MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 41

Originally posted by: alicia212

Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
I feel so sorry for all of them in this story

Originally posted by: -Orchid-

Superb

Originally posted by: love2_soma

omg...maan geet k halat dekh k thoda toh soft hojao...aise insult maat karo ...wht she did may b fr her baba's pressure...just give her a chance...

painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: jasika08

nice update

Originally posted by: vandy28

Hey shockn updte fr me...
Frst of all...u fastfrwdd it...nw maan is 23 n secnd shck...his chngd behvr
N lastly n most imp his hate fr geet...
I mean i loved ds fictn bcz of innocence...i loved dat d most n was hopn fr dre love stry full of innocnce n crzyness
Bt seeing hate suddnly ws shckn...bt as a wrtr i blv in u...

geet - with low voice say geet

maan - you need water take this he offer her glass and say in tont wo kya hai some educated person don't have simple manner to give water to a boy who is guest for them geet eyes start to turn teary she just say no I don't need water ...maan just say her that please give your contact no in reception we will call your for next

geet just once look to maan and went from there , adi and Vicky saw her and froze in their place

geet just went near part she don't want to go home so early ...just than she hard sound of music , dhol , ect she look to that way is Ganesha all just lost in celebration with music and dance they taking ganesha to their place

and geet lost in past

when her father insulated maan in her bro birthday she meet him next day near collage

geet - wok al job hi hua humare ghar hume uske liye shama kigiye ( what ever happen last day inmy hours for that I am sorry please give us forgiveness )

maan gap her like foool ek to khud se aayi uske paas baat karne ko upon that her Shudh hindi ka torchere maan mummer maan teri to lag gayi abhi kya bolega ky apun ke bhaje main tumara ek bhi word nahi gaya ( you are goan maan what you say now that you don't get meaning of her one word )

maan look her with confused geet get that she don't get her talking ,she just say wo sorry bolna tha

maan - wo hindi main sorry itna bada hota hai kya apunko pata nahi tha he smile foolishly and say wo kya hai na wo mera bahot kuch kacha hai usmain hindi bhi , study main lakin mere ko English mast atti hai like amithabh I can talk eng , walk eng and fight eng ( idont know that sorry so big in hindi , I am so dum in study na specialy hindi so ...)

geet - kitana pyyara

maan cant hear that , he just ask wo kya hai apunke area main kal ganpati ahi kal aaygi kya tu

geet - ager baba nahi hui to

maan - wo shakal ki to he say in low voice

maan just nodded in yes and both went to their home

next day to geet luck her parent went to her kaka house and she just get chance when she reach near maaan area , all area is decorated with light and all

there she heard sound of dhol and all she look wo maan and maan all toil just dancing on song they just brought gnaesha murti and make pratistphana there and Maan took aarti in his hand start to sing with so much Bhakti ...today she saw different maan who lost in his GOD , god someone called bhagwan , someone allaha someone yashu , but thinking is same all jus want a support to give power to them to fight against odd a against , pain against evil

He deva tujhya dari aalo gunagaan gaaya

tujhya vina manasacha janm jaaee vaya

he deva dili haak udddhaar karaya

abhalachi chhaya tujhi samindarachi maya

moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya...

I just come to your door to say about you

without you a life of human is worthless

I called you to make successful me

give shadow like sky and give love like sea

Omkarach rup tujh charachara mandi

jhad yeli pana sang ful tu sugandhi

bhagatacha pathirakha garibacha wali

majhi bhakti- tujhi shakti ekarup jhali

deva dili haak uddhaar karaya

abhalachi chhaya tujhi samindarachi maya

moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya...

OM means complete power which are in all over

in nature in tree in leaves in flower also

you are supporter of your Devotee and poor people

my bdevoteee and your power become one

I called you to make successful me

give shadow like sky and give love like sea

aadi ant tuch khara tuch buddhi data

sharan mi alo tula payavar matha

danka vaaj daha dishi gajar navacha

sankatala bal dei avatar devacha

deva dili haak uddhar karaya

abhalachi chhaya tujhi samindarachi maya

moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya...

start and end are you your are god of intelligence

I just come to you to surrender myself in front of you

it is all over world your name

you always give power for fight against odd

I called you to make successful me

give shadow like sky and give love like sea

Ganapati Bappa Moraya

Mangalmurti Morya

moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya...

Moraya moraya mi baal tanhe

tujhich seva karu kaay jane

anyay majhe kotyan koti

moreshwara baa tu ghaal poti

moray ( ganpati ) I am samlll child

I only no to worship you

I made so may mistake

just took that mistake to you as father

moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya... moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya...

moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya... moraya...moraya...moraya...moraya...

after song all just distributed Prasad to all than maan eyes went to geet oh poor boy on 9 th cloud his geet come to his invitation he just run to her , he just want to hug but stop because he don't want to embress her in front of all he just give her Prasad , laddo and pointed her to took blessing from ganesha both just went near ganesha and took blessing

maan just took her to near by river where they can talk

maan - wo bada wala thanks

geet - just smile on him , he is so happy

maan - wo apunko kuch bolna tha

geet - kya

maan wo jab tumko dekha na wo muje laga wo wo muje tumko tumko wo karneka mann hua

geet eyes winded in shock and she ask KYA

maan get his sentence double meaning he say imm nahi nahi WO nahi wo gale lagana tha o kya bolte hai ... ha ha Hug karneka tha he smile like child

geet love this his honesty hamesha dil ki baat bol deta hai but his demand brought red hu in her cheek her nave teen age heart start to bit so fast dhak dhak dhak ,she have fear may be maan lesion that , maan who looking to her with so many hopes she cant brake his heart she just nodded in yes she just nodded in yes and just open her hand with so much nervousness ,literally her hand is shaking

maan just froze in his place ,he don't expected her yes he gulp hard and say sai baba smbhal lena , kuch gadbad na kar du main ...and maan just went to near her and just took her in his hug so softly like she is flower or doll which may be brake with hard touch ...he feel like he got some soulful things in that hug ... like his part is meeting him ...soul mate he feel so peaceful in hug both feel something in their stomach and parted away geet face turn red in shyness and maan feel first time shy shy ... when geet look to maan she get shock with maan tearful eyes

geet ask with care kya hua

maan - thanks mere upper trust karne ko ,ek min ke laga ma ke godi main hu to senti laga ( for second I thought I am in my mother hug )

geet just weep his tear and say app kitane pyyare or bhole ho

precap

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