MG FF ~DIRTY REVENGE(PURE LOVE)~PART 16~PG 143~THREAD 2 added - Page 54

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Adwika-

OMG, geet ka yeh roop dekh kar mujhe main tera hero ka dialogue yaad aa gaya " main dikhta bohot hi sweet innocent swami type ka but hoon me bohot harami type ka ", yahan par Geet ke liye thode changes, dikhte hai bohot hi sweet innocent pyaari type ki but hai bohot hi devil dimag ki 😆 , uss Sanjay ki Geet ne toh acchi khasi vaat laga di lekin uske baad Maan ko bolti hai aap bhi apna haath saaf karlo, Geet thoda toh haram karde, but usne joh kiya ek dum sahi kiya, aise logo ke saath aisa hi hona chahiye, and Geet kitni natak karti hai, khudne accident kiya upar se uss bichara ko pareshaan kar rahi thi, Maan bachke rahio, yeh jaisi dikhti hai waisi hai nahi, ab toh tumhe demo bhi mil gaya hai, apne track ki halat dekhi na, yeh thi innocent Geet ko rulane ki, ab bhukto, ab pata nahi yeh Geet Maan se kya kya kawayegi

Waise I think Sasha knows truth behind the mystery😕

chalo ab jaldi se update do, me waiting


ty sweety
tu bhi puri geet ki tarah filmy hai
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ns.1

geet is so funny 😆and so are you 😆😛 kya bahana diya hai update nahi dene ka😆😆 lovely teaser update soon😊


hey thats not a bahana 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

~ DIRTY REVENGE ( PURE LOVE ) ~


~ PART - 14 ~


Maan was sitting on bed doing his work on lappy whereas Geet was laying on her bed listening to music with earphones in her ears . She was totally enjoying and poor Maan was getting irritated with her silence . He doesn't like her silence . He loves her chirpy self more . He was badly missing her cute talks . Though he was working but his mind and heart was lost in Geet's thoughts . How to manofy her ? He definately can't bear her ignorance towards him..


After closing his lappy , he walked towards washroom to freshen up while Geet looked at his actions with narrowed eyes . Geet phone flashed with her mumma's call and she excitedly sat on bed putting phone on her ears..


" aapko ab yaad aayi meri " complained Geet with fake anger..


" no hii hello..directly complains " spoke Rano from other side..


" Geet hello bolne mein vishwas nahi karti " cutely said Geet with her baby atitude..


" hey bhagwan Geet..mein busy thi isliye late se call kiya..yeh sab chod aur bata dinner kiya " asked Rano familiar with her eating habits..


" nahi abhi nahi kiya..thodi der baad karoongi " replied Geet..



There talks were going on when Maan come out of washroom and heard her talks with Rano . Suddenly a plan come into his mind to manofy Geet..


" Geet mujhe phone do..I wanna talk to ur mother " said Maan forwarding his hand..


" kyu ?? aapko meri complain karni hai " poutingly asked Geet covering phone with her hands..


" nahi Geet..I want to ask something from ur mom " replied Maan with calm voice..


" pakka na " said Geet with cute frowing face..


" pakka meri maa " said Maan with grumpy tone..


" mumma Maan sir wants to talk to u " informed Geet and then handed phone to him..


Maan walked towards balcony . Geet too followed him with silent steps and hide behind curtains to listen to their convo..


After exchanging greetings , Maan told Rano about evening's incident to Rano and asked her ways by which they always manofy her . Rano told him not to worry much about that but he insisted and Rano told him to gift her something but then Maan told her that he tried this . She gave him idea of cooking her fav food . He too liked the idea and thanked her before cutting call..


" so Khadus Singh Khurana is going to cook dinner for me but his bad luck bcoz I am not gonna manofy so easily " muttered Geet to herself with naughty smile and then jumped on bed laying down..


Maan entered room smilingly and returned phone to her and then took exit from room going towards hotel kitchen . On entering kitchen , he talked to main chef and shared his problem with him . The chef easily agreed to help him and both started making her fav food..


Maan come in the room with a plate mentally praying that she likes the food and starts talking to him..


" Geet come on get up and eat dinner now " said Maan placing plate on table and sitting beside her on bed . Geet was inside the blanket smiling . She was so much enjoying his pampering..



" Geet I said get up now " sternly told Maan pushing blanket from her face and Geet immediately stopped smiling maintaining serious face and sat on bed..


Maan picked up plate from table and forwarded towards her . Geet twisted her lips taking plate from his hands . She had thought not to eat food prepared by him but seeing her fav food she couldn't resist and pounced on food..


" how much she eats ?? " murmured Maan noticing her eating tendency but Geet sharp ears heard that and she gave him a angry look.


. " yeh chance bhi gaya..do minute chup nahi reh sakta tha " muttered Maan under his breath observing her angry looks for him..


Geet handed him plate after fulling her tummy and Maan silently took plate from her..


" Geet how was the food ?? u know I made it for u " asked excitedly Maan rubbing his hands fearing her reaction..


" bekar " replied Geet making faces draining all colours from his face but inwardly smiling seeing his red angered face..


" what ?? kha toh bade maze se rahi thi " said Maan angrily..


" haa toh.. jab insaan bhooka hota hai toh sukhi roti bhi kha leta yeh toh phir bhi thik tha " exclaimed Geet making him more red in anger..


" u know what Geet..forget it " Maan stood up from her bed..


" haa toh forget it..maine kab kaha yaad rakhne ko " said Geet giving her angelic smile..


" argghhh Geet " Maan kept his hands on his head which was ready to burst anytime..


" argghhh Maan sir " mimicked Geet and Maan left the door banging the door . Geet started jumping on bed shouting " ohh yes..yippee..Khadus Singh Khurana irritate ho gaya "..


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" ohh babaji !! mera phone kaha gaya..mumma ko phone karna hai..story sunini hai warna neend kaisa aayegi " Geet was murmuring while finding her phone . Maan ears shoot up hearing her..


" thats means she can't sleep without listening to story..nice chance Maan " thought Maan . He wants her to talk with him . Its been 5 hrs that she hasn't spoke even a word with him and it was killing him..


" hmm Geet phone chodo na mein tumhe story sunata hu " hesitantly said Maan . Geet gave him a " Are u serious " look and Maan nodded his head..


" toh thik hai shuru ho jayo " Geet laid down on bed covering herself fully with blanket..


Maan hurriedly opened internet on his phone and googled stories for kids . On finding suitable story , he sat beside Geet and started telling her story . Soon baby Geet slept and Maan too laid on his bed sleeping peacefully after a tiredful day..


Precap - Yo Yo Honey Singh ( hope u guys know him )


Thanks for all the likes and comments 😳


Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update
maan made food in hotel's kitchen
geet liked it
loved this update
Edited by heemasomani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow super update simran👍🏼
maan is nt likng geet's silence nd tryng many ways make her 2 talk no use
geet got cal 4m rano nd maan got d idea hw 2 pacify geet 4m rano bt geet heard it 😆
maan went 2 hotel's kitchen nd prepard geet's fav food though geet likd it bt tld maan dat it wasnt gd 😲
maan got irritatd nd went out nd geet celebratd her success 😛
nw geet got again prblm she cant sleep witout listenng stories😆
nd maan took dis chance nd made baby geet sleep by telng stories wit d hlp of Google 👍🏼
waitng 4 d nxt part simran update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ...
eagrly waiting fr nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ...
eagrly waiting fr nxt ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet enjoying maans pl8
he asked rano s help too
geet didnt accept his hand made food is gud too..
maan saying stories to geet...lolz
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update!!!👏👏 ⭐️⭐️Maan is irritating for her silence...he is missing her cute talks...he is trying to manofy her in all ways but she is irritating him more😆and enjoying his pampering😳Awww Maan tells bed time stories for kid Geet😳Loved it so much❤️❤️Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor maan not liking geet's silence and he finding ways to make her talk but geet was enjoying all this pampering from maan...maan even asked rano how to manafy geet she told him to cook her favourite food...geet listend their talks hidingbehin curtains and she smllled cunningly to irritate him futher
maan went to hotel kitchen and with the help of cook he preapred some thing and brought it for geet eventhough she dont want to eat foof but finding her favourite food she ate it..and maan's comment made her angry again and maan scolded himself for blurting that...
wah kya baat hain maan himself ready to tell her bed time story he googled it and told her the story and baby geet slept soon
eagerly waiting for the next part
i hope all this care and concern for her is not for his plan to trap her..

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