MG~ FF~The Mist -2- Thread-2- UPDATED Pt 15 / Pg 110 / 8th June ...... - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi babbie

i want u to update plz


😆 Hi tabby...🤗
u want The mist-2's update..??
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😊 Hi lakshu .. aaj late..😊
lily bhi aai hei.. 😊
lekin mujhse baat nahi ki abhi tak..
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Originally posted by: singh24


😆 Hi tabby...🤗
u want The mist-2's update..??

hello 🤗
yes ..torment ka bhi chalega ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 Hi lakshu .. aaj late..😊
lily bhi aai hei.. 😊
lekin mujhse baat nahi ki abhi tak..



bahut dino baad aayi haina

haath nahi lagne waali aaj😆
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part - 9
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Part - 10


Geet was in d bedroom when Nakul knocked at d door ,, he was there to pack Maan's bag for tour ,, it was he who look after of Maan's things but now Geet is here so he was hesitating to do that so e came there to ask if she need any help?

Geet: ji Nakul bhaiya , koi kam hei ?

N: wo saab ka bag lagane ke liye kuch help chahiye to mei ker deta hu.

Geet remembered that Maan told him to pack his bag but she didn't know anything about his belongings nd requirements .

Geet: haan plzz aap hi ker do na , mujhe to abhi kuch pata nahi hei ki aapke saab kya aur kaise cheeje rakhtey hei ? aap bataty jao mai sath mei kahan kya hei ?

N: ji , theek hei .

He came inside nd took out his bags ,, he told Geet to open his wardrobe nd narrated d clothes nd belongings where they wr placed ,, Geet took out them nd handed Nakul who was arranging them in d bag , in few min he did Man's packing nd kept d bags aside then left * Geet was keeping d rest of d things properly in d cupboard when her eyes saw some gifts packs ,, few in beautiful silk pouches nd few in Archies bags ,, she thought they wr Maan's nd curiously opened one pouche ,, there was a beautiful ring box ,, it was a ladies diamond stud band ,, there was a small card attached with a red silk ribbon.. Geet read that ,,, to my sweetest Pari with all my love ,, it pricked Geet somewhere ,, she closed that nd kept that back but bounded with her curiosity to know about her more she saw all d things one by one ,, there wr few dresses , set , watch nd a bangle set which was looking lil old but thy wr beautiful ,, some dried red roses ,, it seems he purchased all d things to gift her on diff occasions like Vday,Bday nd NYD but Geet was confused why he didn't give her ? these things supposed to be with Pari ,, she shrugged her shoulders not getting d point saying inwardly ... apne adure pyaar ki Kabra(graveyard) bana ke rakha hei cupboard ko ,, lastly she find some pics nd a double photo frame beneath all ,, that wr d pics of a girl nd otherside Maan with that girl partially hugging nd smiling ,, no doubt d girl was beautiful nd smart in mod dresses * Geet sighed nd kept that back thinking ,,, jab essi mod Pari se pyaar kerta hei to Geet Gawar hi lagegi ,, there wr some more pics ,, she placed d pics back as it is nd came down .

After half an hr Dadima's friends arrived ,, few wr old as dadima nd few lil younger ,, Dadima introduced Geet to all and Geet touched all's feet ,, they blessed nd praised Geet for her beauty ,, then Geet served then Tea/coffee nd eatables ,, all enjoyed d homemade dishes ,, Dadima said that Geet had made all d thing ,, she is very good in cooking ,, all wr very happy nd spent a good time together ,, they gave many gifts to Geet nd blessed her ,, Geet insisted them to take dinner but they said they wd come later for now they wr full ,, guests went nd Dadima was on cloud 9 bcoz Geet stole all's heart with her beauty nd soft behaviour

Maan came late that night ,, he knew that Dadima's friends wr here so to avoid them to face he decided to stay lil late in office to complete his work ,, Next morning he was going to Blore * Geet arranged d kitchen with Nakul ,, changed her dress nd came down to give med to Dadima ,, Dadima refused to take diner coz she had enough with d guests ,, She told Geet to take rest as she was busy all d day ,, settled Dadima properly in her bed Geet came back to her roost * Maan met Dadima nd informed her about his trip ,, took his diner alone,, finished some of office work nd hit d bed to catch some hrs sleep .

Geet was tired so slept soon though she wake up with d hustle-bustle in d side room but didn't bother * she started to shut her in her world leaving all hopes ,, she felt chocked nd suffocated at his name nd in his presence around her ,, she decided to avoid her confrontation with him ,, there was only one question in front of her how to make her life busy ,, it was not d matter of few days but for whole life ,, there wr no expectations form that person who was directly related to her but devoted to someone else .

She faced many ups nd downs nd led her life accepting d situations/ circumstances hoping for d better days but now there was a full stop for her ,, she was on edge, hurt nd rejected ,, there was no charm nd dreams for life , everything was scattered ,, there wr only responsibilities .

Next day Maan got up early, got ready , met Dadima nd left for Airport ,, Geet knew that he was up nd moved out taking his bags ,, he closed d door back after going out of room ,, Geet got up at her usual time, set d both rooms ,, finished her routine work ,, went in kitchen to prepare her tea nd coffee for Dadima ,, both spent d morning time together ,, Geet helped Dadima in her daily course ,, arranged her room nd came back to prepare BF ,, she cooked nd Nakul helped her ,, now a day Nakul was enjoying a relaxing life ,, Geet lightened his work load ,, at BF Dadima planned d day

Dadima: Geet beta , Maan to almost 1 week ke liye gaye ,, chalo hum aapko city ghooma detey hei aur kuch shopping kara dete hei .

Geet: Dafima aapki tabiyart theek nahi hei to bahar jana theek nahi ,, essa kuch mujhe lena bhi nahi hei .

Dadima: hum ab theek hei ,, OK jyada nahi kuch der ke liye jayenge,, hum bhi bore ho gaye ek room mei band hei kai dino se ,, she asked Nakul if he wanted something for kitchen nd household items ,, Nakul handed her a slip of requirements .

Dadima called Driver nd both d ladies wr out for shopping ,, soon they wr in a big Mall ,, Geet saw all d type of well known brands shops there ,, she was wondering in a big place after 7 yrs ,, in her childhood days they moved city to city every after 2-3 yrs ,, her father was a defence officer nd had transferred every 2-3 yrs ,, she spent a very high standard nd disciplined life in defence but in HP things wr totally changed ,, today she was remembering her old days ,, Dadima nd she shopped for home nd then took lunch in food court then Dadima called driver to collect d bags to put them in car nd asked Geet to shop for her

Dadima: Geet aap apne liye kuch dresses ya jo tumhe pasand ho le lo .

Geet thought nd voice out her desire : Dadima mujhe ek laptop lena hei ,, wo Ground floor per bahot bada shop hei ,, usme maine dekhe sabhi brands.

Dadima: bas laptop aur kuch nahi ?

Geet: haan bas ,, wo Darji ne kuch paise diye thy to maine socha ye accha hei , kuch kaam to aayega mere.

Dadima: beta tum ku logi , hum hei na , hum leker denge .

Geet: nahi Dadima , fir mai unn paison ka kya karoongi ?

Dadima: theek hei jaisa tum chaho ,,lekin hum aapko kuch dresses leker denge ,, humari khushi ke liye ,, theek.

Geet: theek hei per jyada nahi , mere paas kaafi hei.


Precap - Geet got her best buddy ,,, her lappy...


Part - 11


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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