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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 83



Maan came close to her ,, sat near her nd dragged her in his lap ,, she was so shy-shy with his gesture ,, he hugged her tightly without uttering a word ,, Geet felt that something bothering him , eating him but he was not sharing that ,, she desired that he shared his prob nd worries with her .

Geet: Maan do u trust me ?

Maan: more than me .

Geet: then why don''t u share ur feelings with me .

Maan parted a lil nd looked at her ,,, feelings ?

Geet: hmm,, ur feelings , prob nd worries .

Maan understood where she was talking ,, she is sensing his restlessness but he couldn't share that with her so tried to divert d topic .

Maan: Geet I always shared my feelings with u nd if u want to listen more then be ready to give me back something ,, there was a tint of naughtiness in his shining eyes .

Geet: first tell me what is bothering u from morning, only then i'll decide to give u back ur something.

Maan held her hand nd kissed her knuckles ,, she was melting nd drowning in his love .

Maan: Geet , I want u always near me , in front of me ,, I want u in KV with me nd Dadima ,, plzz aa jao na .

Geet looked at him for some moments ,, she thought that he was accepting their relation so wanted her in KV as a family member but they wr not properly married nd without that she couldn't live there ,, d reality of their relation was secured inside d KV's wall ,,she was unable to say that she cd shift there after their proper marriage .

Geet: Maan, mai kaise wahan rahu? Plzz try to understand .

Maan: prob kya hei ,, pahale bhi to rahati thi .

Geet: wo tab baat aur thi Maan .

Maan: aur ab kya hei ? Clear me .

Geet fumbled with words ,, wo Maan ,, esse kaise ? theek nahi lagta . plzz jidd matt karo ,, aur yahan bhi to paas hi hu ,, tumse dur to nahi .

Maan realized that he again pressurizing her to accept his wish ,, he promised himself not to force her but again he was doing that in his insecurities nd fear ,, what to do ? She was accepting everything what he wanted leaving her all dreams nd disers aside ,, no, he couldn't do that ,, he decided to fulfill all her dreams nd to give her all d happiness ,, he didn't know what she dreamed for her marriage nd future ,, he cd nt force her to marry him in d mid of her study ,, God!! He cd nt even shift with her ,, why everything becoming so complicated for them * seeing him lost again in his thoughts nd tense Geet nudged him again .

Geet: Maan kya yahi baat tumhe pareshan ker rahi thi , kuch aur nahi?

Maan: haan lekin tum meri baat manti hi nahi to mai tense hi hounga na.

Geet: Maan , mai tumhari baat nahi manti ya tum kisi ki nahi manty ,, tum hamesha mujhe Tana Marty ho , theek hei , zara ye batane ka kasht kerroge ki maine kya baat nahi mani aur tum meri kya baat mantey ho ,, batao , aaj clear ho hi jaye.

Maan: wo,,wo,, tum na office aa rahi ho aur na KV mei aur haan na humari date ke liye agree ho ,, bolo ab bolo .

Geet: Baat ko ghumao matt Maan ,, bas apni margi kahaty aur kerty ho, mai kya chahati hu ye kabhi janne ki koshish nahi kerty ,, kabhi pucha hei ki Geet tum kya chahati ho ? Haan mai nahi manti koi baat,, bahot buri hu mai ,, matt baat karo mujhse ,, chod do mujhe akela , jao yahan se .

She pushed him lil back nd rushed to her room in anger ,, he sat there froze ,, she was complaining exactly in same way which he was thinking few min back ,, lo ho gai naraaz , ab kaise manau esse ? Maan tum koi kaaam theek se nahi ker sakty * he huffed nd cursed himself hurting her again ,, he came in her room ,, nd saw that she was laying on d bed hiding her face in d pillow ,, he dragged himself near her ,, sat on d edge of bed nd caressed her head .

Maan: Geet ,sorry sweetheart ,, I never do it again , I won't go against ur wish ,, Geet I want u near me that's why I told u to come in KV ,, sorry , I hurt u again ,, shayad tumse dur rahana hi meri saza hei ,, she didn't turn nd speak * He got up half heartedly nd came out from there ,, spent some time in lawn ,, N came to call him for lunch but he refused ,, then he moved to his gym where he cd take out his frustration , pain nd worries .

He was doing exercises nd punching sand bag thinking about Geet .. She is right ,, I have to ask her what she want ? We've to share our feelings ,, in last few days we wr very close nd she reciprocated me in same manner ,, she didn't hide her feelings for me but as a girl it was hard for her to voice out her diseres to me ,, it's my duty to make her easy with me nd to assure her to share her feelings with me ,, she asked me to share my prob nd feelings with her then I have too ,, she is trying to make pace with me then I won't disappoint her nd i'll give her all my support nd love * he stopped ,, combed back his wet ruffled hair with his fingers ,, he was all drantched in sweat but now there was a determination on his face to win her heart .. chalo Maan manao apni sweet devil ko ,, pata nahi kya - kya kerna padega ?


Precap --- Maan manaofying Geet ...


Part - 84

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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🤗 Hi lily ..
how r u dear...??😊
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Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 Hi lily ..
how r u dear...??😊

barbee doll ,,,,😃
kal kanha thi,,??
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😆😆 Hi tabby..
lovely pics..😃
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

barbee doll ,,,,😃

kal kanha thi,,??


bahot back pain tha.. baith nahi pa rahi thi,,
pain killer kha-kha ker bura hall hei.. ewww.. kal 3 leni padi..
abhi bhi hei.. but kuch kam..
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hi tabs ,,,spaming mode,,,,😉😆
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😆😆 Hi tabby..
lovely pics..😃

hi babbie ..
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hi tabs ,,,spaming mode,,,,😉😆

hi lily ..kya karro ..today i am feeling too sleepy..i am spamming to increase my post 😊

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