MG: Sajda#5/note pg 44 & 45 - Page 9

Originally posted by: shikha_guta25

its been two month😒
update soon
me waiting

Me too waiting...😔

where r u?

TUM THO GAYAB HI HO GAYI...

Waiting for the next part ...
Update soon !!!

where are u dear

Hi Neha,

I am a new member on this forum and your new reader! I started with Darmiyan and liked it a lot! Then checked Sajda. I also tried to read Intehaa but a first few parts of it made me abandon it (I am being honest)

I like both Sajda as well as Darmiyan for the quality of writing. It seems a lot of people thought the story was progressing slow in both the cases.

I never felt so in either of the cases. As both of them were written as a full length serial (52 episodes) instead of mini series (10 Episodes), it was supposed to be elaborate.

And as a writer you need to create build up, enough motivations for each character to behave/feel the way they do. You managed to do that well in both Sajda and Darmiyan. The characters were not black or white but various shades of grey.

You definitely have talent for writing. Have you considered taking it as a profession? At least try to get yourself registered at Film Writer's Associations. (Send me a message if you need more details.)

Both these stories have good reading value even if they are not FF and have different names!

M

hai neha

tum tho invisible jaisi ho gayi

ateast put a note

take care

Neha ..kahaaan ho... intezaar hai ki ummeeed hi nahi chodta...