MG SS - Rakshak #2 Updated Epilogue, Pg 66 Feb 13 - Page 21

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Hi All Maaneet FF readers. I have planned to complete my incomplete ffs. I have restarted my work on this FF first. I am hoping that there still are some Maaneet FF readers who will visit this thread. I am trying to come back in flow and it may take couple of updates to come in old form. So please pardon me if you see some lack. You are also free to provide your suggestion if any. I will always take them in positive way.

Also this part is just to form the continuity.

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PART 11

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It had been 3 months now and Mohinder was losing his patience. He had seen Maan and Geet together and that thought irked him to no end. Single child of Mohinder Handa, Princess of his empire was with that bodyguard. And he was not doing anything. Was this his strength and power? That bodyguard had power to take his daughter away from him. His daughter being wife of that low salaried Bodyguard. Enough was enough, he had to take some serious step now. He had till now not stopped the credit card of Geet. Wherever his daughter was he wanted her full comfort. Now he was realizing, this was his biggest mistake. She will only realize the truth of life if she faces the real problem of life, Money. This is the 1st step he will take and then he has planned further.

On the other side in Amritsar, while Maan had taken small job, it was meager earning, but he had to do something. He was not able to understand how to handle this twist of life, which has suddenly becoming so beautiful for him. No one at home taunted him, they have stopped demeaning him and on top Geet ka pagalpan for him. He could not understand, what does she see in him that she is all fida on him. Her being grateful to him for saving her life can have some logic though he still blamed himself for it. But still due to her crazy brain that can be thought but why was she so submissive to him. It was new to him, was he the person who can be loved so much by anyone other than his Mom?

He went all out of control for her coz she was a girl beyond his dream. From the day he had seen her, his heart had weird restlessness when she was near and now, she was encouraging, how could he stop. She had kind of addicted him. But he knew addiction was not a good thing. One day she will go for good and he will have to again die hundred death.

A honk of a car brought him back to reality. Heh as to do something to earn good to give her comfort. He knew it was beyond his reach, but he must do his best.

On the other side Geet had pushed Maan to do his best to give her well deserve life. She knew it was for her and his Mom that he can be pushed. Now that she had made sure the family does not taunt him, she was sure that sky was limit for him. Spending time with Savitri, she has come to know about his strength. Savitri had told it all so proudly about her son. Each medal and certificates of his brought pride in her eyes. Geet was shocked to know Maan was 2nd national topper of 12th in is year. He was medal holder in sports as well. But his so-called family who came in the name of help when mishappening happened with his parents leaving him with his mother only and in this physical state had started planning. Maan was focused boy and he knew he had to handle his mother, give her good life and increase and bring name to the property his father had built. His father would be proud of him wherever he was.

But his chacha and family, who came in name of help when Maan was left with his invalid Maa but in actual the intention to capture the property of his brother. They were scared of this talented and focused boy. They had to stop him or else everything will go from their hand. He had been so jealous of his brother’s growth and now his son will not only take the huge property of his Brother but also looks like he will grow it. While their children seemed to be as average as him. The inferiority complex of being too average Infront of his brother has built jealousy in him.

So Maan, a very young boy in tender state that time, was pressurized in so many ways, demoralized and was not allowed to appear in any exams. He was held responsible for his family situation. It took time to break this boy but one young vulnerable boy and whole cunning lot ultimately broke the boy, pushed him to end, pressurized him for his mother so he could not study and at last they were capable of pulling him out of even local college, when the boy was capable of Nation’s top college. His moral went dipping each day, month, and year.

At 9:30 pm Maan left the shop after giving all the accounts to Sethji. He worked as cashier in the Jewelry shop. But what could he provide with this job?

As they were having dinner, Maan looked at Geet and he was scared if she again comes with some weird idea for him.

“Maan when are you planning to start your education” “Ohh no not again on this” He had left his favorite thing long back now this was something that he never wanted to go back into.

“We have more priorities to look into as of now.” He did not know where to start on any.

She held his hand on hers and kissed it. “Mujhe shaukh hai tum aage pado aur Maa ko kitna achcha lagega”

“hmmm… Maa ke sare sapne maine waise hee tod diya, mujhse waise koi umeed hai nahi unhe”.

He paused “I know you deserve much better husband than mine. Ek ladkee ka shaukh hota hai ek sapno ke Rajkumar.Aur main tooh” She placed her hand on his lips to stop him “You are everything a girl can dream…” She winked “You will prove me right just now in the room”.Maan did not say anything and got up. Geet held his hand to stop him. She came close to him and held his collar “Dare you think low of my husband, he is the best and he will prove this to you... get that” “hmmm” was the only answer he had.

Chachi saw the position from the 1st floor of Haveli. “Besharam.. kya karen bade baap ke beti haibatamizi to jhelni paregi iskee”

Geet felt bad she has spoilt his mood but anyways he was mostly in that mood. In the room she held him from his back and placed soft peck on his back. “No Geet no please”. But Geet kept placing soft kisses and he pulled her roughly in-front of him “why do you do this, do you think this is the solution toall problem” Geet smiled submissively and that was it. He took her lips harshly within his and poured all his days and life frustration. He threw heron bed. Few minutes after both their clothes on ground, Maan clam and lying, looking at the ceiling while Geet looking at his face tracing her fingers on his hair. Geet placed soft peck on his head and he pulled her closer.

“Love you like crazy Maan, don’tever think of leaving me. I will die” Before she could complete, he got on top of her and pinned her. The fire in his eyes were enough for her to understand.

They cooled down after a while but Maan was lost in thought. “Don’t know how everything will get fixed. Aur yeh..”he showed her the messed up bed “yeh jo tareeka hai tumara, yeh koi solution hai?” Geet laughed. “Achcha bolo... what is troubling you most” “what is troubling me most, you don’t know?”

“This earning of mine, this amount you will just give away at a blink. What I am able to provide you?” “YOU” came immediately from her. “Bachkani baten chodo, you want to stay with me forever”“and what is a wife supposed to wish, not stay with her hubby”. He looked at her “If you live with me, I have to provide you the life you deserve. You are a princess”“Toh do mujhe princess wali life.” She tooka pause “Listen Maan you want to give me that princess life, I am not asking for it. So you have to work for it, to give me that life. But if you are not able to give me the life you want to, you cannot decide to send me away. That will me the laziest thing to do.” And she brought her authority back “and I cannot tolerate that.”

PRECAP: Credit Card blocked. Will ‘reality and dream’ be a team or are they complete opposite sides of a coin.

Omg 😱 omg u r back

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Welcome back ☺️☺️☺️☺️

hi thanks a million for continuing....

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Part 11

Superb update.... amazingly written

so Mohinder is displeased that Geet married Maan

all Mohinder thinks is that Maan is below their status

now he will stop her credit card.... what will Geet do?

great that Maan decided to work

can understand his thoughts

well Maan likes Geet

his fears are justified

liked that he wants to give Geet all the comforts

glad that Geet encourages Maan to be successful

she and Savitri have bonded

at least Geet stops his family from taunting him

sad that Maan suffered so much

now Geet will ensure he reaches the heights of success

loved that Geet wants Maan to resume his education

hate his chachi

nice that she went to pacify him

passionate moments

as expected Maan shares his thoughts with her

good response from Geet

Omg omg omg

You're back

I don't even remember how many times I've read this story

This one is my favourite from all your work

Thank you for continuing it

And amazing update

Looking forward for next update to know what will happen when her cards will be blocked

As till now she's gaining the fake respect for maan and herself on the basis of her money only

Really So so happy to see u back thank u so much