MG~ FF~The Mist -2- Thread-2- UPDATED Pt 15 / Pg 110 / 8th June ...... - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
geet got little happiness thinking of doing something for herself but maan ruined all her hopes with his rude words.why is he behaving as if he did some favour to geet by marrying her
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Posted: 11 years ago
like not working
geet is happy when dadi told she can work or study more
her happiness didnt last long when maan insulted her for studying in pvt n not perfect 4 kc
poor geet..when she climbs up a step falls down badly
maan ..stupid..if he is hurt y he is hurting geet
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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗 Hello my sweetie pies😃



Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...
want to see an independent geet...who will stand against maan and prove how capable she is..
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotional update.te way geet and dadi ki tme, dadi ki words giving geet a new hope and thinking she can survive was lovely emotional..but all her hopes shattered hearing my maan ki words and he disappointed and thinking she is burden to all was lovely emotional bechari geet, maan u will realize one day, buddhu maan...i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan everyday is breaking Geet's hope
she is feeling suffocated here
Poor Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Poor geet ie so heartbroken
Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 7
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4024204/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-2-updated-pt-15-pg-110-8th-june?pn=22



Part - 8


Dadima was fine so forced Maan to sleep in his room ,, he went to study to finished his work and then after more than 2 hr came back in his room ,, he sighed deeply and entered but find d room empty .. Where is she ? God!! Ab kahan dekhun ,, she is new in d house ,, he turn and find d sliding door of study half opened ,, he came there and peeped in ,, she was there ,, he came in ,, confused and woke her up to sleep properly on d bed ,, she stood up at once from d sofa .

Maan: why r u sleeping like this ,, there is bed in d room and u can sleep there and if u have any prob then i can sleep on sofa .

Geet i told u everything clearly so plz try to understand ,, Dadima ko pata chalega to jyada prob ho jayegi .

Geet was hurt with his words ,, she is only a thing for him and he was bearing her only for his Dadima ,, if she was not fit and suitable for his office then how could he tolerate a village girl as his wife ,, she is a means of satisfaction for his Dadima otherwise his heart and mind was occupied by his lady love ,, he is happy in his Parilok.

Maan: Geet tumhe meri wajha se koi prob nahi hogi ,, tum ess room ko kaise bhi use ker sakti ho .

Geet : mujhe esse naram bister(soft bed) per sone ki aadat nahi hei ,, mai yahan theek hoon ,, apko meri fikar kerne ki jaroorat nahi ,, aur meri wajah se aapki Dadima ya kisiko bhi koi pareshaani nahi hogi lekin mei wahan nahi raha sakti .

Maan: agar kisi ko pata chala ki tum ess room mei rahati ho to jawab dena mushkil ho jayega aur Dadima ko bura lagega.

Geet : aap darwaja (door)band ker dijiye koi aayega to mei dekh lungi .

Helplessly he shook his head and moved from there ,, he came in d dressing room ,, opened his cupboard to change his night dress ,, his eyes fell on some gifts packs ,, he caressed them lovingly with a painful smile then took out a beautiful photo frame of Pari from d drawer ,, he caressed her face lovingly and then kept that back with a deep sigh ,, lie down on bed to sleep .

In d side room Geet took out her night suit from d cupboard and went to change in washroom ,, this room also attached with d same WR ,, she came out and settled in sofa to sleep cuddling herself in d blanket ,, a dim light was on for lil light in d room ,, d slide door was half opened ,, she was lil calm now at least she had a separate place for her only but d sleep was far away from her eyes ,, d question of her existence was disturbing her .. How she spend her whole life like this , without any work , hope , and relation ? Though her all dreams wr shattered but she was a living creature and she has some requirements ... puri zindgi kisi ki daya(pity) aur maharbaniyon ( charity) ke sahare kaise jee payegi ?

Both slept with sep thoughts ,, one was satisfied that he fulfil his Dadima's dream and now free from her every day's pestering but Geet's heart was aching as all wr treating her like a useless thing ,, in her previous home she was treated as an orphan and they wr raising her as a responsibility for few yrs and after her marriage they would be free ,, now she became a dummy wife of a rich and high attitude businessman who married her only to fulfil his loving Dadima's desire ... ess sab mei Geet kahan hei ?

She got up went near cupboard and took out an album ,, sat back on d sofa and opened that ,, there wr her childhood pics with her parents ,, her happy childhood days ,, she spent all her early days with her mom and dad in army cantonment area ,, her dad was an army officer and mom was a teacher in APS .

Geet flips some more pics and there wr many pics ,, baby Geet ,, teen age Geet .. A very cute chubby girl ,,,she flipped some more pages,,, then there was her last pic with her parents took on her school annual day function ,, she was in 9th std that time and did a dance drama on Cinderella ,, in this pic she was looking like a princess ,, tears roll down from her eyes wetting her cheeks they fell on her hand which was caressing d pic .

She remembered that after a week her parents died in a mine blast ,, they wr posted in J&K that time and within a month her whole life changed forever ,, d darling daughter of Rano and Col Mahinder Handa's was became an extra member of her uncle's family in HP .. An orthodox family ,, very strict rules for females ,, she was a teenage girl of 9th std , though she got a large amount of money as compensation and study allowance for her every yr , but Darji allowed her to study in village girls school and then graduation private (IGNOU),, she was not allowed to go out alone or to talk to any boy that was like a crime ,, she remembered how Brij and Darji beat her when Brij found her talking to a boy when she was coming back from d school with her friend Channi ,, he was Channi's BF and stopped them in mid way but Brij saw them that day at home Brij slapped her and Darji hit her with his stick , Taiji too scolded her saying .. tere ye lakshan(ways) meri beti Rajji ko bhi bigad denge ,,, tu to bina maa-baap ki hei per teri wajha se Biradari mei hume sunna padega ,, pata nahi kab ess zimmedari se mukti milegi * Brij threatened her that if he saw and heard that u wr talking to any boy and roaming outside he'll cut her into pieces ,, from that day they became more strict for her * she was very intelligent , got highest marks in +2 Board but she was not allowed to go college ,, on her pleading Darji allowed her private graduation and she opt IGNU for that * she did her Bcom and from last few months she was listening about her marriage from elders ,, living in village from last 7 yrs she saw that girls and females wr only for household works in this house ,, Darji was d serpanch of d Pind so for d sake of his image he allowed girls to study in school ,, females never raised their voice in front of males even sometime Brij slapped Preeto in drunken state ,, he was Darji's loving child who showed his authority on all like he was d sarpanch * Darji had a big name in Biradari so family respect and honour matter him d most ,, Dadrji and Brij had same thoughts so Darji loved him * this was her life in that family after her parent's demises .

She wiped her tears , kept d album aside on d side table and lie down ,, her head and eyes wr heavy and soon she slept in wee hrs . Geet opened her eyes lazily listening d buzzer sound of alarm which was coming from Maan's room ,, she saw outside ,,, d lil sunlight was indicating that it was morning then she heard some moving steps in Maan's room ,, he was up but she remained like that in d blanket and waited for him to go out for exercise .

Maan stopped d alarm , got up and peeped in side room ,, then started his routine work ,, when he left for gym Geet got up and finished her work ,, before leaving d room she arranged Maan's room and came down to meet Dadima ,wished her, helped her and arranged her room also ,, Dadima was better now ,, both took their morning tea together with lil talks then Dadima came out with Geet in kitchen and instructed Nakul for many things for d day,, Geet was listening all carefully .

Dadima came in dining hall with news paper and started reading that while Geet stayed in kitchen to help Nakul in preparing BF ,, then she left for Pooja ,, clean d mandir, and did Arti .*

She was coming with arti thali and again faced Maan ,, today he stopped himself in front of her and took d arti and prasaad then left but this lil moments was very hard for Geet ,, his sweaty bare body and fragrance affected her senses , but today she didn't look at him ,, she came in dining hall , gave Dadima arti and prasaad ,, she blessed Geet and made her sit near her saying ,, yahan baito , sab ek sath BF karenge .


Precap --- Geet felt humiliated ...



Part - 9
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4024204/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-2-updated-pt-15-pg-110-8th-june?pn=46


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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