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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotional update..te way geet meeting her past and felt happy and sad was lovely emotional..te way dadi, arjun, anni was very much attached to her and showering they love on her was lovely touching..te way dadi is worried for dev and nt seeing my maan ki zid was lovely..te way geet going to kc and my maan was with pari oh god, will geet will see and will my maan will see his geet seeing him with pari?..i love te update so much..i cant wait for next part..
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hello friends🤗


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hello di
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Well written! Geet meets Annie is so happy! She is lost in her past! Maan leaves file at home n Geet on her way to give it to him! Bt Pari calls n also gng to KC! Wt does Pari want?? update soon
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part - 19





Part - 20




Maan came in his office nd waited for Pari ,, he was pacing in d room back nd fro ,, Pari came bid hi to few of staff members nd directly went to Maan's office to meet him ,, all knew her well so no need to take appointment , after all she was MK's friend ,,there Geet came out from other lift ,, looked around ,, she was stunned seeing this big nd beautiful office ,, she came to recp nd gave her intro .

Geet: excuse me i'm Geet singh ...

Rep: Oh Geet ,, yes MK Sir is waiting for u plzz go.

Geet: where is his room?

The recp showed her MK's office ,, Geet went towards his office looking all around ,, all d staff was well dressed in formals ,, smart nd mod girls staff in short skirts or trausers ,, she felt nervous nd look at her then gave a weak smile .. sahi to kaha raha tha , mere jaisi ladki kahan ess office mei fit hogi ,, aur wo ku mujhe sabke samne introduce karega ,, etni mod aur fashionable ladkiyan uske charo aur ghoomti hei mai to uske std mei fit nahi hoti ,, she reached at Maan's room door ,, she composed herself nd pushed d door nd peeped in to seek permission with thudding heart feared how he respond to see her here ?

She peeped nd got d shock of her life ,, she became froze at her place nd words stuck in her throat .. There was he hugging a girl so lovingly ,, lost in her closeness with closed eyes ,, d girl was in skirt nd sleeveless top , her face was on opposite side Geet saw only Maan's face ,, her eyes burn nd she move back quietly with chocked throat ,, stood there for few sec ,, gulp her saliva ,, looked around blinking her lashes to control her tears ,, she felt someone snatched her all energy from her body ,, she dragged herself to a nearer cubic nd asked for rest room ,, d guy narrated her d way ,, she came there splashed lot of water on her face ,, her eyes wr pouring out d salty water which was mixing in water,, after few min she calm down ,, wiped her face with her dupatta ,, adjusted her hair nd dress then decided to go to handed his file ,, it was Dadima's request nd she had to do that at any cost .


In Maan's room...


He was waithg for Pari with thudding heart ,, she was in front of him after many months ,, in these months she was only in his memories nd thoughts but today she was there in his office ,, he beamed with happiness nd Pari to gave a big smile ,, both wr meeting after months nd Pari came close to her nd gave him a friendly hug as usual ,, he reciprocated d hug ,, she was his lost love nd he was deeply in love with her so his feeling was different as compare to Pari ,, she still took him as a good friend but Maan was helpless at his place coz he had feelings for Pari from many yrs ,, he saw her nd d love for her in his heart gave a push to him ,, he hugged her lovingly ,, he wanted to absorb these moments in his heart for ever ,, Pari's presence nd closeness shooth his aching heart ,, he was lost in those moments when Geet peeped in to seek his permission ,, he was unaware of d surrounding .

Both parted nd he sat on sofa holding her hand in his nd asked about her many questions ,, she was replying him with a sweet smile nd told him that she was going back to Australia next day .

Pari: Maan , I came for some paper formalities related to Dad nd in Immigration dept to increase my visa ,, I was very busy with Mom nd relatives so didn't get time but today i'm free to meet my friends ,, only 2 friends r here so u nd one more so i'm here to meet u first .

Maan: Thanks Pari u remember me , I thought that u forgot me .

Pari: how cd I ? OK today no work nd meetings ,, I want to spend few hrs with u nd I didn't take my BF coz I want to eat in our fav XYZ place then **** nd then ***** .

Maan: this is very less Pari for a day .

Pari: u know I didn't get these things in Australia so wanted to eat all my fav today ,, plzz chalo na Maan , pata nahi mai fir kab aa paungi yahan?

Now how cd he deny his lady love if she pleaded like this ,, he called to his PS nd ordered her to reschedule his all meetings as he was going out nd came back at afternoon ,, he called Adi to look after d remaining work in his absence ,, Pari was dragging him out holding his hand from his elbow towards lift nd he was instructing Adi ,, Pari nd her talks occupied his mind nd he forgot about Geet nd tender file .

He was going towards lift talking to Adi on phone nd Pari was dragging him when Geet came there from rest room to hand his file to him ,, she wanted to run away from here ASAP after finishing d responsibility ,, she was feeling suffocated here ,, but her bad luck was one step ahead to break her more ,, she saw him from sideway going out with Pari hand in hand ,, now she saw her clearly ,, she rooted at her place holding that file in her hand ,, he entered in his personal lift nd vanished from her sight .

Her heart scattered in millions of pieces though she knew about them nd he clearly accepted his love for Pari but seeing them in front of her hand in hand broke her ,, she was rooted at place nd lost in her thoughts ,, Sasha came there nd patted on her shoulder ,, Geet came in reality nd looked at that extra mod girl .

Shasha: hello , who r u ? she scanned Geet from top to toe nd gave a sarcastic smile .

Geet: mai Geet hoon , kuch papers lai thi KM se mr Khurana ko dene ke liye .

Shasha: Oh , to diye ku nahi , MK to gaye bahar apni friend ke sath .

Geet: kab tak wapas aayege ? mai wait ker leti hu .

Shasha: bad luck dear, MK to ab sham tak hi aayenge .

Geet's face hang down , she couldn't handed that file to any one ,, now what to do ?

Shasha: dekho pareshan matt ho ,, tum Adi se milo wo MK se baat kerke koi solution nikal dega ,, MK ke side wala room Adi ka hei ,, jao.

Shasha took Geet an employee of KM ,, so sent her to Adi ,, Geet went to Adi's room nd told him to ask MK for d file .

Adi: tum tender file lai ho ,, Oh sh** Sir to bhool gaye aur aaj last day hei tender file kerne ka ,, wait mai call kerta hu .

He called Maan but he didn't pick d call coz he put his phone on vibrator in conference room ,, Adi was panic he knew that it was very important to KC so he was trying again nd again ,, after many tries Maan picked d call ,, Adi reminded him about d tender ,, Maan slapped his head inwardly to forgot that ,, he instructed Adi to take d file ,, nd filled d amount in d cheque after talking to concern person nd then deposit d file * Adi was Maan's right hand nd he trusted him but Geet didn't know that nd when Adi asked for file Geet denied to give him saying that it was Dadima's order to give only in MK's hand.

Adi: OK mai tumhari Sir se baat kara deta hu ,, theek hei ?

He called again Maan nd told her that Geet was not ready to give him d file so plzz talk to her ,, Adi handed his phne to Geet ,, she took d phone with shaking hand nd spoke in a cracky voice .

Geet: hello ,,,,

Maan: wo file aur CB Adi ko de do , usse pata hei kya kerna hei aur Adi ko phone do ,( he didn't even say hi , sorry or thanku to her ) Geet handed phone to Adi nd Maan instructed him some more things ,, Geet took out d file nd CB from bag ,, placed them on Adi's table ,, got up quietly nd came out from his room nd then KC ,, she was feeling so much insulted nd humiliated today ,, she understood that she didn't have any place in this high headed man's life ,, it was clear to her that he married to a simple village girl for his Dadima's wish otherwise his life nd dreams wr very high ,, he never accept her as her wife in front of his high society nd business circle ,, her relation with him concealed inside d KM's walls.


Lost in her thoughts she didn't know where she was going ,, she was feeling suffocated nd wanted to go some lonely place ,, she was walking nd walking aimlessly nd find a Mazar surrounded with tress lil away from main road ,, a Fakeer Baba was cleaning that ,, her feet escorted her there ,, she knelt there nd rears rolled down from her eyes on her wracked life ,, Baba thought that she is in trouble or in some pain ,, this was nothing new for him ,, many ppl came there for blessing or to beg for help from this holy soul .


Preap--- Geet turn cold nd shut herself in a hard shell... Maan got a blow..




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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waiting...geet in maans office...and pari😲
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🤗 Hi Lakshu..
tum aaj late kaise..?😊
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Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 Hi Lakshu..
tum aaj late kaise..?😊



cold ho gaya babbie

hello kaisa hain... mera waala hain

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