MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 3 part 42,43,44 on 117,129,135 - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update
do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 29 is also very nice
waiting fot next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
all going well ab yeh kaun jissne maan pe attak kiya hope this will bring maan and geet close more
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 30



maan think for some time her devil daughter just taking his exam , he say to geet I will pull all curtains so room become dark than you ... you get na if you are comfortable geet just nodded in yes maan took musky with him and make that room dark so he could not saw anything than geet sit on bed taking musky on lap but musky just holding maan one hand like she have fear that her dada went away from her ...(or she get alert with destiny play )



there is dark in room but what speed musky sucking her feed it make so noise in pin drop silence to looking more hard , geet turning red with second by second and maan gulp hard he closed his eyes but not so innocent image start to come in his mind poor maaneet just fix with muskan maan singh khurana ... muskan start to get teeth now it just start ...geet feel so shy with thought that maan is next to her and she just forget to change side of her blossoms and when muskan din not get her feed she just bite on her bloss... and geet moan with pain ahhh muskan ...


maan get tense and just geet geet are you ok what happen ...now geet slap herself in mind le de ab ans wow o main wo ...


maan thik se bolo geet she say with so much difficulty wo iforget to change side for milk and musky just bite me their when she don't get milk



now maan turn red in shyness now what should he say he just mummer ohhh in slow voice and just took away musky finger from his hand so geet give musky feed of other side geet just change to other side and noughty musky just again hold maaan hand tightly


hear dadima took rano ma in her room


rano ma -ye dik nahi hai dadima


dadi- get what about rano talking but she ask what beta

rano- we cant destroy maan like like that


dadi- just nodded her head and mummer ye ma beti kiss mitti se bani hai just thinking about maan

dadi- why you thinking like that rano

rano - dadi wo dadi wo app geet ke past main rano ma chocked with emotion tear start to come from her eyes Maan is perfect husband for any one he will be dream of every mother of girl but geet fate ...

dadi took rano hand in her hand and make her sit near her and say with low but hard tone I know about geet past rano just gasp loudly and look to dadima

dadi - in coma state I heard you all ijust cant react or iknow about all things what happen with geet it is just nigtmear just forget it dear , what is fault of geet in this when her so called husband throw her in this dirt , Agar kamal ko kiched main fake dege to wo apni suderta nahi kho deata rano


geet as beautiful as flower that hand is dirty which heart flower like this rano ,it is not geet fault , can you don't see happiness in their face

aur ek bath don't react in negative way just lesion fully than decide maan is father of musky and before rano think some bad about maan dadi tell whole story


rano sit their just numb she feel so disgust about maan family they stood so low oh god


dadi took chance of rano ma silence and say rano this two hurt soul by their closed one now searching solace love in each other ,don't stop them rano it is play of destiny and muskan is thing witch bounded them in unbreakable vow it is babaji decision dear



rano ma just hug dadi ma and cry out ...ialso want their happiness only dadima , dadi caressed her back and say yes they will get all happiness they will but both ladies don't aware of destiny new play who brought which storm in their life , geet life maan life



when muskan sleep on geet lap after taking her feed maan try to pull out her hand but na devil is no mood to went away from maan geet just say maanki apphi muskan ke pass so jayiyae


main dadima ko dekh ke aati hu ...maan nodded in yes and geet went to dadi room where dadi chatting with rano



dadi just took geet hand and put her hand bangel in geet hand geet look with shock to dadi and ma , ma just nodded in yes and geet just cry in happiness tiro just hug each other

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part

after some time geet come in maan room where father daughter just sleep in each other embarrass geet just love this seen she just sit near them and watching them after some time don't know when she also sleep their near muskan and when maan get out from sleep he look geet face so closed to his face he just mummer beautiful just beautiful ...just than her eyes fall on he hand and his face glow with happiness his mother bangle in geet hand ...he get that dadi ready to their relation ...in happiness he just brush his lips with her lips and she open her eyes with shock



maan land on real world he just caressed his own hair and give small smile o her , geet just turn red he just just brush his lips maan wo maine tumare haat main ma ke kagan dekhe to kude ko rok nahi paya next second maan face turn tense and he ask wo rano maa


geet just say she also ready ...


now maan cant control he just hug geet and next second just took her rosy lips to his lips he just kissing he like mad man just neebing her lips , when geet cant respond him he just mummer in her mouth geet respond , just foloow my action ...with so much shyness she just follow maan and both just lost in their first proper kiss ...




both come out with cry sound with muskan and both froze in their place ...thoe muskan is small but it look not nice maan just stop to kiss geet and just went to musky who make such golgappa face and start to objered maan face specially lips which is swallon with their passionate kiss geet give cut on his lips ...musky softly caressed his lips with so much care and when maan moan in pain her eyes get full with tear



oh maan just hug her tight and say don't cry baccha it is it is , now he is fix now what he will say to her that I am kissing to your ma and just lost in passion



maan come in nauhty mood and say see see musky your ma bite me like this and geet jaw dropped down with maan comment ...she just look upper side and start to talk with her babaji



musky try to go geet so geet come near give galre to maan but next second maan brust in loud laugh and geet look to musky with shock big shock



musky just bite geet near her lips on cheek ...oh she can't see papa pain ohhh geet mummer papa ki camchi unka pain diktha hai aur mere lips ka kya ...she make such puppy face and musky angry glare maan again brust in laugh oh he have two child with him


next morning geet wake up early and went to garden she feel so light so happy after so many days she just sit on swing ...cool air , morning silence and he happy heart she just start to sung


hawaa ke jhonke aaj mausamon se rooth gaye
gulon ki shokhiyaan jo bhanwre aa ke loot gaye
badal rahi hai aaj Zindagi ki chaal Zaraa
isee bahaane main bhi kyoon naa dil ka haal Zaraa
sanwaar loon haye sanwaar loon

Gusts of wind got upset with the weather today..
As the bumblebees looted the brilliance of flowers
today the way of life has changed little bit
Taking that as an excuse, why I too not make my heart feel better,
Why shouldn't I too pamper my heart..

other side maan who early in morning went to jog ...feel so happy with his family , geet he have broud smile on his face , he just feel lif some veceil is behind him so he look back but there is no one ...he again start to run

in garden geet just try to catch butterfly and sung



baraamade puraane hain, nayi si dhoop hai
Jo palkein khatkhata raha hai kis kaa roop hai
sharaaratein kare jo aise
bhool ke hizaab
kaise us ko naam se main pukaar loon

The verandas are old, but the sunshine I see is new..
Whose beauty is that is knocking at my eyelids..
The one, who makes mischieves,
forgetting the veils,
How do I call him by name?

this new feeling and maan face make her so much shy she closed her face with her plam this new life for her she feel herself like free bird she want to hide her maan from all word so no evil eyes fall on him on them

Ye saaree koyalein baneeN hain aaj daakiyaa
Kuhu-kuhu mein chitthiyaan padhein mazaakiyaa
Inhe kaho ki naa chhupaayen
Kis ne hai likhaa bataayein,
Us ki aaj main nazar utaar loon
Sanwaar loon haye sanwaar loon
Sanwaar loon, sanwaar loon..

All these cuckoos have become postmen,
In their cuckooing, they read the letters in jokes..
Tell them not to hide,
and tell me clearly who has written [the letter]
I'll remove the effect of evil eye for him..
I'll adorn myself, and my heart..

hear in park maan just lost in geet his musky and reminding their closeness, he just lost in that and same time a fast truck just come near him and just dash with him , he winched in pain and calleddd geeet he lay their in pool of blood

preacp

geet serching maan in hospital all alone




Note - next fate part on next Saturday 😈

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo mai chai...
all the bst bolo...aaj xam hai...
bye...
one more week to go...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

chalo mai chai...
all the bst bolo...aaj xam hai...
bye...
one more week to go...



chali gayi ho ya ho yaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi mahi,pooja...
ajj exam hai ALL THE BEST POOJA...
ur gona rock it baby...
aur yeh kya exam hai aur tum yeha mommy ko bolu kya
acchi acchi baathe sunayengi
mommy dekho iss pooja ko!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh god 2updates mahi...
Awesome updates...
oh god muski tho bilkul appne papa jaise ziddi aur naughty bangayi...
Aur phir papa aur mommy ko hi saatha rahi ha..
good going muski..
aur thank god that dadi cleared everything to rano maa..
wow rano maa also agrred for maaneet
Party time...
wow dadi ne geet ko kangan diya...
Lovely maan nd muski sleeping witheachother...
Arrey geet tum bhi unko join karo tabhi family poori hongi go baby...
Maan woke up and saw kangan in geets hand and cant control his feelings and hugged n kissed her...
awwe poor geet full shy...
oh gosh muski utgayye aur appni papa ki lips dekhkar gusse bhi aggaya eo bhi mommy par...
oh god maan naughty ban gayi aur muski ko badava derahi ha..
poor geet got bitten by muski😉
Awwe muski papa ki lips dekha lekin mommy ka kya???
Wow geet singinng song superb selection..
maan lost in geet and muski memories an lost his track...
ho god truck has hit him is it accident or planned!!!!
Oh god precap geet searching for maan at hospital aur wo bhi akeli...
hope maan is fine...
aur mahi app kyu itni dd banrahi ho...
app ko yeh suit nahi karthi baby...
how could u say next update on saturday...
oh god i cant wait till then...
mahi plzzz meri acchi wala mahi banjav aur jaldi update do..
plzzz mahi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi suhaana...
how r u?

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