coz she helped him in d nick of time when he was going to lose d project ,, he valued her help nd trust on him ,, this time too Geet informed Dadima that she was investing some of her saving with Arjun to help him ,, Dadima's max time went to settle down her over demanding G son nd DIL , in her NGO's work nd friends so she didn't take Geet's talk seriously ,, she was confident about Geet nd trust her ,, Dadima knew that Geet took her steps with responsibility nd Maan was also there to advice her if she want ,, her main prob was royal couple DEV&NT who wanted everything on tips ,, everyday they had a new demand ,, now they wanted to join club but Maan brought them to Rudrapur for business ,, NT like this hill station so decided to spend some time there along with their work .

All d paper work was done nd now Geet needed to come Nainitaal to sign d property papers in registrar office nd d regdt deal of partnership with Arjun ,, Arjun informed Geet about that nd now Geet became tense ,, she never go out alone nd she was not sure that Dadima gave her permission to go alon for 2-3 days ,, she was in dilemma how to ask Dadima but a call from Arjun's Dadi solved her all prob ,, Arjun's Dadi informed her about A&A engagement ,, she talked to Dadima nd invited her for d function in their native place Nainital * all wr going there so it was better to engage Arjun & Annie there after getting their business deal ,, Annie's parents wr pressuring Dadi for d marriage so they find it d best time to engage them.

Dadima reluctantly accepted d invitation ,, she never met with Arjun's Dadi nd knew her through Geet , but A&A wr Geet's best friends nd wanted her to take with them so she gave her permission even she decided to go there with Geet bcoz Dev & NT wr already there nd they had a rest house there to stay ,, Geet thanked Dadima ,, she was very happy nd excited for d function nd started her packing to go next morning ,, it was a 3-4 days trip for them nd Geet was going out after many yrs * Maan was back before a day giving charge to Dev nd next morning on BF table Dadima informed Maan that she nd Geet wr going to Nainital to attend her friends function nd they wd stay with Dev& NT ,, Maan was surprised with this sudden program.

Maan: Nainital ,, why so sudden ?

Dadima: Geet's has to attend her friends engagement there.

Maan: Geet's friends ,, in Nainital ?

Dadima: wo Delhi mei settled hein lekin wahan unka native place hei , like we have in HP.

Maan: OK , stay in ur rest house not at their places nd take care of u bcoz d weather is cold there ,, it's good that Dev& NT r there .

Dadima: hummm ,, nd I can check how they wr doing there ? Now they have an independent charge .

Maan: i'm doubtful Dadima but we have to give them a chance to work .

Dadima: huumm,, ab hamesha to unki ungli pakad ker nahi chala saktey na , aaj nahi to kal unhe bhi business dekhna hi hei , tum akele kab tak sab handle karoge ?

Maan: let's see how they'll handle ? aap kab ja rahe ho?

He looked around to see Geet but she was in kitchen nd listening his nd Dadima's convo.

Dadima: after BF .

Maan: OK , inform me after reaching there or if u have any prob .

Dadima: OK , i'm not going alone , Geet is with me .

He passed a smile ,, he knew that Dadima is happy with Geet nd she took good care of her ,, he came out after hugging Dadima nd bid by to her ,, he instructed her driver nd left for KC ,then called Dev nd informed him that Dadima nd Geet wr coming there so take care of them.

A&A went 2days before so Geet informed them before leaving so that they cd arranged d work according that ,, both left in dadima's car ,, it was a 7-8 hr journey nd reached Nainital in afternoon ,, d long journey made them tired so Geet made Dadima to take proper rest for some time after having their tea/coffee ,, here everything was in Dev& NT's charge so Geet didn't take any tension ,, Dadima informed Maan nd Geet informed Arjun about their arrival there ,, next morning was fixed for signing d deal , then lil shopping nd Arjun said that he wd come to take her ,, Geet was also tired so went to take a nap .

d dinner was a flop show Dadima nd Geet gave looks to each other but said nothing ,, Dev was embarrassed as NT cdn't prepare d dinner according to Dadima's choice ,, in KM Dadima nd Geet took all d care personally but NT didn't enter in kitchen nd just ordered d cook ,, d food was spicy nd sweet dish had suger,, Dadima ate unwillingly giving a disappointed look to Dev nd NT ,, Geet was quietly nibbling her food .

She got up nd went to her room ,, Geet too finished her meal nd followed Dadima ,, she gave her meds ,, covered her properly with warm clothes nd came out for a lil walk in lawn ,, they chatt on some topics nd Geet told her that in morning Arjun nd Annie wd come to pick her ,, they strolled for some time nd then went to their rooms .

On d other side Maan came back home after a tiring day , find d KM very quiet nd remembered that Dadima nd Geet wr in Nainital ,,though he himself went on tours almost every week but in home he was missing them ,, he came in his room , changed nd then called Dadima ,, talked to her for few min .

Dadima: Maan Geet se baat kerni hei unhe phone de?

Maan: wo hai pass mei ?

Dadima: nahi wo dusre room mei hei , hume chale jaate hei unke pass.

Maan: nahi Dadima mai morng mei baat ker lunga ,, thand hei aap bahar maat jao.

he made excused to stop dadima.

Dadima: aap humari fikar matt karo ,, humne kitni baar Geet ko kahaty hei phone le lo lekin wo nahi manti , usse aadat nahi hei in sab cheejo ki ,, ab wo bahar hei , phone hota to aap dono baat ker sakty thy na ,, wait Maan bas 1 min.

Dadima went in Geet's room nad forward her phone to Geet with a smile .

Dadima: Geet, ye lo baat karo .

There Maan's heart skipped a beat thinking how he wd talk to her ? Dadima put them in trouble .

Geet: kaun hei Dadima ?

She thought that d phone was from HP nd took that ,, Dadima left from there hiding her smile giving her privacy to talk to Maan,, Geet gave a confused look nd replied on phone.

Geet: Hello , Geet bol rahi hu.

Maan: *********. Maan lost for words ,, he closed his eyes to absorb her voice which he was listening after many days .

Geet: Hello ,,,, hello , kaun bol rahe ho , mujhe awaaz nahi aa rahi ,, hello.

Maan: hello ,, mai Maan.

Geet got a shock nd gasped seeing at d door from where Dadima left after giving her phone,, Maan heard her gasp on phone ,, he understood that she was shocked .

Maan: kaisi ho ?

Geet: *******. She was froze listening his voice nd name ,, her whole body shivered.

Maan: kuch bologi nahi ? ,,,,, wo Dadima ne jidd ki to ,,,

Geet felt a pang , her expressions changed nd eyes turned teary thinking ... Dadima ne jidd ki to ... . In her anger she cut d call ,, Maan was hurt nd felt insulted when Geet didn't reply nd cut d call .

Maan mumbled : nahi bolegi ,, kya karu mei ?

Maan looked at his phone disappointed nd sighed hopelessly ,, he saw that d glass door of study was opened ,, he went in , d room was empty but a fragrance engulfed him , he took few long breaths nd felt a freshness , a smile crept on his face .


Precap - Maan got some fact ...

What he thought about her nd what is she .. He realized that he didn't know anything about her.




Part - 35
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
just came 2 check ur updating status...luckily im the first 2day..
wowww
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😆 🥳 Hi dear...
congo..
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Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Koi nahi milta muhje


😆😆 Hi Jeev ...
kya hua dear..??
etna gussa...😆😆
aa jayenge sab... 😊

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Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 Hi Jeev ...
kya hua dear..??
etna gussa...😆😆
aa jayenge sab... 😊

Meri LA ne splly design kiya hai mere liye 😛 tho use tho karna padega na
jab tak aayenge main so javungi na 🥱
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Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Meri LA ne splly design kiya hai mere liye 😛 tho use tho karna padega na
jab tak aayenge main so javungi na 🥱


OK, good dear...😆
u used it for her ..😆
etni jaldi ku sona hei..??😲


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Originally posted by: singh24


😆 🥳 Hi dear...
congo..

hi babie ty dear😆😃
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Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Meri LA ne splly design kiya hai mere liye 😛 tho use tho karna padega na
jab tak aayenge main so javungi na 🥱

lo;lz..mei bhi sone jaarahi hoon
kal ek godbharai function hai suba
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! Maan busy with wrk! He wants to talk to Geet! Maan happy js looking at her! Geet helps Arjun! She also decides to do something! well written! update soon! Sorry 4 late comments!

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