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Posted: 11 years ago
omg.., the cat is out of the bag.. but very sadly.. poor geet.. i m really angry on maan though he did all these for his sis.. but y geet?? waiting for the next update...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
The confession without hiding anything. Almost all of part 31 is scripted with his confession. He told everything. Everything about why he did it, why he married her, his sufferings, his helplessness, his love all...how quickly he fell for her

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When everyone was coming to take you I had to save you anyhow, take you away from that hell where you were tortured because of me. So I married you without any glance at the future. And I fell for you. It happened too fast just when you brother and others had swords out, pointed at my neck. You came out without a care for yourself, despite my instructions and wouldn't go back in until the swords were down n I was out of danger. That act left me aching and... I couldn't stop myself. It was fate's payback. I now know why I had to feel for you. I had to burn in hell knowing that I had wronged the girl I loved."
I was eagerly waiting for her reaction. she didnt react at first but stilled even that is a reaction of being shocked beyond measure. I'm not surprised at her being appalled, hurt n angered. Its not just that easy to forgive ur rapist n live happily ever after. She is also upset with Dadima for not telling her the truth. She may not understand Dadima's POV now but i also agree with her that Geet came as a new bride n she didnt want to crush her dreams.

U clearly portrayed her feelings n at this moment its justified for her to feel this way
"*Kya socha aapne? Let Geet live a life of lie, let her dream. That I would live happily with my own rapist who didn't even had the guts to tell me the truth. Mera dil tootta? Aur aaj kya hua Dadimaa? Aaj kya hua? Sach saamne aa gaye aur aapko kabhi pata nai chalega kitna dard hua mujhe jab- Maine unhe aapna sab kuch mana. Chee, mujhe sochke bhi sharm aati hai. Maan was never that man that I always thought him to be. All this time he kept me with him to satisfy his guilt. And you supported him. You cheated me.*
Nai aisa nai hai. Dadimaa said crying but Geet's own ache was so colossal she couldn't see anything else. Inside her something had broken. She had always held on to that little strength, a voice that told her to always be happy. No matter how hard the times may be she had lived through them. Not today... Today all her past agony seemed so small. Like the real definition of pain she had just came to know... pain n betrayal. Nothing in world could make it go, ever. How she will live with it she had no idea.
Her chin quivered and hands shook. *Aisa hi hai, Dadimaa. Isilie mai jaa rai hu. Mera iss duniya me waise bhi koi nai hai aur jisse apna mana usne tod dia mujhe. I am indebted to your grandson. Aaj tak mujhe Maan ne jo dia maine khushi k sath lia yeh sochke k usme kahi na kahi mere pati ka pyar chupa hai. But he was just paying me, buying me and I can't take it anymore. Wo admi kabhi mera pati ho hi nai sakta aur mai ek-ek paisa chukka dungi.*"

But despite being angry n hurt she cant brush off the feelings she has developed for him for years...she is this much hurt n upset because it was caused by the person she deeply loves. Once she cools down a bit she may see things differently.

As i thought earlier Dadima's illness is needed to stop her from leaving Maan. U hv skillfully given the entire confession n made everything clear like crystal. And also gave righteous description of Geet's reaction. A superb update.👏 Thank u.

PS: Its good to know that he upon Dadima's insistence went to HP to surrender himself for his crime n bear the punishment for his crime. So he didnt realize it was the wrong girl until he met her the 2nd time. Be it Geet or Rajji that doesnt make his crime any less severe. Nothing justifies rape.
Edited by mila1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesm part. Loved it. W8ng 4 nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
the most awaited part - the revelation and past
it broke geet completely
she had hope for her marriage which got shattered knowing she was just a charity case to maan and dadi and a way for them to assauge their guilt
maan acted rashly in a drunken stupor and nothing can excuse it - no reason is justifiable
hope he burns in his agony

but what will geet do now
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Posted: 11 years ago
its been quite a long time since i commented on this ff of urs (well others as well) .. i used to read you ff's on phone and was too lazy to comment from there (aaj he pta nai q i read it on laptop and i'm glad) ..
this part was waaay too good.. the way you showed maan telling every thing he had inside his heart, hidden from geet, was intense.. when geet was talking to daadi ma, i knew the update was about to end but still i was hoping i wont end and hopefully when i come down, there would be the link to the next update (silly right? i know lol ) .. girl you did an amazing job on this part (well the whole ff actually).. how fate had set up everything for them and in this way :| i'm glad to have found your work.. keep it up 👏👏 and hurry up with the next one too *slurrpy kiss as a rishwat* 😆

love you
Noor


Edited by NoorFatima - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeahhh u updated thank u thank u so much di...I just loved it it was so emotional what Maan did was due to his revenge but it was a sin...he treated geet same way the way brij did wd manvi both took revenge...iam not going to say that geet should forgive Maan because which rule says gunhegarooki saza un k pyaron se le Maan was wrong!!Geet tu yhi sochegi na k Maan ne apne guilt dor krne ki ejah se sb kya r wo galat b nh h..pta nh kya krna chahye usko em confuse upper se I dont want maan to suffer at the same time ajeeb confuse se hogae hn mein 😕 but di agaye jo b hoga em waiting like anything update koshish krna jaldi do ap...Thank u is part k liye 🤗
Edited by xolfiya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb !! Maan did what it in revenge n he stil remorse it..geet is right at her pov..waiting 4 nxt Wil geet stay in Km 4 Dadi shake..
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan revenj take geet evry thing now he regerts
told evry thing to geet
geet shatered to know
dadi also know about this
geet want to leave the house
really emotional update

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Posted: 11 years ago
Indeed this was the most difficult part.

Maan bared out his heart in front of Geet. Told every detail of his pain, n sin. That was just outstanding. The way u described his emotions made me emotional.

Geet reaction was natural. No girl can bear the truth. She is thinking of leaving. I think jab Geet Ghar chod ke chali jayegi then both of them will be clear of wat they want. So according to me only for a few days she should be away from Maan.

Dadi n Geet talks were also important. Dadi is a mentor in their lives.
Dadi had a heart attack. Now wat will Geet do???
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Posted: 11 years ago
post in the new thread dear...

FF Daily Updates Thread 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4115693/ff-daily-updates-thread-12

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