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Posted: 11 years ago
omg!! what a shocking turn of events 😲the truth is out that maan didn't rape geet infact she was never raped😕but I am very confused now and even have some questions? if maan didn't do anything then why did he distance geet from himself 😕? why is he so scared and insecure to loose her if the whole truth comes out? what was that happened that night when geet lost her voice and why did that person say his name was maan?😕please clear these doubts of mine soon...eagerly waiting to see geet and maan face to face and what more will maan tell her now...continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME

geet's family is shameless. ..good that geet answered them

Shocking par..geet was not raped. Now geet wants answers from maan & we too 😊

waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Osheeen Hugs & Kisses 🤗🤗🤗 for this fabulous update.

I felt sorry for Armaan but only that much one would feel for the girl the hero dumps to be with the heroine in a movie😳 dont get me wrong when it comes to Maaneet I am vicious😈. But yes I too like him he is Geet's best friend. Besides Kushika is there to take care of him.

As i guessed after cooling down a bit she will see things a little differently
"Did she do wrong not telling Armaan about her marriage? She didn't have any other option.Just like Maan didn't have any."

Human mind is so twisted its hard to understand it but its sometimes OK to be confused. Its very difficult to hate a person who has invaded your heart long back.

"So you hate him for raping you or hiding the truth? The voice asked. *How does that matter?* She thought. It does... it does, once you sort out why you hate him you would know. She shook her head. Her mind wandered to that night. He had raped her thinking that she was Raji, the real sister but by mistake he corrupted the wrong sister, the cousin sister. Geet felt disgusted at the relief buried under all the other more potent feelings. She felt relieved that it was Maan that night and no one else. And if someone had to be corrupted that night by him, out of the two; she was relieved, again, that it was her, not Raji. Wasn't she sick, glad on being raped?"

OK i know i like to quote but i will probably end up quoting the entire update so will try to make that less. She wakes up only to find him at her door stop. Was she little angry at him for avoiding her all those days? despite everything she couldnt but help taking in his handsome features!...I'm glad she noticed how miserable he was though it gave her satisfaction. She was satisfied because she knew not only her he was also suffering. He too noticed how unwell she had been...if only he could do what he was thinking take her in his arms n make everything alright.😔

Loved how you wrote the entire Maaneet convo


I got a call from the police station. You were arrested last night.


*I think I did. Sorry it caused you inconvenience. I don't know why they would think of calling you.*


*Don't confuse yourself with someone who can question me.*


*This isn't my home. Soon you won't have all these problems. Just like me, you'll also be free.*

His eyes widened but he guarded his feelings and let out a sigh. There was a hit, a spot touched inside some column of her n she realized she missed him. How horrific... if only- if only he hadn't- he hadn't what?


God, if he said to be careful she might do the opposite just to spite him. He didn't want that. He didn't want her turning into a brat and, god forbid, get involved in wrong activities. He wanted no harm to touch her. She was staring at him, waiting for him to leave. He felt helpless, so much so that he pitied himself. He cleared his throat searching for words, n praying for her to not shut the door on his face. You should have called me.


*I have people who would help me without any concealed motives. I called Armaan.* She told to hurt him and waited for a reaction.

While looking back she couldnt remember anything bad about Maan. Only the good things only the beautiful things she felt for him or shared with him were in her mind. Finally she acknowledged to herself that despite trying hard she couldnt really hate the person she loves She was-forced herself to be-disgusted. It was wrong. Not like she didn't try, she did, to replace his image with what he really was but it was not happening. She wiped the tears that had started to wet her cheeks. It was just not happening. She wanted him. How do you live without someone who you were addicted to but who didn't existed? Do you live at all?

I knew her relatives came for their own selfish reasons. Wasnt it enough for them they got rid of her? but their greed brought them to KM where they proposed to get her remarried & asked for money. yeah they care so much for her! Such cheap disgusting people.


Mai 50 lakh dunga. At Maan's words his eyes sparkled with greed. Agar aap khud ko mujhe bech de aur iss ghar me naukar banke kaam kare. (That is my MSK😎)

Finally the true revelation

"Tum logo ne wahi dekha tha jo tum log dekhna chahte the. Wo admi mai tha jisne Geet ko uss raat- Maan gulped, breathing hard, sweat breaking out on his forehead. Maine uska rape nai kia tha, sirf kapde fade the, jo khoon uske kapdo pe tha wo mera tha."

So it was Maan that night but he didnt rape her. I really had thought he did it but if i can guess every twist & turn then whats the fun in reading. The unexpected should happen n its such a relieving surprise. But he did tarnish her image. Thank you for not making him the Rapist for real...it was really hard to digest.

Loved how she faced her so called relatives with strength n courage n how proud her hubby was of her. Yup she was no longer that meek girl they can abuse n torture.

Waiting for answers just like Geet. She will definitely find him n this time she wont let him let her go.

He did it for revenge but he couldnt bring himself to do the same thing as Brij. So he had staged things to make people believe it was rape. But even if he didnt rape her for real he did stain her reputation, caused her to lose her voice & made her go through all the abuse n humiliation...I think thats why he feels so guilty, ashamed n not worthy of her love.


Edited by mila1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Almost 270 likes
Pls updt soon
The suspense is killing me
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow the whole update was like a roller coaster ride.many things got relieved in this update.
geet's relatives are not human's,it's a disgrace to call them humans.pathetic people.
looking forward to read more.
thx for the update,loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear ...i have been reading and liking your stories,they are awsome and i absolutely love
them and look forward for the updates.you are one gifted writer!!!!
OsheenDgr8 ji tussi gr8 ho😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
muaahhh... darling!!!! loved the update totally...
im so excited to type this comment... i mean... i want to share what i felt in this immediately... kal hi padli maine.. bahut mushkil se rokha kudko aaj comment karne ke liye... kal time nahi ta...


waise starting from the start,,,,

hmmmphhh... Armaan's reaction was a little expected...
but he was calm than i though he would be when he will know the truth...

but loved when GEET told this...

Do you love him?

She nodded wiping her tears, for a change she wanted to be honest with Armaan. She loved that Maan who was unreal. Still she loved him and couldn't spare those feelings to anyone else.


also... in sab mamle me... GEET ka ye soch kamal hai... this is what i like in her... but i know it will take time for her to digest the fact that he raped her...
but still her thinking this is awesome... i salute her... for her positiveness always...

Did she do wrong not telling Armaan about her marriage? She didn't have any other option.

Just like Maan didn't have any.

A small voice in her head said. *But he raped me. That is entirely different.* So you hate him for raping you or hiding the truth? The voice asked.*How does that matter?* She thought. It does... it does, once you sort out why you hate him you would know.


She felt relieved that it was Maan that night and no one else. And if someone had to be corrupted that night by him, out of the two; she was relieved, again, that it was her, not Raji.


even i was... 😊

awww... i was happy with MAANEET encounter after so many days...
there also she is observing him... 😳
but her replies are not so like GEET... but itna to honi chahiye.. after what he did... he deserves this much hatred from her... though i agree dat he suffered enough... i understand GEET's situation also.. she can let go of all those humilation that easily... becoz she suffered dat... now she needs time to overcome it...
like dadi said... she loves him... n cant be away from him... MAANEET ka milan ka karrahi hu me intezaar...

ahhaa... when u mentioned relatives from HP... i though someone else... but i didnt expect these ghatiya people to come to KM!!!

how dare those kutti's to say something like dat... they want money from MAAN!!!! n want to take GEET with them 😡 😡 😡

par MAAN ka jawab sahi ta... vun kamino ke liye...

Her eyes involuntary darted to Maan who sat calmly, his posture stiff but otherwise he looked ice cold. His next words surprised her but she wasn't scared. She knew he wouldn't let that happen, the belief stunned her.

but trust me i was really shocked when he said he didnt rape her... i never guessed dat... whne he said dat.. i thought he is just telling like dat.. so dat they shouldnt blame GEET!!!
but that was true... oh my!!!! 😲 and i was happy 😃



loved at the end when GEET asked them to get out of the house with her actions!!!
now im so eaaagggerly... ( cant even guess ) so exciteldly waiting for nex part... update soon. dearo...

muje na sab kuch likhna hai... ek ek line sensational ta update me.. par nahi likhparahi hu... samjo muje sab pasand aaya... bahut!!!! 😳

but please ha... 2,3 romantic parts chahiye hi chahiye... tabi achi lagti hai end... ab tak to koi romance nahi ta... matlab... MAAN ko gulit ke alawa...kuch aur janne ka mauka hi nahi mila... let dem send to HM.. or do something... but pls dont end without proper romance... pls na... 😉

precap to dedeti toda shanti milti 😛
Edited by deepthich - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update..h any girl but ehat abt rev...is that true??????? i knew maan will never do such thing witenge...teeji is vey bad person , even monsters are less infront of them...😡 and armman...poor guy...his behavior is justified as human...and geet ki halat to no words for geet...and gav walo ki duhai dekar wo kya free me nokarani chahate the.but now geet is strong and moreevr maan is with hes unknowingly...love is cure and medication for any wound and their love will give them wound...these lines are i feel perfect for geet and maan also...beautifully written part...awsme...but di i dont want bezuba to end..iam emotionally attach to this story and i request u plzzzcom with another story with same flouvor of maaneet...plzzzwaiting for next...aur ha 3 4 romantic part with hm chahiye...maan and geet ki chemistry to dikhi hi nahi iss sare mamale mamale me.#besharam reader iam#😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆...waiting for next😆
Edited by trishtej - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update

Geet telling Armaan the truth. Armaan is shocked. His reaction was justified. But will he forgive Geet n be friends again.

Maan n Geet face to face after so many days. Both are craving for each other. Only they can soothe the other.
Maan concerned about her as she went to jail but can't express openly. His heart must have pained to hear Armaan bailed her.

Geet greedy relatives came. How cunning are they. Insulting Geet. But I loved the way Maan handled them. Sabki bolti band karwa di. N Geet also got the courage to stop her brother.

Maan admitting in front of all his deeds.
Now wat will happen next??

Second last part... SERIOUSLY!!!!! Pa for do like this. Don't end this fast. Want this story to go on.
N want to see the glimpse of their lives after they have accepted each other.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really good update.
very touching. hope this will mend Maan and Geet's relationship.

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