this is what i never wanted!!!! 😭GEET hating MAAN 😭
muje samaj nahi aata... me padnahi pati hu... tu ye sab sochke likhti kaise hai?? u have to live in those two characters to write and portray what they feel... so we can also feel that pain...
not only u but all beautiful writers as u... salute to all of them
finally MAAN's past is infront of GEET which ruined their present... but this has to come out somehow or other... now its out... and it brought so much pain... for MAANEET... also for us 😒
i somehow expected this might have happened... MAAN being that out of control might have some strong reason... n that is this...
i liked ur that post where u said u dont support rapist... but no one will repent like MAAN did... i agree with that... 😊
also i hated this thing the most... the GEET... whose character i loved the most... whose charater is like inspirational... who has outcome such a big loss in her life... n tried to be happy somehow or other... still tried to dream in all those circumstances,,, where she was beaten up in her hometown... where she was humiliated in MAAN's home... she is lost now...
this is not at all aceptable to me... she is the one whom i loved the most in this story... her brave nature... i want that to be back
as a friend i want to suggest something... GEET forgiving MAAN with MAAN being silent... n supporting.. n caring is normal... though i love to see that... i want to see this GEET do different... i mean... she has to forgive MAAN at the end... but i dont want her to be like normal ... all hope lost girl who forgive him because of circumstances... or dadima's promise to give hima notehr chance... i dont know what to say... but i would love to read... being a fab writer u are... u can think something differefnt right?? like how GEET had been the strongest till now... and she should be till the end!!!
she has to succeed at the end... starting from now... she has to be as normal as she was... like she should be brave... n she has to fogive MAAN... not bcoz he is repenting... or she has fallen in love with him... she has to forgive him bcoz she knows no one else can love her like MAAN... that should be different... she will accept him bcoz she knows he is the one for him... not just bcoz he gave her shelter.. n married to her...
i dont know what i was writing... im not able to express much what i want... but it would be really fab.. if its little different thatn regular story...
if this suits ur track apply it.. or else thats fine...
there is nothing that i feel bad if u dont put it... i love ur story... bcoz i know u will write something unique and different always!!! and intresting enough that i wait for the upcoming part 😃
but im also sad that u told it will end in few parts... im always sad whenever ur stort ends... but i love to see the GEET in this story but dont forgot i love romance 😉
what happened with MAAN's sister was really bad... even i would have hated MAAN in the start... but seeing him so agonised all these days melts my heart...
dadi asked GEET a chance... and i know GEET will give that,..
but seriously cant see saddy parts more 😭
romance to ab tak teek se hua nahi... ab to hone de... puleej... i know this is not the time to ask for romance... but i want it 😛
MAAN again becoming ruthless... GEET goinf into shell is very bad...
i just hope this ends soon...
vuff... u know aaj me apni comment se satisified hu... bahut dino baad... aaram se bhaitke likhne ka mauka mila,,,,
waiting for next... update soon devil... 😊
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