MG FF ~DIRTY REVENGE(PURE LOVE)~PART 16~PG 143~THREAD 2 added - Page 62

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monikaarora

awesome part dear...so finally!! baby geet maan gyi...par wo to naraj hi nhi thi 😆 ...fully enjoyed the update dear...precap is scary...continuee soonnn..


ty monika
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sim.123

Superb part baby

Geet crying because santa didn't gift her anything

Maan took her to Golden Temple but then also she didn't start talking to him

Geet ne ullu bana diya Maan ko good job Geet

HAPPY BIRTHDAY in advance baby !!


ty jaani di
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

geet is full package of innocent kidish sexyyy n devil smart

the beauty with alot of thing
poor maan babu kiya kiya karwya😆
Honey sing yaha bhi preeti you like honey sing🤢mere ko iskey song samj nahi atey😭😆

lovely update


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I love him fariya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Adwika-

God Geet kitna bhaav khati hai and Maan too is enjoying doing everything for her, haww very bad babaji aap sirf Geet ki baatein maante ho, mere bichare Maan ka kya, yeh cheating hai , but pata hai shona mujhe babaji ka role bohot pasand aa raha hai, aww Maan Geet ko golden temple bhi leke chale gaya but Geet nahi maani and finally after Honey Singh dedicated song to her, usne sach bol hi diya ki woh natak kar rahi thi😆😆, bichara Maan kitna tadpaya Geet ne usse


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maan ke liye tu haina babaji ki kya jarurat
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Posted: 10 years ago

~ DIRTY REVENGE ( PURE LOVE )


~ PART -16 ~


After coming back from Amritsar , both Maaneet got engrosed in setting quotations for government tender . It was a really important tender and till now only Mr.Grewal won this tender but this time Maan was determined to win this tender . He along with Adi and Geet set the quotations and Geet played important role in setting quotations . No one in the office knew about it..


Adi submitted the quotations on time and trio were excited for the result especially Geet . She was nervous also but her inner voice was telling her that no matter what KC will win tender this time..


Finally the D-day arrived and Maan along with Adi and Geet reached the XYZ place . The government officials started opening the tenders . Maan was sitting calmy while Adi's hands were turning all sweaty and Geet fully tention free , looking around smiling at people.. Now they started disclosing quotations and the quotations with least amount was from KC..


" Congratulations Mr.Maan Singh Khurana !! this contract is yours " The official declared the result draining smile from Mr.Grewal's face and Maan stepped on the stage and signed contract . Geet in excitement whistled and all gave her a wierd look so she calmed her excitement..


" How can they get this tender ? " thought Mr.Grewal with angry face..


" find out who helped Maan in this tender " furiously told Mr.Grewal to his pa..


" okk sir " pa nodded his head and walked out of hall..


" dekha meri wajah se aap ko yeh tender mil gaya " said Geet elbowing Maan walking towards parking lot..


" haa kyu nahi mein toh achar (pickle) daal raha tha na office mein ek tum hi toh thi jo kaam kar rahi thi " sarcastically told Maan..


" huh " Geet twisted her lips on his statement..


" dekhiye sir party toh banti hai " excitedly said Geet..


" ab iske liye bhi mein tumhe party du " said Maan exasperated..


" acha thik hai..par ek gift toh banta hai mere liye after all maine itni help ki hai aapki " demanded Geet..


" tumhe gift dete dete toh mein bankrupt hu jayoonga " murmured Maan thinking about all the gifts that she had stolen in his absence during their Amritsar trip . Geet had told him about the gifts while coming back..


" okk madam aapko gift mil jayega " promised Maan making Geet beam in happiness..


Both sat in car along with Adi and driver started the car whereas Grewal's pa informed him about Geet that she is the one who has set quotations for tender after hearing Maaneet talks and gathering info about Geet . Mr.Grewal ordered him to kidnap Geet and then kill her . He is one of those mean and rutheless person who doesn't want any obstacle in his business . Its not first time that he is going to kill someone he has done this many times leaving no proof behind..

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Khurana Constructions , Trio stepped out of car and walked towards lift . Geet was talking with Adi and both were laughing on their stupid jokes while Maan shaked his head..


Maan called Adi near him leaving Geet behind . As Geet always walk with baby steps . Adi pressed lift button . Both Adi and Maan entered lift but frowned not seeing Geet around..


" ab yeh ladki kaha gayi " asked Maan annoyingly..


" don't know sir " meekly replied Adi..


" leave her..yehi kehi ghum rahi hu " said Maan knowing her habits and pressed 13th floor button..


Here Geet was wriggling in two men grip . When they were walking towards lift somebody put hand on Geet's mouth and took her out of basement . She was continously hitting them but no effect . They made her sit in car and sealed her mouth with a cloth..


Car entered a barren factory . They made her sit on a chair and freed her mouth from cloth and stood in front of her keeping hands on their waist . Geet gave them a angry look..


" kyu laye hu mujhe yaha " asked Geet strongly . She is not scared of them..


" kya madam..kaisa sawal pucha hai..ab aapko kidnap kiya hai toh kisi wajah se hi kiya hoga " replied one of the man..


" wajah gayi tel ( oil ) lene..tere baap ka maal nahi hu jo utha kar laya hai " bluntly spoke Geet shooting dragers at them and poor men got shock of their life..


" yaar yeh toh sherni nikli " whispered one man to the other..


" dekho madam aap shanti se bhaithe raho..boss decide karenge aap ke saath kya karna hai " told man..


" acha thik hai..ek kaam karo bring chicken briyani for me " non-chalantly demanded Geet folding her legs..


" kyu..hum tere naukar hai " sarcastically spoke first man..


" lets call boss and ask him " suggested other man and they called their boss and told him about Geet..


" arey khila du jo ladki ko khana after all MSK ki employee hai..khila pila kar marenge " commanded Mr.Grewal..


" abhi laa rahe hai " said first man and walked out to bring her chicken briyani..


Geet took put phone from her jeans pocket to listen to music but the man saw her phone and snatched from her hands . Geet glanced at him with baby anger..


" phone kyu snatch kiya " asked Geet with cute frowning face..


" mere face par fool likha hai..itna tih mujhe bhi pata hai ki tum call karugi " replied man..


" ohh gadhe..maine phone gaane sunene ke liye nikala tha na ki call karne ke liye " Geet pointed her index finger at him..


" phone toh nahi milega " denied man keeping her phone in his pockets..


" abe ullu ( owl ) sim card nikal ke de de " said Geet placing her hand in front of him and the man placed on phone on her hand after taking out sim card..


" lo madam aapki chicken briyani " The man placed packet in her lap and Geet started relishing it..


" yummy uff babaji itni der se bhook lag rahi thi " murmured Geet after filling her stomach..


After that Geet started hearing songs on her phone when she got bored of songs she played some games . She passed her time somehow and now its been an hour since she is here..


" aiyyee come here " shouted Geet calling man..


" kya hai " rudely asked man standing beside her..


" I want to eat momos..paneer momos "lolz one more demand from Geet..


" abhi toh khaya tha aur kitna khayogi " The man got so irritated..


" lana hai toh laa warna bhaag " sherni Geet told that man..


" acha laa raha hu " this time man folded his hands in front of her..

*****

" time to send this video to MSK and give him some news about his employee " thought Mr.Grewal sending him Geet's video through mail..


Thanks for all the likes and comments 😳


Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
simran seriously yaar its awesm👏
maaneet nd adi wrkd on gov tender nd no one knws abt in office😃
as expectd tender was crackd by maan nd mr.garewal ordered 2 kidnap geet nd kill her😲
geet demanded 4 her gift 4m maan nd maan agreed bechara kitna gift dega usko
geet got kidnapd nd maan doesnt knw abt it😡
seriously geet is master piece usski jagha koi aur ladki hoti tho freak out hojaathi bt here she is orderng 2 gv biryaani nd stuff😆
waitng 4 d nxt part simran update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahaha geet is so funny ...
plz update soon ...
i m eagrly waiting ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeh geet na sudhdegi nehi...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
lolz hilarious..
maan got thetender
n garewals kidnapped geet
geet demanding food for her
she is enjoying hearing songs..
what will maan do when he saw the videosent by garewals..
superb part
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Posted: 10 years ago




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