MY RUTHLESS SAVIOUR #3 Updated PART 14 on 19-6-2014/Pg - 104

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: priya111111
richa meri saari comments pending hai 10th ke baad comments doongi hope u understand

its ok sweety take ur time

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Rajshree12
OMG...samar came with his men to take Geet away frm Maan..
hehehe...but he forgot tht he is dealing with MSK...bechare ko khali hath lautna pada..
God Maan ne Geet se shaadi kar li..& Gret dint even know abt it..
Hmm..Maan trying to make Geet believe tht it doesnt matter fr him whether they r married or not..

hmmm right thanx buddy

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: jayshu17

par kya?

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Heheh i kniw

Originally posted by: Doracake
200 + likes done...

time to update

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cuteeagle65

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

awesome update maaneet married 4 geet safety but feel bad 4 her

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

PART - 12

SUN was hanging heavily in the sky. She was running in garden and he followed her. 'Mishti don't run behind the puppy,you will hurt yourself.' an eight year old boy trying to stop a 3 year old girl,who was running blindly to catch the puppy playing in her garden.

'hehehehe.. Mujhe wo lena hai...', she slanted back to look at him. She giggled and denying obeying him. She only wants that puppy,she is chasing off and ran without awaring the danger coming for her.

He was trying to catch her but she ran really fast and he ust calling her. 'Mishti nahi...' She ran and suddenly collapsed with the swing. She falls and her head starts bleeding...

'Mishti...' Maan awake with jerk drenched in his own sweat. His beats thumping faster and breath turn uneven. He pulled back his raised hand,which he streteched to stop his Mishti. Shaking off the uncomfortable sensation,tormenting his soul,he come out of his bed.

This darkness wont scared him anymore but the darkness inside him still scatching his unhealed wounds. He just moved to punish himself.

Ye dil tanha kyu rahe,
kyu hum tukdo me jiyeee
Kyu rooh meri ye sahee..

Maan start breaking ice slids one after another,as he breaking his helplessness and restlessnes which wont let him sleep after that night.

Main adhoora jee raha hu,
har dum ye keh raha hu,
Mujhe Teri ZAROORAT hai..

Maan is hurting himself and mostly do and this can b viewed by her almost every night.

Geet viewed the pain he just poured out in this way only. Unknowingly both connected with each other's sores. Seeing his anguishness her eyes turn wet. One thigh is which very clear to her that he never punish an innocent person. In just few days she start understanding him and the feel of his culprit's daughter weletered her soul more. Reason may b unavailablle for her but she knew that Sumer gave him a life time wound from which he daily fought like this only.

''tanhai bhi mujhse kafa ho gai,
banjaro ne bhi thukra diya..
Main adhoora jee raha hu,
Ye sadaye de raha hu,
MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI..
MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI..''

'Mishti kaha ho tum?' he clenched his eyes hard remebering her innocent smiling face. ''aa jao please aa jao.'' He just hit hard and break one more sil. In this he hurt his injured hand more.

'Maan...' A shriek sound catch his attention and open his closed eyes,founding Geet in front of him.

He just stare her as he was still in thoughts of Mishti. Geet ran towards him and hold his injured hand. Blood oozing pacefully from his wound. Her touch bring back him to life again and he snatch his hand from her. Geet ran from there. Maan turned around and he was alone again.

'sahi kia jo chali gai.' he said to compelled himself,but not sounds sure to hiself even.

And she proved him wrong. Next moment she was here again with first aid box. She again hold his hand and Maan repeats him action but this time her grip was more firm then last time.

'dawa lagane deejiye mujhe.', She sound more authoritive then ever before.

Maan stare her. 'itne se ghavo se dard nahi hota mujhe.' he grunted under his breath and started to move away.

'chot chhoti ho ya badi takleef deti hi hai. Aap shyad bhul gaye hai,maine apse pehle bhi kaha tha,dard sabko hota hai. Apko bhi hota hai. Bhale hi aap mane na,par maine ye raat mehsoos kiya hai. Dekha hai apki aankho me us dard ko jise aap sabse chhupna to chahte hai.', Geet show him mirror today without any fear. Though his glared are enough to make her shiver,but his sore spiked her even more harder.

The anger was crashing through him now faster then he could control it. He grasped her both forearms and almost sqeezed her. His warm breath falling on her face and instead of scaring she just glancing innocently in his eyes. 'dawai lagwa leejiye.' she again pleads and stunned him.

Suddenly his grip loosened and he freed her. Maan swung around,dont want to made eye contact with her. Her eyes make him vulunerable,which doesnt like by him at all.

Geet hold his hand and start cleaning his wound. Maan irritates and commands her to leave. 'chali jaungi bas do min.' she demands.

He turned around and glared her. 'dont you understand one simple thing.'

Maan scold to swept her off.

'or main bhi apse keh rai hu mujhe ointment lagane deejiye. Bhale hi aap apni takleef na dikhana chahe par mujhse nahi chupa skte. Is dard or takleef se 18 saal ka rishta hai mera.' Geet poured out herself in a wave moment while applying ointment on his wound.

Her simple confession made him stunned. His gaze going wide with shock. Afterwards he wont utter a word and allowed her to do what she want. She wrapped his hand in bandage and put all things in box again. Both were silent dont even glancinng each other. She start moving from there.

Few step and she stopped before she left completely. 'khud ko takleef dene se apki takleef kam nahi hogi. And i promise ab se meri wajhse apko or takleef nahi hogi.' she assured him and leave the room.

Maan stare her going and turned his back towards her. Night was restless and sleepless. He wont slept for a sec. Its 4 am,when he was romaing in his mansion and his feet stood before her room. Spellbound he moved inside to get her glimpse.

Lights are off and this made him suspecious. He switch on the light and found room empty. Even cuty was also not there. Maan check everywhere but she seems no where. He comeout of her room and summoned all his servant. On his roaring call all awake and present in front of him. He asked for her but no one had a clue of her. They diveded and start searching her. Maan quickly check his mobile and went outside.

Maan sit in his car and drove out of the mansion to catch her. He drove the car at full speed on lonly roads. Soon he trace her and stopped his car. Geet was laying on bench under street light. Maan went closer to her and found her shivering. She was slept with her legs folded and snuggling Cuty in her arms. Maan shake her shoulder to awake her. She opened her drowsy eyes and found him glaring her. She stood up and now she is shivering glancing his red shot eyes.

'inside the car now.' he commands her.

'wo...' she made an waste try to convience him.

'i said in the car.' he yelled on her,not in mood to hear any single word. Geet frozed with his threatning tone. She glued to her place,so he clenched her arm and dragged her towards the car. He opened the door and push her inside and locked it. He walked on other side and sit next to her,behind the wheels

With in few minutes they were inside the KM again. Again he dragged her forcily and leave her with a jerk. His eyes and actions are enough to told her that now she is on remand.

'what are you think of yourself? Have you gone mad? I told you dont cross the premises even then how dare you think of leaving?' Maan fumed in anger and held her tightly in anger.

Her voice died seeing his anger and wants to escape from him. She step back but he pulled her again. 'Have you any idea what if i dont found you? Sumer's men will found you or any goon can misused you. Kya soch k bahar gai thi. Ek main hu jo sabse ladd ra hu tumhare liye or tum aise ghar chhod k chali gai? What you trying to prove ha?' Maan yelled on her non stop. It was his fear who made him madder. He couldn't think anything right now. His fear take a shape of anger which he gifted to her.

'apko meri wajhse takleef hoti hai. Meri presence se takleef hoti hai. I dont what damage my father done to you but i dont want to add more to it.' she whimpered. Her hazled eyes turn wet and shed tears one after another.

Again he turn mute with her innocent confession. 'Geet i am warning you last time. Aaj k baad meri permission k bina tum is ghar k bahar kadam nahi rakhogi. Now go back to your room right now.' he commands her and cautioned too.

Geet left,snuggling her puppy. After her Maan take his all guards in remand. Just because of their negligence Geet's life was in might be drag in danger. 'maaf karna meri fitrat me shamil nahi hai. You all are fired.' glared them dreadfully and discarded them. With in half an hour new guards replaced the old ones. Sasha instruct them and they take their place.

He called Adi to ask about Aaditya Sharma. Now he become more curious to know her hidden truth.

'i am sorry sir wo tutne ko thaiyar nahi hai. I wont ready to reveal any piece of information.' Adi was trembling while telling his about the progress as Maan wont like defeats.

'wait i 'll come.' Maan decided to confront him in his own way. He get ready to meet him. Before leaving he went to make sure that she was in the room. He take a relief breath seeing her sleeping peacefully. He went closer to check her. He doubted wheather she catch cold outside. He bend and check her forehead. She was fine. In this his knuckles rubbed against the pillow bneath her head. It was wet,might because of her tears. His heart burned realizing it. 'i am sorry Geet.' he apolozise,dont know why but he felt hurt after hurting her. He bend and kissed on her head,without even realizing.

He swung on his feet and covered her properly. Then he moved to cuty who was hanging on the edge.

Maan pulled him towards Geet and left the room to do face off with Aadity.

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Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

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deep002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

awesome update, hope lawyer recognise maan and tell him every thing, didn't look like geet is a sumer is daughter.

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Niharika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Maan apne atheet ke wajese pareshaan hai and Geet thinks its her presence that is causing him all pain...

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

is she his mishty
but if she is wont she remember
but she was too young right
hmmm that nightmare still gets to him
is this why he hates sumer
as he snatched his mishty from him
or is there more to it
with sumer you never know
jo apni beti ko hurt karr sakta hai he can do same to others
if not worse
wonder if geet is his daughter though
who does that to their only child
he could be her step father for all we know
wow geet sure took courage to help him out
more like to stop him
and then do first aid on him
he finally listened as well
ahhh she left is she mad
no wonder he was so angry
damn man he blasted her worried for her
and she just innocently said she didnt wanna hurt him so she went
hmmm lets see what the lawyer tells maan
awww so cute when he kissed her on her forehead
he cares more than he wanna admit

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

awesome update...I think geet is misty , maan's childhood friend...it seems that she is not sumer's daughter...hope in ur next update , we will get know the truth...

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