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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa,chawi,BB,indu,rashmi,avi,jeev,
sona nd mona...🤗 jhappiieess..


hello again di😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi again di

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Posted: 11 years ago

😊 hi indu..
tum nyt mei ...??😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


😊 dona kahan ho sab..??
lakshu ,mauaa, mona sab gol..




Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 79


When Geet came in her room she find all d things nd understood that Maan placed them ,, she lovingly caressed all d thins with a broad smile ,, all r very beautiful but soon her face fell down ,, hrs passed but he didn't wish her ,, 1st she hoped that he wd say when she was alone but now seeing d gifts she thought that he was avoiding her .. why? Coz of last nyt closseness ,, no ,, they wr close in FH too nd he himself told her not to regret than how cd he ?then what ,, coz of her GF but he said he was waiting for her nd in his daze state he was mumbling Geet ,, Then why he is avoiding me ? She pouted nd sat on d bed with a grumpy mood,, she was waiting that he wd wish her but... she threw d dress on bed in anger nd walk out in lawn ,, than Meera nd yash wished her nd talk to her for long ,, Meera teased her that MK wd plan a special Bday party for her nd she angrily replied that there is nothing like that,, they talk for long .

On d other side Maan was watching her on screen nd he felt more guilty when he saw her throwing d dress nd thought that she is angry on his last nyt behavior ,, here she was trying to adjust nd accept but he ruined all ,, he went in gym nd started his tai-chi nd exercises to hurt him nd trying to give more nd more pain to punish him ,, tired he fell down on floor in frustration ,, he wanted to go near her to wish her , love her nd wanted to make her day very special but didn't have courage to face her , he didn't know how he behaved last night ? After mustering some courage he called Dadima nd informed her to get ready as they r going out for Geet's bday nd informed to Geet also to get ready ,, he insisted to pack extra pair of clothes with them .

Dadima asked about d place but he said that it was a surprised ,, so don't disclosed to Geet ,,Dadima came to Geet nd told her to get ready ,, she saw Geet dressed on bed nd understood that it was from Maan ,, she smiled that he was making everything special for her .

Dadima: WOW!! Geet dress to bada pyara hei,, ho bhi ku na MK ka style hei .

Geet gave a fake smile but inwardly she was cribbing Maan not to wish her nd avoiding her .

Dadima: Ok , go nd get ready beta ,, let's see what he planned for his princess?

Dadima patted her cheek nd went out with a naughty smile ,, Geet made faces but decided to wear Maan's dress nd soon she was ready to go out ,, Geet decided to thank Maan for his gift so went to his room 1st ,, Maan was ready nd standing near d window with a pained face ,, he didn't realize when Geet entered nd came close to him ,, Geet saw him very sad nd disheartened ,, kya hua hei esse,, ku dukhi hei ? She placed her hand on his shoulder which startled him ,, he jerked nd turned ,, their eyes met for a moment but soon he averted them ,, Geet witnessed d pain in those deep brown eyes which wr filled with love day before .

Geet: kya hua hei Maan?

Maan: nothing Geet , just lil hangover ,, shall we go now?

Geet: no , if u r not well then we won't go out.

Maan: Geet , it's ok , i'm fine , don't spoil ur day. He was talking but shunning his eyes .

Geet turned him towards her nd looked straight to him ,, he was avoiding d direct look .

Geet: look at me Maan then said u r fine ,, I don't want anything if u r not happy , i'm seeing u from morning u r avoiding me even u didn't wish me then what is d use of this dress nd special diner ,, i'm not going anywhere ,, u can go nd do whatever u want ,, it's easy to preach other to face d ppl nd to fight but tough to bear ,, if u can't face that S*** who hurt u than how cd u preach me , it was tough for me too .

Maan: Geet , plzz i'm not upset for those crap ppl ,, it's not like that .

Geet: then what happened ?

He gave her a painful look nd kneeled down ,, he hugged her from her waist nd blurt out ,, I'm sorry ,, I misbehaved with u again Geet ,, I hurt u coz of that B**** ,, I lost my sense in anger nd hurt u , I'm sorry .

Now Geet realized that he was upset coz of last nyt closeness nd thinking that he misbehaved with me in his drunken state ,, she sat near his nd made him look at her .

Geet: u didn't misbehave Maan ,, u didn't cross ur limits ,, Maan u told me not to regret on those moments then why r u feeling guilty now ,, u wr not in sense but u didn't misbehave ,, she wanted to say that she too was carried away in his closeness but her shyness stopped her ,, Maan plzz don't make me feel bad on those moments nd don't regret ,, she leaned nd hugged him ,,, Geet ,, is it true I didn't hurt u ,, I don't remember anything what had happened ? i'm sorry if I hurt u ?

Geet: no Maan u didn't ,, I thought u r upset coz of ur sexy GF,, she winked at him

Maan: Geeet ,don't call that S*** my GF ,, u r my sexy wife ,, my princess,, he spoke with fake anger nd teased her too * he cupped her face , placed a pack on her forehead saying happy Bday Geet nd thanks a lot for giving me happiness ,, it's ur Bday but u filled my life with happiness removing all d pain nd burden from my heart ,, be with me my angle ,, Happy Bday ,, Babaji tumhe meri umar bhi laga de .

Geet : Maaan ,, plzz ,, don't say this ,, she was so touched nd overwhelmed with his words ,, hugged him more tightly hiding her face in his crook ,, he packed on her head nd glued her more to him .

Maan: Geet ,, chalo time for surprise .

Geet: kahan?

Maan: aahaann ,,, come .

He got up holding her hand nd came out in hall where Dadima was waiting for them ,, all wr on d way to harbor after few min.


Precap - a night on cruise nd confession ...


Part - 80

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 hi indu..
tum nyt mei ...??😊




Main mamma ke yaha hoon...hubby Nahi hain😉
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Hi doadoa😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-




Main mamma ke yaha hoon...hubby Nahi hain😉


mouke ka pura faida uthaya ja raha hai😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-



Hi doadoa😛

😲😲😲
ye kon hai??

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