MG OS - Timetable Love???? Pt 2 on pg-10 by valli30..plz read - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Hahahaha... lovely os...
I loved this talli geet...
N d last question jst nailed it...
I can imagine maans reaction...hehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

50 % achcha hai

baki ka 50% complete hone ke baad achchha lagega
matlab best ho jaayega

kab de rahi ho last part
Oye
hum yahaan imagin karne ke liye nahin padhne ke liye baithe hain
aur utna hi padha jitna tumne likha
ab ye bataao ki Maan ne kaise react kiya
agar hum hi imagin akrenge to tumhara OS likhne ka kya fayda?
to ye wala comment sirg complainnt karne ke liye hai
OSke baare me comment tab milega jab tum isko complete karogi😛😛




Kanjoos kahi ki...😆




Yeh OS. Hai...aur ek hi part ka hai...


Arre main Kya likhun jab main hi imagine Nahi karr para hi hoon..maan ka reaction...😳



Jab imagine karliya toh likhungi another OS...May be continuation...par kab yeh pata Nahi...10 din..yah 1 mahina...ya 6 mahine...pata Nahi mujhe😆





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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
OMG Tom ji (Indu Di )apne imagine karne ko kaha aur patha nahi mujhe kya hogaya ye sab likh diya maine 😛😲
Sirf app keliye post kar rahi hu warna nahi karthi mai😃

Geet - Woh...Woh...Kya aap shaadi ke baad mujhe pyaar bhi timetable follow karke hi karenge...

Hearing geet's words maan was stunned would be a small word he didn't know how to react pyar bhi time table follow karkehi karenge thats it he started laughing :P

omg this girl is crazy he couldn't not hold himself from laughing but poor geet was angry as he was laughing at her

she went to near him and poked on his shoulder maan came out from his laughing session and looked at geet who was looking at him with a cute angry expression

maan - tu tho gaya ab phirse kahegi mujhse shaadi nahi karni

geet- app mera mazak bana rahe ho and started crying loudly

uff maan could not bear tears in her eyes he just pulled her towards him and said chup bilkul chup

geet just stopped crying and stared at him with her innocent hazels

maan (st) - god she is so cute

Maan - rona nahi saying that he removed his finger and just pulled her cheeks.

Geet - giving angry looks to him started rubbing her cheeks and said dukhtha hai and made a baby face

And turned to leave

Maan again pulled her in to his embrace holding her with waist and asked duktha hai

Geet nodded her head as to say yes

Maan had a sweet smile on his face seeing her cute antics

Maan brought his hand near geet's cheeks and started caressing them as to smooth the pain

But poor geet was lost in his touch

Maan (ST) - I am the reason that she is insecure about our relation and I need to ensure her that I will be always there with her, so he called her geet

Geet just lifted her head and looked at maan , he was looking at her lovingly and said cupping her face Geet I promise mai humesha tumhare saath rahunga humari zindagi ki hare ek khass pal par , mujhe patha hai mai beethe hue baatho ko tho badal nahi saktha but vada kartha hu ki jab bhi tume meri jarurath hogin humesha tum mujhe apne saath pavogi

Geet - sacchi

Maan - haan baba mucchi saying that he pinched her nose

Geet made a annoyed face and started rubbing her nose and asked him again matlab no timetable love making baby face

Maan pulled her close to him and kissed her forehead and said no timetable love I promise

Maaneet eyelock both were lost in each other

The ring of maan's phone brought them out of their staring session

Maan went towards the table to attend the call

It was adi

Maan -haan Adi bolo

Adi - sir wo Khanna's ki project ke bareme baath karni thi

Maan just turned and saw that geet was looking intently at him he gulped and thought maan you better cut the call

Maan- Adi mai tumse badh mai bath kartha hu

Adi - But sirrr...

Maan - Adi maine kaha na abhi nahi mujhe abhi nahi baath karni

I have some other work ...

Saying that he cut the call

And turned to go to geet and next second geet came to him running and hugged him maan was not prepared for it and he stumbled, but some how he managed not to fall

But he was surprised by geet actions and hesitated to her hug back

But geet was hugging him tightly and he could not hold himself and hugged her back

After some time he tried to bring her out of hug but geet didn't budge

Geet - Apne ne mere liye call cut kiya na isliye baath nahi ki na kaam ke bareme

Maan - tumhe kya lagtha hai

But he didn't get any answer from her and saw that she has passed out may be due to the drink .

Maan ST - ab mai kya karu agar aise ghar legaya tho uncle , aunty pareshan ho jayenge

He made her lay on the couch

Just then Pinky called him to ask about geet

Pinky - Jiju Geet kaisi hai , sorry wo drink exchange hogaya tha

Even though maan was angry at pinky but due to that drink he came to know about what geet thinks about him so he just said its ok Pinky.

Maan-But geet tho behosh hogayi hai ab mai use ghar kaise lekar avu

Pinky - don't worry jiju ghar par koi nahi hai sab bade papa ki friend se milne gaye hai and kal shyam ko hi lotenge app geet ko ghar lekra aa javo

Maan - ok pinky mai abhi nikal raha hu

he turned to the couch and saw geet sleeping with a cute smile he could just stared at her serene face

He wanted to wake her up but could not get himself to disturb her so he lifted her into his arms and geet instantly wrapped her arms around his neck and snuggled into him

Maan just carried her to the car and placed her carefully and left for handa house

HM

Pinky was pacing in the hall waiting for maaneet

She felt a relief when she saw then and asked maan whether geet was ok and she was about to wake her up but maan stopped her and carried his princess to her room and placed her on the bed.

He just kissed her on the forehead and left from there.

AT KM

Maan on his way realized that what he has missed these days he truly wants to tell geet about his feeling thinking about something he just went to sleep dreaming about his mishty

Maan - yes my Misthy tomorrow I am going to give you a surprise and I can't wait to see your cute shocked expression

Saying that in went to sleep dreaming about his princess

Next day geet woke up with a headache she was trying to remember what has happened yesterday she went to meet maan then know she is in her room

Just then her phone beeped with a message and it was from maan

Geet was surprised to see that maan messaged her she immediately opened the message and was shocked to read it

Maan - good morning sweetheart ;)

I am coming to meet you be ready in a hour

Geet was shocked inhe kya hogaya mujhse milne kyu aa rahe hai

She checked the time it was afternoon

Omg mai itne der kaise so gayi yeh babaji and left to get ready.

Geet was pacing in her room

Geet - babaji inhe achanak kya hogaya mujhse milne kyu aa rahe hai

Jab milthe tho baath bhi tik se nahi karthe aur ab kya hogaya

She was nervous and talking to her babaji

Geet was in her thoughts that she didn't not notice that maan was standing at the entrance of her room and staring at her and was smiling seeing her self talks.

He just coughed to gain her attention

When geet saw that maan was standing there she gave a nervous smile to him.

Maan approached geet and said huskily near her ears

Maan- geet tum na good girl ho time par ready hogayi jaise school keliye ready hothe hai mujhe late comers pasand nahi hai. :P

Hearing this geet was shocked school but she was shocked and maan was enjoying her confused, horrified expression

Chalo geet hum late ho rahe hai saying that he took her hand into his and started walking

Geet was totally confused by his behavior

Geet meekly - hum kaha ja rahe hai

Maan- with a smirk wo kya haina kal jo tumne galthi ki hai use bada nuksan hogaya mera isliye punishment milega tumhe

Geet was just gapping at him like seeing some ghost

Geet - punishment (ST -aisa kya kardiya maine babji mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aa raha hai )

Once seated she again started her question bank

Geet - but maine aisa kya kardiya ki mujhe punishment de rahe ho app making a pout

Maan was just enjoying this hayee he want to pull her cheeks and kiss her , stupid maan control yourself

Geet - app chup kyu hai boliye na

Maan- batha tha hu geet jaldi kya hai

Poor geet she was not understanding anything ek tho kal kya hua mujhe yaadh nahi hai aur ab ye agayi aur patha nahi aisa kya kardiya maine hey babaji yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath.

Geet - Maan wo hu...

Before she completes maan said geet chup chap baito maine kaha na abhi kuch nahi bathavunga

Geet ST - dhust dhanav dekho class teacher ki tarah kaise chup karva raha hai

Maan stopped his car at a restaurant and asked geet to come with him

He asked to geet wait there and left from there.

After few minutes someone came and asked Geet to go to banquet hall as maan has called her to come there

Geet was not getting what is going on she is already worried as she is not able to remember what has happened yesterday that maan is angry with her and he is behaving strangely.

Geet entered the room it was dark, she was scared but she meekly called maan but no response

Geet St - ye kya mujhe darna chathe hai she was about to cry

Just them the lights were on and she can see a beautifully decorated table for two and the whole hall was decorated with red roses.

Geet was surprised seeing that

She saw maan standing with a sweet smile at the table.

She was just rooted to her place seeing him.

Maan came to her and said sorry geet

Geet was confused why he is saying sorry he wanted to punish me right then...

Mann - geet I am sorry that I didn't not understand that I was hurting you in the process to cope up with my work

Geet- wo ...

Maan- plz geet ajj nahi mujhe bolne do

I know I did not give you the ample time which made you insecure about our relation and I promise agge aisa nahi hoga

Geet I love you will you marry me

Geet was having tears hearing it she never wanted maan to feel guilty about it

But maan understood her turmoil

Geet tumne kuch galath nahi kaha kal balki I came to know your fears about our relation

She just hugged him

Maan- arre ab tho batavo geet will you marry me she just nodded no with a shy smile.

Maan lifted her chin and looked into her eyes and said but tumhari ankhe tho kuch aur bol rahi hai geet

Geet hugged him and said I love you Maan

Maan- chalo finally tumne MSK school mai admission le hi liya and winked at her

Geet made a golgappa face and said haan but bach ke reha I am not a easy student to handle and run from their showing her tongue to him

Maan chased her and their cute fights went on ...

Its my first attempt so plz ignore any mistakes 😊

Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wah meri pyaari jerry...kya likha hain...shayad main bhi aisa nahi likh paati...


Tumne itni ache se likha ki maine poora visulize kiya...👏...


Aur maan ne school ki baat chedi 😲...geet ne kya jawab diya...😆


Mujhe acha laga ki maan ne usse kuch nahi bataya...yeh uska secret hai 😉...

Lekin kya woh geet se kahega...😉...



Waiting for more from u...plz zaroor likhna...





Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

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poora padne ke baad comment doongi



Pehle first part toh padhle...😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -indu-




Kanjoos kahi ki...😆




Yeh OS. Hai...aur ek hi part ka hai...


Arre main Kya likhun jab main hi imagine Nahi karr para hi hoon..maan ka reaction...😳



Jab imagine karliya toh likhungi another OS...May be continuation...par kab yeh pata Nahi...10 din..yah 1 mahina...ya 6 mahine...pata Nahi mujhe😆





main kanjoos ki tu?
chal chhod ye kanjoos kanjoos wala game aur dekh meri SB ne tera adhoora kaam pura kar diya
ab to 6 mahine nahin 6 saal le likhne ke liye
I won't mind😛
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -indu-



Pehle first part toh padhle...😡


oye wahi tho kehrahi hoon poora padne ke baad
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
ab yahaan to Indu ko bhi comment dena padega na😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

main kanjoos ki tu?
chal chhod ye kanjoos kanjoos wala game aur dekh meri SB ne tera adhoora kaam pura kar diya
ab to 8 mahine nahin 6 saal le likhne ke liye
I won't mind😛



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