MG SS: It Takes Two S1 #3 PART-23/24 Pg-103/118 May-9th THE END!

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

i just love the way ur roping up the story line ash

i thought geet give up but u made me wrong and did great job in narrating her feelings as his wife

even as his GF now 😆

was literally grinning laughing loudly while reading that

ohh maan thought she is married and his realisation she is his wife only that was so touchy part actuayyly the most sensitive thing in story line u roped it soo soo well

oh this hubby fell for his wife also i love dadi and aniee for being supportive for maaneet

he confessed but he have to work hard guess he is doing it well also cooking for hiw wife is good thing na i am in soo love with this story

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

awesome update

hahahahhaaa outing ko date bana diya n geet ko pumpkin very nice

lolz the kiss shocked geet out of her senses

n annie rofl i remembered our talks 😆

hahahahahaaa bechari geet so confused with her feelings

n upar se maan wifey n gf kar ke usko aur confuse kar dega

hahahahaaa sab ke samne bol diya pumpkin omg

can actually imagine this scene maan irritating geet n she getting angry

now if aryan comes n geet's mood changes toh maan ka kya hoga??? 😉

par precap main toh pumpkin jealous aur angry hai 😆

waiting for next

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Qurat-ul-Ain

@ainanwer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

superb update with lot of pumpkins

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

ohh what abt this loving guy of geet i hope really hope he wont be hurdle i know because they were married already na

as hubby is in hunger wife in her was sad i love they way u differentiated the two things being his wife as lover of him,

yeah she is feel for him all over again guess with his touches the right she have making her all go crazy

🤣 poor geet this aniee bhi na such a sopilt girl yaar and poor geet sharam se pani pani

wah he took her for date lolzz he is assuming all things sach mai but yeah he have to do this to brake her shield now

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Mishi6226

@Mishi6226

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Awesome update.. ❤️

he named her Pumpkin. it really cute. 😆

loved it..

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

I AM IN LOVE WITH MAAN AND HIS PUMPKIN

GEET WAS SO CUTE WHEN SHE WAS ANGRY

BUT MAAN WAS PROUD TO SEE HER MINGLING EASILY WITH THE OTHERS IN THE PARTY

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

so sweet .. loved the pumpkin part.. 😆

she is fighting herself and he is becoming aware of all his mistakes.

Aryan ka angle samjh nahi aaya mujhe. Does he want to be more than friends?

Annie and her teasing😳

loved the updates.

thanks for updating.

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Noshin_Diya

@Noshin_Diya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

amazing update yaaarrr!!!!!!!! I just loved it Pumpkin Pumpkin 😆😆😆

Aryan kebab ma haddi 😡😡 geet mingled with everyone so easily in the party & maan was feeling guilt recalling whatever he told her that night ... whenever he tease her calling her gf thats so lovely ... geet all blushy blushy😳😳😳 with maan's closeness and angry either she is in dilemma

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

one of the best updates in this story...

pumpkin tooo sweet yaar.. the way maan trying to get closer observing her every single second when he is with her... proves tat his love is divine now though he realized late.. and geet poor girl her hubby is so making her angry calling her pumpkin everywhere