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Posted: 10 years ago

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#363

Part 46

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Maan hears his phone conversation... He closed both eyes & feeling something wet around his cheek... he touch & knows he crying ...his tears wetting his face...

Maan feeling guilty, he forced geet for dance, then he try to go close

to her... He again hurt her today... why he doing this... he also not

knowing... He forced her... now what she thinking about me...

He left the party & reaches to house & directly goes to geet room... her room door is opened... he entered her & came close to her, sat near her on bed and caressed her head, face and cheeks lovingly.. He sees dried tears on her face...

Maan : aaj firse rula diya na ...maine tumhe

He wanted to talk to her once ... want to clear all things... but not

know how he says...

He couldn't hold back and kissed her forehead and closed eyes &

left before she woke.

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Flashback In

On Marriage day, all rituals completed, her family is busy in

preparation, he talking with someone, in this mid, one child spoils his

dress, he going towards washroom, but some voices stop him on

spot near door...

Risabh : madhu ydi geet tujhe us din phone nhi krti

Tujhe apne pyaar ke baare mein na batati

Toh tera jwab ha hota na Maan ko

Madhu : HA

Ha mein Ha khti

Flashback Out

This words change his relation with geet... his behavior for her...

now he realizing, he do somewhere wrong with her... in anger he crossed all limit to some extent... its really some extent or beyond this...

Today, when I see in her eyes, I feel sinnerof her, for ruining her

dreams... He sees so much pain in her eyes... why I not seen before ...

Why am feeling her pain in my heart ... its only guilt for forcing her

today or beyond this...

Slowly - 2 he slept ...

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Risabh : madam ghar chale

Madhu : rishu kitni shanti hai yha

Risabh : madhu Raat ko beech ke nikare shanty hi hongi na

Madhu : rishu pata nhi kyun

Aaj geet se baat krna ka bhut mann ho raha hai

Asa lag raha hai

Aaj kuch badal gya hai

Risabh : dekh geet se baat krne ke liye itna sochna kya

Kitne mahino se tum dono ne baat nhi ki hai

Madhu : asa nhi hai

Mein usse whats app pe daily msg krti hu

Aur wo bhi kbhi- kbhi reply krti hai

Wo busy hoti hongi na

Risabh : ye tu khud ko tasali dene ke liye kh rhi hai na

I think madhu tujhe ek baar usse milke baat krni chaiye

Madhu : wo mujhse naraaz hai

Maine usko hurt kiya

i know this is short update... please hit like button & do long comment

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago

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chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#364

He is urgggh

Man he makes me so mad

Poori baat sunn lete

From where did he think that geet made madhu not accept his love for her

Did she say that

Geet never stopped madhu

It was madhu who did

Cause geet would have never have come between the two of you

I thought he would know her enough

Seems not

Maan I feel like strangling you

I think I will

This is why he tortured her

Damn this man

I can't believe him

Now what's point in feeling sorry

Man I am so mad at him

Madhu rishu you don't know what she is going through

And how bad things have become for them

Half thing he heard and assumed that geet is at fault

When she isn't

Its him and even madhu to some extent

Why didn't she tell geet about man loving her

And look where that has brought her

So broken and dull

Now he feels guilty and for what

For hurting. Her by forcefully dancing with her

Not for breaking her heart

And not listening to her

He is hopeless

Can we get geet with someone else please

Sorry for ranting

Res I did cause wanted first place but couldnt comment then but can now

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: chavvi16
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Rashmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

ye lo

short update ke liye long comments kahaan se laayen😆😆😆

it was nice upadte priyanka..

Is Maan turning soft towards Geet or t;s just his guilt that he is feeling bad for forcing bher

update soon..I want Man to listen Madhu's phone to Geet

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nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

It's superb. After a long time maan realiZed his mistake for being rude with geet in anger. After hearing incomplete conversation of rishab and madhu, he decided to hate geet.waiting for next dear

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fariya20

@fariya20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#368

awesome update
soo maan nai adhi bath suni thi
he know he hurt her
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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#369

issko short kehte h

yeh toh teaser tha 😭

maan is realising his mistakes

but mistake realise kia hi h

toh sudharo v na

aese baithne se kya hoga

n madhu kuch kar na

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Teju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#370

Argh hate hate Maan for doing this with Geet.. pahile hurt kiya Geet ko ab kya chahta ussae.. ji nahi bhara bewjah usko rulakar.. yeh kaisa pyaar hain uska.. ? Maan like man only thinks abt self happiness.. I don't say if he would have loved Madhu he should accept Geet.. n abt MU.. ok.. Mu hui hain.. but geet tumhari best friend thi.. us nate toh uski baat sun lete.. n uski baat sunane ke baad truth kya hain janane ki koshish kartein..

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