[Novel Length] Office Rendezvous Chapter 25/26/27 - P 73/74/80 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
I really liked this chapter. It's so nice to get a layered idea of both their friendship and of Geet's life itself.

Aditya is a total sweetie, the exact kind of guy bear hugs were invented for. The dirty jokes, the good natured humour, easygoing attitude... I love this guy already. Lucky is the lady who is hotter than Geet 😆

Have I mentioned how much I love this story? It's such an instant shot of happiness and it always puts me in a summery, breezy, "we're driving down the highway and good times will roll" kind of place - my favourite sort of place to be in :)

Thank you for the updates, V. Can't wait to see what Magic Maan (the dude's everywhere! But hey, not complaining 😉) and Geet 'Sexy Legs' Handa get up to. And I'd be lying if I said I didn't stretch my legs out on my desk to see how they look after reading this 😆

P.S. Harshad and Nivin are both great but Aditya for me, unoriginally, is Aditya Roy Kapur. Sorry 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Like Aditya and Geet relation. Looks like the hotter girl must be having hotter legs than Geet.

Hotter boy for Geet is there, so.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Waiting for more.
And ofcourse thankyou for updating.
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃
Nice part... n maan mostly!
Even I was thinking where did this adi guy disappear. .. at least he should stop when kids are arguing🤣

And finally thank god he made his presence felt!

Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yesss!

Res

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^^ See my excitement? There were about 20 more s's before IF started policing my excitement.This story is literally happiness in a screen.

I bet my right knee that Aditya and Maan are gonna turn out to be all pally and it's gonna infuriate Geet 😆

I loved that you used 'delicious' in that context. A few times in real life, I've used that word because it comes very naturally and fits perfectly and no other word does the feeling justice but no one really understands what I mean by it. My sister says I sound like a pervert 😆 I guess the best way I can describe that delicious feeling is when you feel real pleasure from something and it gives you a (I was going to say delicious here, lol) very excited, frisson-y feeling. And what I love about your use of it here was that Geet felt it because of Maan's smile. His pleasure was the reason for hers. Because the characters in this story are so grounded in reality, I often give no weight to the fact that they are Geet and Maan and I love that because I get to laugh, worry, swear and feel attraction alongside them without any preexisting idea that they are destined to be part of an epic romance of some kind. But this is the first time they have reminded me of the great, giving love of The Geet and Maan and honestly, it's quite touching because I felt it along with them and understood it myself, rather than passively watch it happen onscreen.

Well, laugh lines (and winks and shrieks) aside, I really like one defining trait of Maan: the way he is always so casual. Too many times, we - and the Maans we, and I especially, write - are so serious that it's frankly exhausting. In fact, our movies, books, TV and all lives are populated with people who need to see the funny, easygoing side, rather than those who show it to others. I'm so grateful that your Maan is in the latter category.

Wow. I think, after an incredibly long time, I am actually falling for a Maan (story-wise). I'm not interested in the romance of the character but his actual personality, especially his friendship, is what I genuinely find so heartwarming.

Thank you, V, for such an endearing and in the best way possible, casual story. And yes, it did take my breath away when Maan murmured that he had Geet. (I imagine a nice but not crisp white cotton shirt).
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am so happy you updated so many parts.. Loved the nok-jhok of Maan and Geet.
Does Maan and Aditya know each other?

I loved Aditya's character. he is such a nice support to Geet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I agree with Geet here. This guy has diploma in sarcasm and pulling legs...And his eyes always has description of having mischievous look or amusement! Always!

Adi's protective side was expected but I was waiting for Harry to make his appearance at the scene actually.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

I agree with Geet here. This guy has diploma in sarcasm and pulling legs...And his eyes always has description of having mischievous look or amusement! Always!

Adi's protective side was expected but I was waiting for Harry to make his appearance at the scene actually.


This comment made me laugh.😆

I will share a little story behind it. One of my close friends reads a lot in IF. I bug her to suggest me good stories. She did twice, and in both I had a complaint that some phrases are overly repeated, In one of the stories, Maan winked a lot, it gave me a head ache, while in another Geet Shrieked a lot, making me want to weep.

However, here comes a day I did it myself, Yes, I have written it many many times but now i realize i mentioned it like a million times now🤣

Thanks for pointing it out though. I seriously couldn't stop laughing. Have to get that friend of mine to read this now. She will kill me😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
terrific update! well written! Geet questions Maan n he explains! small world! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Quite an interesting part...
so Maaneet are at same place for different reasons...
Maan is in Goa for conference...
loved their banter...

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