THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168

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vidyaniru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Wonderful update! So beautifully written. Maan breaking her nervousness, making her relax... Loved the way you used the solah shingar in your portrayal of the SR. It had such a traditional and divine feel to it. Sort of a culmination to the wedding ceremony. Loved it!!

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: dqno1

wednesday for Muskan's b'day 😃

hawww...😲 thats sooo sooo far...but then its okay...i dont want the story to end so sooon...aviii seriously think about starting another one sooon, plsss...i dont want to miss u n ur stories

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

aiyye haiyye
kya baat hai ji
thanx for pm
or again would have missed it

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: honeygrape

hawww...😲 thats sooo sooo far...but then its okay...i dont want the story to end so sooon...aviii seriously think about starting another one sooon, plsss...i dont want to miss u n ur stories

Going to be away for a few weeks to India after this

actually will be going to Mussoorie too😃

waiting to see if it is as my imagination showed it to be in MG's college trip

let's see if something strikes me, I'll wrte it😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: chavvi16
aiyye haiyye
kya baat hai ji
thanx for pm
or again would have missed it

Isiliye sent the PM warna you would say you were last to know 😆

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: dqno1

Going to be away for a few weeks to India after this

actually will be going to Mussoorie too😃

waiting to see if it is as my imagination showed it to be in MG's college trip

let's see if something strikes me, I'll wrte it😃

ohh,,wow ...atleast we ll be in the same time zone😆

hope mussoorie and the entire trip willl give you some new idea...geet ki babajiii😊 thodi help kar dena😳

enjooy dear😊

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Zeal-DD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Nice teaser

Waiting for next part

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: mammam
the update was simple yet sweetly sensuous.loved how maan distracted geet to ease her fears. and ur explanation of solah singer really helped a lot.I was ignorant abt that. ur style of writing reminds me of jazzerate. it is very sad that she has discontinued MAAN PROPOSES GEET DISPOSES.I think there is no chance that she will reconsider her decision. everything doesnt get fulfilled in life. waiting fr the last part. a beautiful journey coming to an end but leaving many sweet memories to cherish fr life.😊

i really love that story too..

when writers don't get enough likes and comments they lose the motivation..

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: dqno1

Going to be away for a few weeks to India after this

actually will be going to Mussoorie too😃

waiting to see if it is as my imagination showed it to be in MG's college trip

let's see if something strikes me, I'll wrte it😃

Have a great, safe trip, Avi ji! Eat lots of good, bad-for-you food! 😃