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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

congrats on the new stpry! Thanks 4 da pm! Wt a wonderful surprise! Sad tht u wil nt contiunue with Bepaanah bt new story makes up 4 it! Lovely prologue! Superb banner! Fab update! Geet is so bubbly n caring! Tito n Geet share a wonderful bond! Geet loves her dad n bro so much! So she is a doctor! Maan upset! he has his own plan n dreams! His parents talk abt marriage! They want him to meet Geet! Maan angry! He agrees reluctantly! Maan admires the village n is impressed to knw tht Geet is a doctor! Geet dad also told abt Maan! she remembers him n refuses bt gives in! Geet n Tito arguing! They meet! n u stoopped lol! update soon! beautifully written.

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Congo for new story ..
Nice start

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basusayeeda

@basusayeeda

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Interesting story. ..loved

waiting for next

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

lovely start..cant wait for next part...😉😆

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

congrats dear for new story

lovely start. both maaneet r stark opposite

waiting for crackers to burst😆

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Nice concept...mujhe mr. Perfect ki film ki yaad dikhadi...is it on the line of that...

Love geet very much...she is bubbly...

I am sure usse dekhte hi maan ke hosh udjaayenge...

Do continue soon...

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

First update hi ek dum mast hai
Can't wait to read more of it
Maan was soo irritated when his parents were talking about marriage
And now after coming to village he is feeling nice
Jab geet ko dekhega pata nahi Kya hoga vese hi he was shocked to know that geet is a doctor
Continue soon