MG SS: It Takes Two S1 #3 PART-23/24 Pg-103/118 May-9th THE END!

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow lovely touching emotioal cute cute update...te way my maaneet ki life and my naughty maan not leaving his geet for a sec too making her to blush and drown in his love was lovely cute.. te way geet came to know tat my maan was talking with her parents and she was felt overwhemled with his love was lovely emotional..she got ready and waat to give surprise for my maan was lovely touchy.. at once my maan came his geet hugged him and kissing him showing her love to him making him shock was lovely cute touchy.. my maan teasing her making her to frown was lovely cute.. oh god aryan wrong timing, proposing geet but her words broke his heart, was lovely.. naughty maan trying to pure oil in already aryan's wounded heart, was lovely cute.. geet was worried thinking my maan is angry on her without knowing his naughty mind was lovely.. my maan swimming and geet drooling on him was lovely cute..te way geet running behind my maan thinking he is angry at her , and his ignorance making her to feel sad was lovely cute.. but my naughty maan pushing her inside te pool making her shock and jumping a long with her was lovely cute.. te way geet felt happy to see te trust on her was lovely touch.. naughty maan want to see his geet in wet look making her to blush was lovely cute..te way my maan melting his geet in his love was lovely.. te way my maan asking permission to love her making her heart swell in happiness was lovely touchy.. my maaneet became one, they complete each other, was lovely emotional touching beautiful...te way drowning in their passion was lovely.. te way my maan tieing her mangalsutra and his guilty but geet ki words made him to fall for his angel was lovely emotional touchy..te way my maan ki over flowing passion making his geet to get exhausted, see geet i said once u accept him he wont leave u from te bed for a sec too, he he he , naughty shamless maan...my maaneet ki new life with so much of love was lovely cute touching..i love te update so so much

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

part-24

wow lovely cute touchy touchy update..te way my maan ki naughtyness day by day increasing making his geet to get irritated was lovely ..oh god my maan and his hands not leaving his geet for a sec too was lovely cute.. anni and dadi back and happy to see geet was lovely touchy..yes dadi is te soul reason for geet and my maan who became one soul was lovely.. atlast his buddhu grandson won his wife ki heart was lovely.. te way my maan ki frown wen geet ignoring him and spending time with dadi and anni was lovely cute..at alast he barg into washroom and melting his geet and both drowning in they never ending passion was lovely cute.. oh god wen anni said abt aryan my maan ki face worth watching bechare was lovely cute.. my maan was angry abt aryan but geet was melting him in her style was lovely cute.,.. naughty geet want my maan to love in couch and my naughty no need anything else and started his antics was lovely cute..i love te update so so much..

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

epi

wow lovely epil..te way my maaneet ki family diner and all taunting geet but my maan ki words made all of them to shut they mouth was lovely..te way geet was lost in her thought and worried abt they talks and my maan consoling her, but in his naughty style was lovely cute.. ye tis is my maaneet their love.. te way geet ki pain and all her sadness, was erased by my maan with his pure love for his wife was lovely emotional touch..yes its take two, for making two soul one...te way my maan ki never ending naughtyness and never ending passion for his geet making her to fall for him was lovely cute touchy..i love te epi so much..

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

thank so much for giving a lovely heart touching ff which stay in my heart forever..i will miss my maaneet in tis ff so much.. te way my maaneet life started as two strangers and how my maan left his wife in their sr but now he cant think a sec without his geet, tat is m maaneet love..i love ff so much dear...

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COLOGY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

Awwwhhh! it ended so soon :( but no complaints as you said you did what you were suppose to do... to keep the story up in content.

aaryan and Annie 😲 Tell me..you made them up cos you were under pressure not to disappoint Aaryan right?😆 Chalo as much as i was surprised to see them together i'm relieved to see maneet getting rid of annie and Aaryan :P

I really hope you don't take me in wrong sense if i say you did hurry a bit towards the end...n i felt ITT started of very well n was great till the time maan gets to know the truth but fell a inch down post that part. I'm sry if i was rude but i love your work, handsdown and i couldn't stop myself saying this!

i'm mean na... chalo i'll compensate for this =D

Aash you are an gifted writer. I remember reading parineeta, n it took me sweet little time to get over the effect post reading. Like some who can express hundred emos in few lines you can describe single emotion in hundred lines. Both are in a way personifies ability of writer.It takes great skills to reach out to readers and you literally make us feel em everytime.

Thank you so much giving us some of the bestest maneet stories and looking forward :)

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

This indeed was one of the most beautiful ss i have read...

Beautiful ending...

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xolfiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#708

Loved it Loved it...Aww Maaneet together r so cute n Naughty Maan :P So aryan aniee loved eachother... Maneet forever enjoyed this story thoroughly thank u for it takes two di :*

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nitya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Loved every part. Very beautifully written.
I wish u could have continued for few more parts.
Atleast longer EPILOGUE part pls
Big congrates on completing the ss

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Infinity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#710

part 21
cuteness overloads 😳😆

just can't stop laughing..Maan is such a Nautanki 🤣
gosh he blackmail her 😆😆 but really i luv this part most😆 ..maan is damn cute 😳😆
Geet luv he nautanki deep down.😳
room shifing part is so funny 😆 and geet reaction on maan moving her room 🤣

Beautiful Update aishu...cute sweet funny 😆 and Superbly written 👏👏

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