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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Awesome update ..
So maan showing his charming personality to Geet too... and Geet not effected at all..in no time she will get effected to no extent ;)
So they having lunch.. lol everyone is staring at her.. no doubt everyone would be jealous... every girl drools over him.. da!
Will be waiting for the updates.

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momi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

NICE ONE

maan is not ready 2 have her as his bodyguard

he is indeed a charmer

so gentle and sweet

but wht abt those fake certificates which geet said

haww hw can geet say him irritating

he is such a cutie

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Liked u show the character of Maan uncle n their bond. It's fun to read how they talk with each other.

Aww Geet vacation cut short. Cursing Maan. Maan surprised, shocked to see Geet.

Flirting too much with Geet. But that was amazing for us. Geet literally pissed off. Fighting with one another abhi se.

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minelove24

@minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

lolz maan pressed her cute nose..maan to trailer mai gaya ,picture to baki hai..maan babu apana heart sambhalake rakho,.enimy se pehale geet na le jaye dhadkan churake,gonna be fun when they wl actually work together..waiting for next

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suyoha

@suyoha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

nice update

and i take the liberty of calling maan cute haha

no really this maan is so cute not by looks but by his talks

and geet is really pissed off with maans talk

update soon

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

That was an awesome one aishu...

Flirty Maan and Awesome Geet... absolutely a treat to read and a big change..

he is so impressed coz of her retaliation and she is super pissed with him...

he doesnt leave a chance to flirt and just making her all the more furious ...

i especially loved the part where she calls him chauvinist and he acts as if he did not hear that... rofl...

ab i cant wait to see angry geet that too on maan...

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

I is here 😎 😃

Kiddo di... I HAVE SO MUCH TO SAY! So starting from beginning... did I hear CITY HUNTER!!! I'm already intrigued!

And then I read the character sketch. I like the way you gave their description. I read 'ammunition deal' and I'm like politics? Then comes Geet Handa's character intro & I'm dead! WOAH. An action, spy, detective kinda work, on maan and geet, by you! It can't get any better!! And then there's the deal of Maan being the 'client' Geet is assigned to protect - already an assumption made from just CS. Ofcourse, it had to come true in the later chapters 😃

The thing I like different is that Maan is charming, but he does not fail to respect ladies. It's not often that a character is made that way.. you know how it usually is.. hot, playboy casanova image & a girl comes along and tames them. This one, I can already sense is different - for he may be the ladies' man but still respects them.

The poem... what do I say about that? I can't write poems to save my life. So, yes, I loved the poem. I dunno what must to say on that.. except that its beautiful .

Moving on... Chapter 1.

-Let me reread again so I can give proper manner instead of writing from memory of what I read a week ago.. -

I'll be back😊

Love ya!

And yes, needless to say, I am very glad I decided to read this & super happy that you started this just when I got my breaks. I can read on time 😃 & give comments in timely manner too :P

-Araina.

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ambili123

@ambili123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

just found it and what to say gotten under ur spell already cant wait to read more

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Araina

@-Araina-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Chapter 1 - Desperate Measures

Already starting with a bang I see! Action My favorite.

AHAHA. In office. Maan is such a flirt 😛 The dialogues you've used completely justifies his character :D LOL And then the way he makes Mr. Sharma apologize to Ms. Iyer. Do I see a pair here? 😉 They are around same age, right? 😆

Ooo! Adi is so cute! The way he always gets nervous around him and starts laughing.

Maan. He's being super casual about these attacks. Not taking it seriously. Old man is bound to get pissed off and set limits. From their convo, I sense tons of actions in future? Terrorists.. dangerous.. I'm sure it's safe to say that we can gear up for some romantic scenes too 😆 I can already imagine the situations 😛

And another attack already 😲 Oh, Maan is a goner this time. Old man isn't going to listen, is he? And nope, he didn't. Direct order. Haha, he works in such a field after all. He must be used to ordering others around.

Precap, their meet :D This shall be interesting!

Over all, the chapter is like a complete package. Action, comedy, flirting, scare, family love-hate relationship. Bas, aab Geet ki entry honi baaki hai. I loved it. So looking forward to more! It's hard to believe this is just the beginning chapter. Already addicted <3

Keep updating. Aise tadpaya na karo hum bichaare bache ko kiddo di 😳

LY!

-Araina.