THE LOCKET (22) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 98

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely part
sujal kashish part was good
daarji and geet part was very emotional
read that part with teary eyes
( not posting the teary icon )
daarji and geet's journey
very very emotional
but liked it so much
daarji's each and every gesture , his advice everything was great
taara and chandan part was also very nice
and megha is really the cute little one😃
lastly manisha's part and the song😆😆😆
brilliantly used the song for him or her😆😆😆😆
Manoj kumar would cover his face with his palms 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional update. loved the way Kashish treated Sujal.Finally the time has come to set all scores. Waiting for the Grand wedding.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



phir thank u boli

then how many thnakus will i have to say u?? but i wont... because for me u r my freind... and friend se tho haq se maangoongi...

update do😳


abhi likha nahi sowie

guests aaj se aa rahe hai..

kab jaane wale hai yeh bhi nahi bol rahe hai

hope to write @ lunch breaks but it will take time.

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gshruti

nice update

but very short
waiting for more


😲 are you serious Shruti?

find me one writer on Geet forum who gives longer updates than me.

Most give 2-3 pages in word
mine are at least 10 pages each time

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalisen85

awesome👏👏




thakurs family is very happy😊




kashish and sujal moments r nice😉




kashish mom accepts her daughters decision😃




darji and geets moments r nice😊




update soon


Thanks Anjali
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream


Beautiful update.

Awesome

Sajal trying to stop Kashish. Today is her day. Showing him some attitude. N Sujal can't do anything right now. Wat a situation.
Adi family back. Now Sujal n Kashish are surely tied down.

Darji n Geet part was excellent. They are having some sweet moments before Geet is someone else. Loved the way u showed the feelings of father.
It was so emotional that I started crying. Please don't do this to me. I also have a weak heart.
From having read this part I suggest you don't show bidaai in detail. Abhi itna rula diya Hai toh bidaai ke time aap Kitna rulaoge.

Good I was alone while reading this update. Warna family sochti y am I crying by looking at my cell phone. Lol


Enthusiastic Dev... Love the Skype calls they make.

Geet teasing Maan... Adrak wali chai. Maan just roared. Uff Maan ko control karna padega.

Thanks for pm.


Thank you Chavi. Glad you liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanland

Lovely part

sujal kashish part was good
daarji and geet part was very emotional
read that part with teary eyes
( not posting the teary icon )
daarji and geet's journey
very very emotional
but liked it so much
daarji's each and every gesture , his advice everything was great
taara and chandan part was also very nice
and megha is really the cute little one😃
lastly manisha's part and the song😆😆😆
brilliantly used the song for him or her😆
Manoj kumar would cover his face with his palms 😆


😆 True

Glad you liked it so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ssad

emotional update. loved the way Kashish treated Sujal.Finally the time has come to set all scores. Waiting for the Grand wedding.


I do appreciate the comment but do know that I will not be giving access to the remaining updates

I won't take people who decided to comment at the end. Sowie.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashdd

Loving sujal kashish love story... VM uncle tooo good... Darj-geet's emotinal moment... Naughty maan... Awsome update...

Thank u😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for uch a late reply.

it was a lovely update. Darji and Geet's scene was beautifully written.

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