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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

😃😃


Haiyee! mera TJ😳 loved the description😉

Anything descriptive about him, and Avi loves it - except for him being called bulky 😆
Jekyll and Hyde can describe Geet more than TJ as far as I can say... He is ultimate cool😃

I think it describes both of them. Just that they alternate the times when one is Jekyll and the other is Hyde.
you and I must have the same thought with the curl arund the finger😆 mere update mein bhi maine yeh likha. BTW, I can confess that hubby does this, tum kya confess karna chahti ho Mari?😆

I hadn't read your update by the time that I wrote this.
And, abhi mera confession time nahin aaya 😳
Aunty kuch zyaada koshish nahi kar rahi hai dono ko milane ki?

She is getting desperate at these two's zidd, just like we all are 😆
Fawad was xtra sweet.. Haiyee I like him too.. Kitna confuse kar rahi ho mujhe😆

Confuse ho rahi ho? Bas phir mera maqsad pura hua 😆
Sleepless nights😲 Ab toh bol hi doh? Yeh kya ho raha hai?😆

Iss ke reply mein mujhe ek song yaad aa gaya.
Meri neend udd gayi hai
Mera chayn kho gaya hai
Tere pyaar mein meri jaan ye kya ho gaya hai
😆
Long luscious update

Aisse likhti raho...

Babaji accha pati denge👍🏼

Aisi hi dua'ein deti rahi, aisi hi updates mil tay rahenge! 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago


Songs bhi gaane lagi 😆

Bas ab ho gaya tera case full and final 😆

Dua toh humesha saath hai 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

helllooo di!!!!😊
finally i m back in IF & jst read chapter: 35
Welcome back! 😃
well d title was so apt... "raging wars" it was indeed... bt one thing which came out as positive in dis part according to me was dat maan clearly showed dat he isnt as unaffected by geet's presence & her so called boyfriend vyan as he tries to portray in front of her & oders...
Exactly. It is a war for him, an internal war, which pushes and pulls his will about letting his feelings show or not.
& geet well finally she is waking up from her looonnnggg sleep & seeing things around her which is not said in words to her bt above all dis she cant jst accept maan's behaviour & change so easily... she still wish to see maan actually her maan ( bt she will call him "her friend" maan) in dat mask of MSK...
And that is precisely why he needs to keep the MSK mask firmly in place, to shake her up and to peel her "friend Maan" waali thoughts away to reveal the truth to herself.
dis heated argument has actually given me hope dat coming days r not gonna be simple routine of work for maaneet & vyan will help in it unknowingly as he is helping till nw...😃
Let's just wait and see what happens.
well nw i m off to read nxt chptr see soon in my nxt comment... bye😊
Thanks, Prati! 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ooo a reserve. Does this mean knock knock at my door?😆

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I am loving this cat and mouse game between these two.😆
She is flustered and unraveling fast. She is out of her depths and drowning fast and I was giggling away as I was reading this😆

Poor her! Everyone's enjoying her plight. 😆
What a vast difference in her reaction from Vyan to Maan. He he he!!
It had to be! 😃
I was waiting and waiting for maan's reaction and my thoughts were getting really murderous coz I was not seeing the reaction.😲

Par last mein kya baazi palti tumne Mayyo. The perfect ending to an outstanding update.😉

Mission successful! 😉
Geet ke liye gaana

Jaane kya baat hain, jaane kya baat hai,
Nind nahi aati badi lambi raat hai
😆
Theek theek suit karta hai Geet ko ye song 😆

I liked the title. It shows how he can relax in her company. How he can shed his sophisticated persona and be himself😃

Thats one different interpretation of the title. I like it. 😃
Going to read this one once more. Will probably have more to say about this one😃😃

You're more than welcome to read and say all you wish to. 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

helooo i m back di...😃 aftr reading chapter:36 as i promised...😊
That was quick!
well it was actually a much needed respite for our geet from d thoughts which r messing her head & life dat is vyan's feelings for her & maan & his changed behaviour...
well undoubtedly maan's nature is of more concerned for geet den she admits... bt well v cant xpect her to acknowledge it so easily...
Certainly not. She is a hard nut to crack for herself.
haaye d sister bond u showed in dis chapter actually made me miss dis thing in my life bit more den i already do... wen u have a sis u knw u can tell anything u want & never need to think twice & will get honest & best suggestion from dem... like geet discussed her mess wid raya & d advice she gave to not initiate confrontation wid vyan widout him hinting on it & dats so rite acc to her situation...
The bonds between two sisters are not something I can completely put in words. They're sisters, they're best friends, there each other's guides, lights in darkness, the most reliable shoulders for each other, the best advisors... I do believe when one has a sister, she need not make friends outside. 😊
& den abt maan well she needs to reaalize dat actually somewhere dey both r still standing on dat place where geet rejected him even a chance to wait for her or her parents acceptance... becoz dey didnt talked abt it aftr dat & its somewhere lingering in der mind & life still... dey need a proper closure b4 dey can start over...
Yes, they need a proper closure for the wounds to heal, and it's about time they get it.
and its possible dat a best friend can be a love of ur life bt its simply not possible to be jst friend wid somebody wen either one or both hv feelings for each oder...
Rightly said!
well dis girls day out wid kids was simply refreshing & sweet to gossip around & chat abt anything & everything under sun...
shreya, shay & yana were simply adorable & shreya's conno wid geet was simply marvellous her xcitement & getting sad for geet was soo sweet...
& ryan showed wat a grownup go through feeling left out & getting impatient wen wid family at tyms especially wid kids & ladies...

simply loved dis light hearted chapter of girls day out & sisters weekend... amazing chapter di...👏
Thank you, Prati! So glad to know you enjoyed it. 😃
now i m sooo impatient to read wat lay ahead for maaneet & vyan...
That's coming up!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

tere mere darmiyaan kuch toh baki hai


Infact ...bohot kuch baki hai
Lol



Haha! Definitely bohat kuch hai aur aahista aahista saamne bhi aayega! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

I imagine this as a tv drama, not the Indian ones though :-D.
In this update characters are letting themselves show their emotions, preferences whatever...
From Vyan's extra care to Geet noticing it to Maan being good, chill-pill types...and again Geet kind of self-consciously accepting the fact that he affects her and more than affecting he matters to her...
Aunty is definitely extra sweet...:-D
And typical too...
And their convo in car, their talks speak for themselves...
Enjoyed it as always...
You make a perfect dish with everything just as needed and which makes you wish for more :-D.



Thank you so much! It is certainly one of the biggest compliments a writer can receive that the readers can imagine what's written as a show, and that the readers wish for more. 😳

I hope I can keep your interest alive with the story. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

amazing...opps maan effect...m wondering when their journey will actually start...??? also wana know maan prologue...



Thank you!
Well, their journey will start once they face their past together rather than running from it.
Maan's side of the story will slowly be revealed, but from Geet's POV.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyasi

It was an awesome updte as always and I loved all the shades of Maan... Especially loved the scene where he realises Geet has hurt herself and unconsciously he calls her by her first name than Miss Handa... This shows he still considers her his friend and important, just that he doesnt wants to show it...

Continue soon😉



Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

@Bold: You caught it! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Awesome part
Still don't get this 2 fav



Thank you! And I'll be waiting to see which chapter makes it to your list. :)

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