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Posted: 11 years ago
part 29


dev just want to consol maan but they heard so much noise from outside , both just weep there tear and went to near door and look why so much noise in hospital and when they saw someone maan eyes pop out and he just greet his teeth and grip his finger to control his anger , all just male gaping her , her figure just perfectly fitted on her smooth milky white body that dress just reach near her knee and her smooth leg , maan just gulp and look to all who gaping her with lust

upon that she eating na na just sucking that so called CANDY with loud sound and every time she pull out than put inside her mouth and her pink lips more turn pink with candy when she make pout for candy ,maan

dev mummer near maan eyes maan kis angle se ye tume KID lagati hai

maan give just glare to him and march to His Kid His geet , same time another candy fall from geet hand she ty to bend but maan just reach there in record speed and say loudly don't bend GEETTT

dev mummer possessive fool , hot ladki KID lagati hai and jo khud ke eyes main hai use hoto pe nahi la raha but I think she is perfect for him hu

geet just give angry glare to maan and say kya hai chila ku rahe ho , meri candy gir gayi hai to main utaungi nahi kya MAAN SIR ji

maan - candy gir gayi sab kuch dikh jayega uska kya maan say in low voice and geet heard that and do dance in her mind , ok to app hi de diyjiye meri CANDY , I just love candy and she just make such face , maan gulp hard , he just want to crush that pout with his lips , he just closed eyses and took deep breath and say I will give you he just took that candy and give to geet

geet - oh I feel so tired , let sit hear for some time and geet just sit in corridor itself and try to fold her leg and her dress start to go upside within second maan drench in sweat all are there and geet just ...taking exam of his pasions and next second



maan just run to geet and took her in his arm and just went to geet room
geet just enjoying maan touch but make angry face

and when maan put her on bed this time geet just start her drama fold leg ye kya kar rahe ho maan sir ji koi aisa karta hai kya , you called me KID I know but you carry me like this oh sab dekh rahe the you know but poor maan whose eyes struck on geet milky leg don't hear her one word he just gaping her legs he just want to touch that with his hand maan bite his cheek to control moan his eyes on geet creamy legs



hear geet all ready with next blow geet try to stand but lost balance and fall on maan she just hug him in fear when geet nude leg touch maan body , and chest on his chest he got Goosebumps jo desire chupa ke rakha tha dil main it just start to come out on his body he mummer ye kid nahi hai ,i am so wrong she is not child and gulp hard



hear dev just lost in past when dadi introduce them with sam don't know why but they don't like that sam all just thinking why dadi choose that sam and why maan is so so low but all keep quite just finish that so called introduction and come out all just lost in thought

meera , sasha kuch to gadbad hai maan ka face kuch different bol raha tha , we have to talk with him

all just nodded in yes and next day they ask maan

first maan want to denied but he know he cant say lie to them and say that it is forced marriage he don't like that girl and but cant say anything to dadi and upon that sam just impress dadi so he is fix


all just don't know how to react , dev just put hand on maan shoulder and say main baat karu kya dadi se that she is not right for you and that sentence heard by sam ...she just want to kill that dev but she keep quite she just observed all of them and get that meera and dev get attract to each other there eyes tailing all


sam smile eviely so Msk your group is your power na I will brake this yes you have to live for me just for me and she went from there


sasha just say bas ho gaya rona dhona ok we will go to trip , zara mind fresh kar lete hai than we will think about it what say ,maan just want to denied but all glare and he just nodded in yes



it is rainy day they all chose to go waterfall where till night they will come back in one hour all just went to there destination , maan just informed dadi

and yes as sasha say nature make its magic and maan just forget his pain that area is such beautiful all round so much greenery and water fall it is so beautiful







and dev come on his naughtiness adi who is walking behind one girl , dev just whistling.. and that girl turn and glare to adi , she thought it is adi dev again done same and that girl just turn and just slap adi and mummer , idiot adi just froze in his place


all just look to adi and that girl and all brust in laugh maan just grab dev from his neck and say bahot masti suja rahi hai kya , aisehi usko maar kihlawa din a , wo to kabhi pinky ko chod ke kisi ko dekhata bahi nahi , dev

dev - maan yaar mazak tha mar jaaunga chod de ,


maan - tu to pura ka pura Devil hai tuze chod du ha ...and maan just slap dev and all just paunch on dev

precap

both just standing under water both just lost in each other eyes ...so much love and desire

ab tum log bolo ye dono kon hai

Maan and Sam

maan and geet

dev and meera

adi and pinky

ya phir sasha and ...

one lady arguing with office staff

and saying bad word geet just turn that

lady and slap her hard she hissed in pain

and say you bitch geet again slap

her hard someone mummer sam tum ...



please look note down

and please look this

i replay on all comment on page 7 to 11 and page no 30 -31

of Epl of adoore

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
My pm read this ( dear come soon on thread also i just want to intorduce you on thread also )


i read today update of uljhe...i saw that u uploaded my comment again... thanks dear for giving me credits again... 🤗
today's update was very painful...😭 i thought of so many reasons for maan's rejection and i know u would come up with a reason which everyone will accept and tey wont be able to oppose it bt the one u said its just... i don have words to say what i felt after reading that... till now i thought geet faced alot in life but today my opinion changed... everyline of today's update depicted pain, which anyone could feel... hats off dear for writing such a wonderful part...🤗immense pain, feeling of loneliness, feeling of failure in life, and fear ... yes fear that whoever is close to him will leave him or will face only pain... every emotion a person will experience wen he goes through such circumstances are portraid beautifully... his helplessness wen he came after leaving geet , his love to kiss her , his insecurity that if he accepts her in his life her life too will be spoiled , him asking almighty " app ku kar rahe ho aisa ku" , "

ku , god ku saza de rahi ho aise ku" all these are just wow... he started saying my G but stopped afraid that even if he says sumthing bad will hapen... so he din want to arry sam ... i wonder y dadi took such a decision for him and forced him... being elder ho she failed to see sam's intentions. if not that atleast she should have understood maan's thinking regarding this... she failed a big time as a dadi as a parent as a guardian in this aspect.. she din see through maan's eyes f he is really happi or not...
sam she spoiled everything every relation in maan's life ... that is not enough she made him insecure fearful person😡.. let her go to hell😡
loosing baby is last strand for maan, his fear tat his baby will be left at wrong place is right as a dad. baby is really lucky to have maan as dad who loves him or her so much even before birth...😊
dev and maan shared a grt bond in past dev is the one to whom maan shares his pain but sam din leave tat too she made dev a reason for his pain... anjali who came as happiness in maan's life is also suffering from thalasemia poor baby... seeing everyone whom he loves in pain he s scared now to accept new pupil... wat ever reasons u gave for maan's rejection are justifiable.. even after all this he want to protect geet from himself. he din know that their hapiness lies being together,...his determination to protect geet shows his love for her...
dev meets maan at right moment wen he is broken and ned a shoulder to cry... dev's dialogues"

maaf karde muje maaf karde , tuje is tarah chode ke chala gaya please just give me one chance main sab sun liya hai , tu role jitana dil chaye role , bahot kuch chupaya hai tune sab bahar aane de

agar wo god hamse happiness nahi diya hai to hum chin ke laayenge ussae maan ye dev abhi kahi nahi jaayega apane dost ko chodeke kahi nahi" are just awesome.. dev is very much needed by maan.. good he came at right time...finally maan got his friend back...😆 with geet in his life he will get all hapiness...

geet's entry was a dhamaka... poor maan one he s gone with her look and other side he is angry seeing all other looking at his geet..."
dev mummer near maan eyes maan kis angle se ye tume KID lagati hai" this is 😆 dev is right here... though the update started on a sad note u ended it happily giving hapiness and smile to all readers...😆 i wonder if start of geet's KID KAAND is this wat all she has planned to do??? maan is struck in his own word...😆 today i fell short of words to describe wat i felt while reading... bigwala hugs to u yar for such a wonderful update...
🤗 u made more impatient now to know what will happen next... update soon... waiting...🤗take care...





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can you follow my page Dream come true till 6 sep

please because festival and light both just testing my pasiones please

i update link of part on that thread you all just check once in day

after 6 sep i will again send you pm

can this possible please ans me in comment



Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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wo dev-meera hai..

in process to make their anjali...😛

if it is in past...
present me hai toh only maaneet 😉
Edited by p_OO_ja - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i can pm..
maine uska way dhundha...

copy-paste 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi maansee


and how pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update😛
its ok I will check ur lage.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part mahi geet ne shuru kardiya apna kaand 😆
nw maan realisd dat geet is not kid aft seeng her sexy avtaar😉
maan is possessive abt geet bt dont want 2 accept it😡
sam is such a🤬 startd her evil plan uski tho band bajni chaahiye hpe geet humari ye wish puri karde
dev was such a naughty uski wajase adi ko tappad mila😆
intrstng precap waitng 4 d update mahi
ill keep on checkng ur thread mahi dont worry k prepare well 4 d festival k😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

hi maansee


and how pari



see most of them are in my pm list..
others i will manage from ur frndlist 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_OO_ja



see most of them are in my pm list..
others i will manage from ur frndlist 😉




poo pathshala khol na
tera result aaya hai
maan abhi vahi attka hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovly update
uff geet ka ye kaand maan ki jaan le lega

or hume water shower mai sirf or sirf maaneet chaiye 😛

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